Broken Wings: A comic by Hawktalon!

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I have been given both the pleasure, honour and permission by Hawktalon [the author/illustrator] to present to you Broken Wings. A truly wonderful Warrior-based Fan-fic. Hope you enjoy this as much as I do.- Honeytongue.

HI THERE! I'm Hawktalon,! You've probably seen me or at least have heard of me! I was here last year, with my other comic, Yin and Yang! Well, guess what! THIS IS THE SEQUEL!

Here are the clans:
It is set in mountianus territory. There are three mountains. The one in the middle is the tallest and it aslo serves as the Gathering place. These are the four clans:
MountainClan: Lives on top of the second tallest mountain.
Tundraclan: Lives below MountainClan's territory on a snowy plain
GlacierClan: Lives on a glacier below the smallest mountain
FrozenClan: Lives on a frozen river next to a waterfall that has been frozen solid for hundreds of years.

And here are the characters in order of appearance:
Stonethunder: Yangspirit and Thunderstripe's son. A white tom with three black stripes on his back and apple-green eyes.
Ariadne: White she cat with wings. She has purple eyes and golden bracelets with a purple diamond on them. Pronounced: Air-ee-AD-nee
Yangspirit: Stonethunder's mom. White she-cat with black head fur and a black spot on her left eye. She wears a yang-charm necklace and had three scars through her left eye.
Stormface: Blue-gray tom with gray and white markings. A helpless flirt.
Raintail: Stormface's sister. Gray she-cat with white markings.
Lavenderstar: MountainClan's leader. Lavender-colored she-cat.
Owlwing: Brown tom with red splotches and green eyes.
Rabbitpaw: Small, light brown she-cat with bright blue eyes. Owlwing's apprentice.
Yinsoul: Yangspirit's sister. Black she-cat with white head fur that covers her left eye. A white spot is on her right eye. She wears a yin-charm necklace.
Neko: Black winged she-cat with gray eyes and a white star on her head and chest.
Toivoa: White winged she-cat with dark and light gray markings. Wears a necklace with a aqua moon-charm on it. Violet eyes.
King Minos: King of the Winged Cats. White tom with black ear-tips, wings, and paws. Blue eyes. Wears a golden crown with a large blue diamond on it. His wings are broken and he can't fly.
Lupa: Silver winged cat with a white muzzle and a crescent moon shape on her head. Light violet eyes.
Queen Aurora: Gray she-cat with white wings and white paws and underbelly. She has green eyes and a golden crown with a large green diamond on it. She also wears a necklace with a green diamond charm.

Thanks so much!

On to the comic!

Cover:

You MIGHT wanna pay attention to this. *HINT HINT- The moon!* It might will come up later!

JUST A QUICK NOTE! The HT and clawmarks on each page is my watermark. DON'T STEAL MY ARTS! And I am working on anatomy. I think it's getting better!

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END OF CHAPTER ONE!

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END OF CHAPTER TWO!

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Page 30 MINOR BLOOD WARNING!

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END OF CHAPTER THREE!

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Lyrics (c) Owl City
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So in case y'all don't get it, King Minos put the punishment on Stonethunder because he didn't want to punish his daughter. The punishment in the kingdom is... very harsh. You'll find out what it is soon! And NO it is NOT the guillotine!

END OF CHAPTER SEVEN!
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Back in prison once again Stonethunder. I love how he looks in this page. Especially in the first frame. And i don't know how clouds creak, but they do.
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Sorry 'bout using the same image again.
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Does everyone understand what King Minos is saying? I think you would. They're just formal up there in the kingdom.
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OH NOES! D:
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And Ariadne just happens to walk in...
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*shakes head* tsk tsk.
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NOES! Stonethunder's falling! And those are not REAL wings on the bottom frame. Stonethunder's just wishing he had wings. But he does not.
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Ariadne to the rescue!
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Hooray for fail anatomy and using the same image twice!
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Yay! She caught him! But it's not over yet! As I said, most Ga'Hoolians (like me) would know what is happening to Ariadne right now! D:
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Surprise animation! It loops forever now in case you didn't see it the first time.
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Oh noes! Still falling!
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This is why I asked if people have seen the movie Rio. It was my inspiration for this page! And another Ga'Hoole reference. You need to believe to fly!
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Tried a new style for this page. it'll go back to my normal style on the next page.

END OF CHAPTER EIGHT!

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Minos didn't see that whole scene. They were too far down.
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I edited this one in an online program called Pixlr. It's so shiny!
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Another shiny page! And Minos actually smiled for once!
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Ariadne's angry! D:

Fan List:
Honeystar [WindClan Leader]
Lotusflower [WindClan Deputy]
Hazeldust [AwesomeClan Deputy]
Brightstar [RiverClan Leader]
Dreamdust [SkyClan Deputy]
Sagedapple [WindClan Warrior]
SnowLily [IceClan Warrior]
Tigerfern [ThunderClan Warrior]
Thunderfang [SkyClan Warrior]
Dragonclaw [DragonClan/ Administrator]
Silverstar [SkyClan Leader]
Fireheart [ThunderClan Deputy]
Cheesestar [AwesomeClan Leader]
Darkfire [ThunderClan Warrior]
Crystaldance [ShadowClan Medicine Cat]
Shadowstorm [ShadowClan Deputy]
Ninecloud [ThunderClan Warrior]
Shuriken [IceClan Leader]
Icewing [IceClan Warrior]
Monkeystar [ThunderClan Leader]
Swiftstep [WindClan Warrior]
Tobi [ShadowClan Warrior]
Stormclaw [RiverClan Warrior]
Maplestream [RiverClan Warrior]
Icestar [ShadowClan Leader]
Sunfall [AwesomeClan Warrior]
Dragonfang [Loner]
DragonMeteor [Loner]
Silverrain [Loner]
Blizzard [Tiger/Loner]
Goldenstream [Loner]
Blossomheart [AwesomeClan Warrior]
Xenialhaze [WindClan Warrior]
Silverbreeze [RiverClan Warrior]
Featherpelt [AwesomeClan Warrior]

Loved it!

Glad you loved it Thunderfang (one more fan for the list)!

Hopefully tonight, Hawktalon will reveal her new page she's making.

Omg I LOVE IT!!! I'ma fan!!! LOVES IT!

It's really good. I LIKE IT

Silverstar and Fireheart- Awesome, Glad to hear that! More Fans.

Yeah, hope to see more later on.

whoa cool! liked the animation. i've always liked illustrated books better than written ones. i didn't let go of picture books until grade 4. i still dislike reading. that's why i like graphic novels! great story. you can add me to the list!

oh and i gave you a rep honeytongue.

Thanks Cheesestar, though I don't deserve it as much as Hawktalon. I'll accept anways as the Presenter.

i like the girl! smexy

Thanks Darkfire! Another fan eh? You remind me of Stormface in this comic

"Hey you!"
"Me?"
"You free tonight?"
"Talk to the tail Buddy."
" "

LOL

I liked the picture that moved and I saw the movie rio it was cute and that was sweet.

Awesome. Thanks again Watershred. Hawktalon has been busy but she promises to work on the new page SO MUCH and set up. looking forward to that.

Hey, it's really interesting! Even the last bit...though I usually cringe at scenes like that.

One thing-I think that if I was ever to be falling to my death through the sky, I would be screaming...not talking like I was sittin gon a chair on solid land.

That's why I want to go bungee jumping-to see if I can actually keep my wits while falling.

LOL! Well you certainly have more guts than I do. I'm not sure if I could actually Bungee Jump [maybe]. I've heard of a Wedding party [Bride, Groom, Maids-of-honour, etc] going Bungee jumping in their expensive suits/ dresses! Weird or What? LOL again.
Glad you're enjoying this Hazeldust.

I hope you can invite Hawktalon here! I hope to meet her! And thanks for giving us a great read Honeytongue ^.^

haha, yeah. That would be COOL.

Crystaldance and Brightstar- Thanks! I originally had invited her to come to our forum to post the comic herself. Instead she offered me to post it here (as long as I gave her the credit). I think she might be coming here to see us! And I've been posting and updating our Fan List onto a topic reply for her comic in the Official Forum. She has seen it this morning, and said "Awesome!"
Happy to share this Marvelous Masterpiece with all of you! ^.^

If you hadn't already, add me to the list! ^-^ I hope she does join us and hope to see more when it comes. Thanks Honeytongue for posting it to share.

Fireheart- Already added, Hope she does too, and Your welcome.