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Broken Wings: A comic by Hawktalon!
I have been given both the pleasure, honour and permission by Hawktalon [the author/illustrator] to present to you Broken Wings. A truly wonderful Warrior-based Fan-fic. Hope you enjoy this as much as I do.- Honeytongue.
HI THERE! I'm Hawktalon,! You've probably seen me or at least have heard of me! I was here last year, with my other comic, Yin and Yang! Well, guess what! THIS IS THE SEQUEL!
Here are the clans:
It is set in mountianus territory. There are three mountains. The one in the middle is the tallest and it aslo serves as the Gathering place. These are the four clans:
MountainClan: Lives on top of the second tallest mountain.
Tundraclan: Lives below MountainClan's territory on a snowy plain
GlacierClan: Lives on a glacier below the smallest mountain
FrozenClan: Lives on a frozen river next to a waterfall that has been frozen solid for hundreds of years.
And here are the characters in order of appearance:
Stonethunder: Yangspirit and Thunderstripe's son. A white tom with three black stripes on his back and apple-green eyes.
Ariadne: White she cat with wings. She has purple eyes and golden bracelets with a purple diamond on them. Pronounced: Air-ee-AD-nee
Yangspirit: Stonethunder's mom. White she-cat with black head fur and a black spot on her left eye. She wears a yang-charm necklace and had three scars through her left eye.
Stormface: Blue-gray tom with gray and white markings. A helpless flirt.
Raintail: Stormface's sister. Gray she-cat with white markings.
Lavenderstar: MountainClan's leader. Lavender-colored she-cat.
Owlwing: Brown tom with red splotches and green eyes.
Rabbitpaw: Small, light brown she-cat with bright blue eyes. Owlwing's apprentice.
Yinsoul: Yangspirit's sister. Black she-cat with white head fur that covers her left eye. A white spot is on her right eye. She wears a yin-charm necklace.
Neko: Black winged she-cat with gray eyes and a white star on her head and chest.
Toivoa: White winged she-cat with dark and light gray markings. Wears a necklace with a aqua moon-charm on it. Violet eyes.
King Minos: King of the Winged Cats. White tom with black ear-tips, wings, and paws. Blue eyes. Wears a golden crown with a large blue diamond on it. His wings are broken and he can't fly.
Lupa: Silver winged cat with a white muzzle and a crescent moon shape on her head. Light violet eyes.
Queen Aurora: Gray she-cat with white wings and white paws and underbelly. She has green eyes and a golden crown with a large green diamond on it. She also wears a necklace with a green diamond charm.
Thanks so much!
On to the comic!
Cover:
You MIGHT wanna pay attention to this. *HINT HINT- The moon!* Itmight will come up later!
JUST A QUICK NOTE! The HT and clawmarks on each page is my watermark. DON'T STEAL MY ARTS! And I am working on anatomy. I think it's getting better!
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END OF CHAPTER ONE!
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Page 26
END OF CHAPTER TWO!
Page 27 (This is a flashback, by the way)
Page 28
Page 29
Page 30 MINOR BLOOD WARNING!
Page 31
END OF CHAPTER THREE!
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Page 45
Lyrics (c) Owl City
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So in case y'all don't get it, King Minos put the punishment on Stonethunder because he didn't want to punish his daughter. The punishment in the kingdom is... very harsh. You'll find out what it is soon! And NO it is NOT the guillotine!
END OF CHAPTER SEVEN!
Page 71
Back in prison once again Stonethunder. I love how he looks in this page. Especially in the first frame. And i don't know how clouds creak, but they do.
Page 72
Sorry 'bout using the same image again.
Page 73
Does everyone understand what King Minos is saying? I think you would. They're just formal up there in the kingdom.
Page 74
OH NOES! D:
Page 75
And Ariadne just happens to walk in...
Page 76
*shakes head* tsk tsk.
Page 77
NOES! Stonethunder's falling! And those are not REAL wings on the bottom frame. Stonethunder's just wishing he had wings. But he does not.
Page 78
Ariadne to the rescue!
Page 79
Hooray for fail anatomy and using the same image twice!
Page 80
Yay! She caught him! But it's not over yet! As I said, most Ga'Hoolians (like me) would know what is happening to Ariadne right now! D:
Page 81
Surprise animation! It loops forever now in case you didn't see it the first time.
Page 82
Oh noes! Still falling!
Page 83
This is why I asked if people have seen the movie Rio. It was my inspiration for this page! And another Ga'Hoole reference. You need to believe to fly!
Page 84
Tried a new style for this page. it'll go back to my normal style on the next page.
END OF CHAPTER EIGHT!
Page 85
Minos didn't see that whole scene. They were too far down.
Page 86
I edited this one in an online program called Pixlr. It's so shiny!
Page 87
Another shiny page! And Minos actually smiled for once!
Page 88
Ariadne's angry! D:
Fan List:
Honeystar [WindClan Leader]
Lotusflower [WindClan Deputy]
Hazeldust [AwesomeClan Deputy]
Brightstar [RiverClan Leader]
Dreamdust [SkyClan Deputy]
Sagedapple [WindClan Warrior]
SnowLily [IceClan Warrior]
Tigerfern [ThunderClan Warrior]
Thunderfang [SkyClan Warrior]
Dragonclaw [DragonClan/ Administrator]
Silverstar [SkyClan Leader]
Fireheart [ThunderClan Deputy]
Cheesestar [AwesomeClan Leader]
Darkfire [ThunderClan Warrior]
Crystaldance [ShadowClan Medicine Cat]
Shadowstorm [ShadowClan Deputy]
Ninecloud [ThunderClan Warrior]
Shuriken [IceClan Leader]
Icewing [IceClan Warrior]
Monkeystar [ThunderClan Leader]
Swiftstep [WindClan Warrior]
Tobi [ShadowClan Warrior]
Stormclaw [RiverClan Warrior]
Maplestream [RiverClan Warrior]
Icestar [ShadowClan Leader]
Sunfall [AwesomeClan Warrior]
Dragonfang [Loner]
DragonMeteor [Loner]
Silverrain [Loner]
Blizzard [Tiger/Loner]
Goldenstream [Loner]
Blossomheart [AwesomeClan Warrior]
Xenialhaze [WindClan Warrior]
Silverbreeze [RiverClan Warrior]
Featherpelt [AwesomeClan Warrior]
HI THERE! I'm Hawktalon,! You've probably seen me or at least have heard of me! I was here last year, with my other comic, Yin and Yang! Well, guess what! THIS IS THE SEQUEL!
Here are the clans:
It is set in mountianus territory. There are three mountains. The one in the middle is the tallest and it aslo serves as the Gathering place. These are the four clans:
MountainClan: Lives on top of the second tallest mountain.
Tundraclan: Lives below MountainClan's territory on a snowy plain
GlacierClan: Lives on a glacier below the smallest mountain
FrozenClan: Lives on a frozen river next to a waterfall that has been frozen solid for hundreds of years.
And here are the characters in order of appearance:
Stonethunder: Yangspirit and Thunderstripe's son. A white tom with three black stripes on his back and apple-green eyes.
Ariadne: White she cat with wings. She has purple eyes and golden bracelets with a purple diamond on them. Pronounced: Air-ee-AD-nee
Yangspirit: Stonethunder's mom. White she-cat with black head fur and a black spot on her left eye. She wears a yang-charm necklace and had three scars through her left eye.
Stormface: Blue-gray tom with gray and white markings. A helpless flirt.
Raintail: Stormface's sister. Gray she-cat with white markings.
Lavenderstar: MountainClan's leader. Lavender-colored she-cat.
Owlwing: Brown tom with red splotches and green eyes.
Rabbitpaw: Small, light brown she-cat with bright blue eyes. Owlwing's apprentice.
Yinsoul: Yangspirit's sister. Black she-cat with white head fur that covers her left eye. A white spot is on her right eye. She wears a yin-charm necklace.
Neko: Black winged she-cat with gray eyes and a white star on her head and chest.
Toivoa: White winged she-cat with dark and light gray markings. Wears a necklace with a aqua moon-charm on it. Violet eyes.
King Minos: King of the Winged Cats. White tom with black ear-tips, wings, and paws. Blue eyes. Wears a golden crown with a large blue diamond on it. His wings are broken and he can't fly.
Lupa: Silver winged cat with a white muzzle and a crescent moon shape on her head. Light violet eyes.
Queen Aurora: Gray she-cat with white wings and white paws and underbelly. She has green eyes and a golden crown with a large green diamond on it. She also wears a necklace with a green diamond charm.
Thanks so much!
On to the comic!
Cover:
You MIGHT wanna pay attention to this. *HINT HINT- The moon!* It
JUST A QUICK NOTE! The HT and clawmarks on each page is my watermark. DON'T STEAL MY ARTS! And I am working on anatomy. I think it's getting better!
Page 1
Page 2
Page 3
Page 4
Page 5
Page 6
Page 7
Page 8
Page 9
Page 10
Page 11
Page 12
Page 13
Page 14
Page 15
END OF CHAPTER ONE!
Page 16
Page 17
Page 18
Page 19
Page 20
Page 21
Page 22
Page 23
Page 24
Page 25
Page 26
END OF CHAPTER TWO!
Page 27 (This is a flashback, by the way)
Page 28
Page 29
Page 30 MINOR BLOOD WARNING!
Page 31
END OF CHAPTER THREE!
Page 32
Page 33
Page 34
Page 35
Page 36
Page 37
Page 38
Page 39
Page 40
Page 41
Page 42
Page 43
Page 44
Page 45
Lyrics (c) Owl City
Page 46
Page 47
Page 48
Page 49
Page 50
Page 51
Page 52
Page 53
Page 54
Page 55
Page 56
Page 57
Page 58
Page 59
Page 60
Page 61
Page 62
Page 63
Page 64
Page 65
Page 66
Page 67
Page 68
Page 69
Page 70
So in case y'all don't get it, King Minos put the punishment on Stonethunder because he didn't want to punish his daughter. The punishment in the kingdom is... very harsh. You'll find out what it is soon! And NO it is NOT the guillotine!
END OF CHAPTER SEVEN!
Page 71
Back in prison once again Stonethunder. I love how he looks in this page. Especially in the first frame. And i don't know how clouds creak, but they do.
Page 72
Sorry 'bout using the same image again.
Page 73
Does everyone understand what King Minos is saying? I think you would. They're just formal up there in the kingdom.
Page 74
OH NOES! D:
Page 75
And Ariadne just happens to walk in...
Page 76
*shakes head* tsk tsk.
Page 77
NOES! Stonethunder's falling! And those are not REAL wings on the bottom frame. Stonethunder's just wishing he had wings. But he does not.
Page 78
Ariadne to the rescue!
Page 79
Hooray for fail anatomy and using the same image twice!
Page 80
Yay! She caught him! But it's not over yet! As I said, most Ga'Hoolians (like me) would know what is happening to Ariadne right now! D:
Page 81
Surprise animation! It loops forever now in case you didn't see it the first time.
Page 82
Oh noes! Still falling!
Page 83
This is why I asked if people have seen the movie Rio. It was my inspiration for this page! And another Ga'Hoole reference. You need to believe to fly!
Page 84
Tried a new style for this page. it'll go back to my normal style on the next page.
END OF CHAPTER EIGHT!
Page 85
Minos didn't see that whole scene. They were too far down.
Page 86
I edited this one in an online program called Pixlr. It's so shiny!
Page 87
Another shiny page! And Minos actually smiled for once!
Page 88
Ariadne's angry! D:
Fan List:
Honeystar [WindClan Leader]
Lotusflower [WindClan Deputy]
Hazeldust [AwesomeClan Deputy]
Brightstar [RiverClan Leader]
Dreamdust [SkyClan Deputy]
Sagedapple [WindClan Warrior]
SnowLily [IceClan Warrior]
Tigerfern [ThunderClan Warrior]
Thunderfang [SkyClan Warrior]
Dragonclaw [DragonClan/ Administrator]
Silverstar [SkyClan Leader]
Fireheart [ThunderClan Deputy]
Cheesestar [AwesomeClan Leader]
Darkfire [ThunderClan Warrior]
Crystaldance [ShadowClan Medicine Cat]
Shadowstorm [ShadowClan Deputy]
Ninecloud [ThunderClan Warrior]
Shuriken [IceClan Leader]
Icewing [IceClan Warrior]
Monkeystar [ThunderClan Leader]
Swiftstep [WindClan Warrior]
Tobi [ShadowClan Warrior]
Stormclaw [RiverClan Warrior]
Maplestream [RiverClan Warrior]
Icestar [ShadowClan Leader]
Sunfall [AwesomeClan Warrior]
Dragonfang [Loner]
DragonMeteor [Loner]
Silverrain [Loner]
Blizzard [Tiger/Loner]
Goldenstream [Loner]
Blossomheart [AwesomeClan Warrior]
Xenialhaze [WindClan Warrior]
Silverbreeze [RiverClan Warrior]
Featherpelt [AwesomeClan Warrior]
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The characters sound really interesting! When's there going to be more?
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Hazeldust- right Now!
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Pg 34 done last night. Only 50-52 more to go!
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I have to owe Hawktalon and her comic for making me a huge fan of Owl City [or at least become more aware of their other songs besides Fireflies]!
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That was awesome and the best.
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Lotus-star: I knew you'd love it too. Can't wait to show more!
Brightstar- Thanks I'll tell Hawktalon you said that.
Watershred- Ditto.
Brightstar- Thanks I'll tell Hawktalon you said that.
Watershred- Ditto.
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Ci, Mucho More!
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Wow, it was really good! Now I'm thinking Harry Potter should've had some flying cats...
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Hazeldust- Yeah that would have been totally awesome!
Tigerfern- LOL
Here's some more now.
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Here's some more now.
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More more more more more please this is so good.
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yes yes yes yes yes of course I will, and it is Getting Better all the time!
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Oh, it's getting better!
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More updated pages here (getting closer now).
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Oh-no! Poor Stonethunder. Suspense building up now.
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Finally finished [for now]! I've made a Fan List for everyone who loves this comic (to show Hawktalon). Let me know if you want to have your name on the list!
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Page 83, is so far the best!! Wouldn't you agree?
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hahaha cool .
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I feel sorry for those two.
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