Broken Wings: A comic by Hawktalon, FINISHED! Epilogue UP!

First topic message reminder :

HI THERE! I'm Hawktalon,! You've probably seen me or at least have heard of me! I was here last year, with my other comic, Yin and Yang! Well, guess what! THIS IS THE SEQUEL!

Here are the clans:
It is set in mountianus territory. There are three mountains. The one in the middle is the tallest and it aslo serves as the Gathering place. These are the four clans:
MountainClan: Lives on top of the second tallest mountain.
Tundraclan: Lives below MountainClan's territory on a snowy plain
GlacierClan: Lives on a glacier below the smallest mountain
FrozenClan: Lives on a frozen river next to a waterfall that has been frozen solid for hundreds of years.

And here are the characters in order of appearance:
Stonethunder: Yangspirit and Thunderstripe's son. A white tom with three black stripes on his back and apple-green eyes.
Ariadne: White she cat with wings. She has purple eyes and golden bracelets with a purple diamond on them. Pronounced: Air-ee-AD-nee
Yangspirit: Stonethunder's mom. White she-cat with black head fur and a black spot on her left eye. She wears a yang-charm necklace and had three scars through her left eye.
Stormface: Blue-gray tom with gray and white markings. A helpless flirt.
Raintail: Stormface's sister. Gray she-cat with white markings.
Lavenderstar: MountainClan's leader. Lavender-colored she-cat.
Owlwing: Brown tom with red splotches and green eyes.
Rabbitpaw: Small, light brown she-cat with bright blue eyes. Owlwing's apprentice.
Yinsoul: Yangspirit's sister. Black she-cat with white head fur that covers her left eye. A white spot is on her right eye. She wears a yin-charm necklace.
Neko: Black winged she-cat with gray eyes and a white star on her head and chest.
Toivoa: White winged she-cat with dark and light gray markings. Wears a necklace with a aqua moon-charm on it. Violet eyes.
King Minos: King of the Winged Cats. White tom with black ear-tips, wings, and paws. Blue eyes. Wears a golden crown with a large blue diamond on it. His wings are broken and he can't fly.
Lupa: Silver winged cat with a white muzzle and a crescent moon shape on her head. Light violet eyes.
Queen Aurora: Gray she-cat with white wings and white paws and underbelly. She has green eyes and a golden crown with a large green diamond on it. She also wears a necklace with a green diamond charm.
Skye: Light gray tabby she-cat withh small white wings and clear blue eyes. She died from falling off the clouds.
Mockingbirdkit: Stonethunder and Ariadne's kit. White she-cat with dark grey wings, paws, ear-tips, and tail. One orange and one green eye.
Crowkit: Stonethunder and Ariadne's kit. Black tom with a white tail-tip and one white-tipped wing. Yellow eyes.
Ravenkit: Stonethunder and Ariadne's kit. Black she-cat with blue eyes

Thanks so much!

Don't know Skye? READ THE STORY! On page 10!

On to the comic!

Cover:

You MIGHT wanna pay attention to this. *HINT HINT- The moon!* It might will come up later!

JUST A QUICK NOTE! The HT and clawmarks on each page is my watermark. DON'T STEAL MY ARTS! And I am working on anatomy. I think it's getting better!

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END OF CHAPTER ONE!

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END OF CHAPTER TWO!

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END OF CHAPTER THREE!

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Lyrics (c) Owl City
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So in case y'all don't get it, King Minos put the punishment on Stonethunder because he didn't want to punish his daughter. The punishment in the kingdom is... very harsh. You'll find out what it is soon! And NO it is NOT the guillotine!

END OF CHAPTER SEVEN!
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Back in prison once again Stonethunder. I love how he looks in this page. Especially in the first frame. And i don't know how clouds creak, but they do.
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Sorry 'bout using the same image again.
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Does everyone understand what King Minos is saying? I think you would. They're just formal up there in the kingdom.
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OH NOES! D:
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And Ariadne just happens to walk in...
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*shakes head* tsk tsk.
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NOES! Stonethunder's falling! And those are not REAL wings on the bottom frame. Stonethunder's just wishing he had wings. But he does not.
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Ariadne to the rescue!
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Hooray for fail anatomy and using the same image twice!
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Yay! She caught him! But it's not over yet! As I said, most Ga'Hoolians (like me) would know what is happening to Ariadne right now! D:
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Surprise animation! It loops forever now in case you didn't see it the first time.
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Oh noes! Still falling!
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This is why I asked if people have seen the movie Rio. It was my inspiration for this page! And another Ga'Hoole reference. You need to believe to fly!
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Tried a new style for this page. it'll go back to my normal style on the next page.

END OF CHAPTER EIGHT!

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Minos didn't see that whole scene. They were too far down.
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I edited this one in an online program called Pixlr. It's so shiny!
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Another shiny page! And Minos actually smiled for once!
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Ariadne's angry! D:
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So thaaaattttsss why! But wait! There's more! And I love love love love Ariadne's wings in the first frame!
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This page was inspired by a video game! The first one to guess gets a cookie! HINT: It's a Wii game!
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Sorry 'bout the delay on this one! And now for the moment of truth!
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The moon's back! And I was originally going to invert Minos' colors for his 'dragon/devil' form, but his blue inverted looks ugly, so i just did black.
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And now that story comes into play...
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Yay! Ariadne forgave Minos!

END OF CHAPTER NINE! Chapter 10 will be the LAST CHAPTER! (not counting the epilogue)

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I told you there'd be a BIG surprise! It's a BIG page! OH YEAH! and DON'T ask where Ariadne and Stonethunder went! It'll ALL be explained LATER!
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Sorry about the rushed background in frame 2.
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I tried some new wing poses for this one. and... AWWWW!!!!
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This comic is slowly coming to an end. maybe one or two more pages not counting the epilogue.
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This is the LAST page! Good ending, right?

EPILOGUE:

I wanted to draw Ariadne, but I couldn't fit her. The kit's descriptions are on the character thing above!

NOTE TO READERS!

Thanks so much for reading Broken Wings! I really enjoyed writing and drawing this. And you guys even stayed through multiple deletions! I'll be leaving the Art Fourm for a while while I do my second fan-fic, but this is not the last you'll see of me! I'll be back after my fan-fic with the sequel of Broken Wings! It'll be called The Unforgiven! And if you wanna see me sooner, go on the fan-fic forum! My fic will be called Dream of the Stars! (These will ALL be on the other Warriors forums. So don't look for them here please)

And HEY! Who wants some BLOOPERS? These are some things that were originally going to be in the comic, but I decided not to put them in.

*Ariadne's name was originally Angel, but Angel was too plain for me, and then I saw the movie Inception, so I just took the name Ariadne from there.
*Minos' name was originally Zephyr. I changed it to go along with Ariadne's name.
*Skye wasn't an original character. She was just going to be part of Minos' backstory, and wasn't gonna appear in the comic, but I added her anyway.
*This comic has gone through multiple name changes. It was first Hawk's Stone, then Fallen Angel, and then Broken Wings.
*There was also going to be a whole other plot. Stuff with a meteor and an invisible cat and Stonethunder as an apprentice, but I trashed that idea.

And here's a sneak peek of The Unforgiven! The Cover!



Thanks much and I hope to see all of you again soon! May the odds be ever in your favor.

~Hawktalon,

Fan List:
Honeystar [WindClan Leader]
Lotusflower [WindClan Deputy]
Hazeldust [AwesomeClan Deputy]
Brightstar [RiverClan Leader]
Skystar [SkyClan Leader]
Sagedapple [WindClan Warrior]
SnowLily [IceClan Warrior]
Tigerfern [ThunderClan Warrior]
Thunderfang [SkyClan Warrior]
Dragonclaw [DragonClan/ Administrator]
Skittlestream [SkyClan Warrior]
Fireheart [ThunderClan Deputy]
Cheesestar [AwesomeClan Leader]
Darkfire [ThunderClan Warrior]
Crystaldance [ShadowClan Medicine Cat]
Shadowstar [ShadowClan Leader]
Ninecloud [ThunderClan Warrior]
Shuriken [IceClan Leader]
Icewing [IceClan Warrior]
Monkeystar [ThunderClan Leader]
Swiftstep [WindClan Warrior]
Tobi [ShadowClan Warrior]
Stormclaw [RiverClan Warrior]
Maplestream [RiverClan Warrior]
Iceshadow [Global Moderator]
Sunfall [AwesomeClan Warrior]
Dragonfang [WindClan Warrior]
DragonMeteor [Loner]
Silverrain [Loner]
Blizzard [Global Moderator]
Goldenstream [Loner]
Blossomheart [AwesomeClan Warrior]
Xenialhaze [FireClan Warrior]
Silverbreeze [FireClan Warrior]
Featherpelt [SkyClan Warrior]
Snowswirl66 [WindClan Warrior]
Desertclaw [IceClan Warrior]
Pain [IceClan Warrior]
Shuriken [IceClan Leader]
<3Swiftnose<3 [AwesomeClan Warrior]
Silver [WindClan Warrior]
Rainfeather [SkyClan Deputy]
Leopardfire [FireClan Warrior]
Coyoteheart [WindClan Warrior]
-Applefur- [WindClan Warrior]
Moon [WindClan Warrior]
Icetail [SkyClan Warrior]
Nightwhisper [WindClan Warrior]
Stareye [Global Moderator]
Willowstream [WindClan]
Icekit [RiverClan Kit]
Blizzardstorm [SkyClan Warrior]

5 stars!!!!!!!!!

Awesome! I loved your comic and it was by far the best fan-fic comic I've read. Thanks for giving me a great read! You are brilliant [/quote]

thanks so much!

So, I know I'm asking a lot from you, but, when do you suppose you'll be posting a character profile for yourself [I'd like see Hawktalon in an RPG or Fan-fic I have in mind]?

Honeytongue wrote:So, I know I'm asking a lot from you, but, when do you suppose you'll be posting a character profile for yourself [I'd like see Hawktalon in an RPG or Fan-fic I have in mind]?

I will soon. Maybe later today.

That's great. Hey, on the Official Forum, have you ever met *Sparrow? She has her own comic called A Rocky Foundation~ what if Brambleclaw wasn't born? Her style is different from what you do [she mostly does her's in black and white (like reading from a newspaper! )], but the characters she created [Rocky, Devin, Nadia, Niko and Ryn] are awesome [Rocky reminds me of myself...sorta]! They've been sent by StarClan to go to the forest and [kind of] help Firestar save it from Twolegs. Highly recommend reading it, totally Hilarious!

Maybe we should invite *Sparrow to this Forum as well, then two of my favourite Warrior-Fan-Fic Artists would be here!

invite her then!!! i want a chance for a mate

He's only a little bit off topic, but anyways, sure I'll go invite her here [so you can read her comic]!

Honeytongue wrote:He's only a little bit off topic, but anyways, sure I'll go invite her here [so you can read her comic]!

Yay

I'm all for it! Thanks Honeytongue (:

OK I just replied an invitation to Sparrow! Hope she gives us an answer soon!

Honeytongue wrote:OK I just replied an invitation to Sparrow! Hope she gives us an answer soon!

Alright!!!


Big hi to Hawktalon btw

Tobi- Thanks, You're now on the list. Btw, why did you decide to call yourself Tobi [the name, and the fact your a dog, reminds me of 'Toby' from The Great Mouse Detective]?

Add me to the Fan List??

Stormclaw- Certainly.

Page 86 is UP on the other forum! Honey will probably post it here too soon!

Hey welcome back Hawtalon [a lot has happened for WindClan today]! I'll get started right now!

Wow, it is shiny [more like glowing]!

That's an amazing piece of art and literature Hawktalon.

Finally. Something good enough to allow me to use the new drooling smiley

Awesome! Cant wait 4 the next one!like the art!

Thanks everyone!

Great to hear that Maplestream, you are now on the list.

yay! I really enjoyed it.

Maplestream wrote:yay! I really enjoyed it.

Thanks so much!

Whoa!! That was awesome!! I regret not looking at this sooner...
I once did a comic for a school project XD It wasnt as colorful as this, though.