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Post by SkyStar December 19th 2011, 10:46

Cats in my story

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Prologue
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Chapter 1
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Chapter 2
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Chapter 3
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Chapter 4
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Chapter 5
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Post by Scarlett December 19th 2011, 11:47

Lol before I get into my actual review I love that you went through the effort to list all the clans members and their ranks. The descriptions are also great. The only thing is it makes this all very long. My tip is to put break the whole thing into spoilers. Then the page isn't huge and you still get to have all this information in there. Also, I;m not sure if yu have seen my advice for the other members fan-fics, but I suggest that when you do them you post each chapeter in a spoiler in order in the topic starting post as well as posting it as a regular reply to the topic. This way when you have this up it will all be nice and well organized in the first post of the topic. This also allows members to find it easily. By posting it as a regular reply to the forum as well, you ensure that more members see it and it brings your topic back up to the top ten list. A post that contains both the next chapter and a message that says the next chapter is up on the first topic post is less likely to be viewed as spam.

Those are my tips that I have before I actually go and read the chapter but so far it's looking very nice. I'll edit this more later but I hope this has provided you with some ideas. Wink


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Post by Guest December 19th 2011, 13:28

This is really good! I haven`t had time to read it all but it`s good so far! I love it! I think I understand the prophecy.
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Post by SkyStar December 19th 2011, 14:46

Chapter four is up

I know that It Is really quick that I get these up but I did 7 chapters last night and I want to put them up.
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Post by Guest December 19th 2011, 15:08

Wow! This is really good!
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Post by SkyStar December 19th 2011, 15:15

Thank you I hoped you would like it.
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Post by Guest December 19th 2011, 15:18

I don`t like it.... I LOVE it!
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Post by SkyStar December 20th 2011, 09:20

Chapter 5 up

I hope you like this one.
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Post by Caraway December 20th 2011, 16:20

can one of the admins move this topic to warriors' resort? it may get more reviews and views in general. ^^ it's a good story, it deserves it!
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Post by SkyStar December 21st 2011, 09:29

Thank you CheeseStar
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Post by Scarlett December 21st 2011, 13:25

Topic Moved to the Writer's Club
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Post by Guest December 21st 2011, 19:03

I love it! Very Happy
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Post by Frost December 21st 2011, 22:26

Good job Skystar! Wink Your writing is quite good!
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Post by SkyStar December 22nd 2011, 10:28

Thank you Ice claw I am working on the 6th chapter write now.
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