Dancing Flames

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The greenleaf is harsh, and water is quickly disappearing. Will ThunderClan be able to make it in this hot and humid season?

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The air was heavy and weighed down on Ivyshine's fur, making it hard to focus on her prey. She was dehydrated and this made her extremely tired. The fat rabbit she was stalking was tired too, which made it slightly easier, but the dry grass under her paws was hot and crackly, so she had to focus on being stealthy. Wiggling her haunches, she pounced clumsily and landed on the rabbit. She killed it swiftly, and the rush at actually catching something in a time when it was nearly impossible revived her for a moment, then she remembered that this would go straight to the elders, who seemed to suddenly need to scarf down all the food that there was in the ThunderClan camp. She scowled and dragged the heavy, limp body of the furry rabbit back to camp. That night, she slept in unease, the sharp pangs of hunger waking her in the middle of terrifying dreams of fire that danced, of a forest burnt to ashes.

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