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An old Fanfic! Chapter 6 up!
Ok, Here's an old Fanfic, it doesn't really have a title either...but after some editing I think its ready to be posted here! ;D
Plot:
Chapter 1: The Begining of the End
Chapter 2: Race to the Station
Chapter 3: Meeting Leon
Chapter 4: Life or Death, Fight or Flee
Chapter 5: Breaking through the fog
Chapter 6: As days go on, cats can change
PLEASE EXSCUE THE BAD WRITING! ITS A PRETTY OLD FANFIC! DX
Plot:
- Spoiler:
- Exactly seven years ago, a terrible virus attacked the clans. One by one, cats died, and clans vanished. But soon, the living cats began to notice something so horrifying, they couldn't even realized what was happening before they to, became infected and died. The thing was, once most cats died.....they didn't stay dead. The Virus re-animated they're bodies so the zombies only had the most basic of needs....the need to feed. Soon, the suriving cats forumed into more stable groups, they became more human like to defeat the 'Walking Dead'. Cats became more interested with defating the dead and soon all of the clan traditions died off...leaving the more modern cats. But a more recent out break terrified the cats as more cats became infected. Soon, a whole 'city' was whiped out and three cats named Leon, Claire, and James had to battle they're way out of they're old home. But..who will live and who will die?
Chapter 1: The Begining of the End
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- "Oh, is it rolling Eddie??OH!" the news cast cat straighend up and purred "Good morning Clan-State! Today's high will be a breezey 92 degree's but later on today we'll feel a chilly cold front! And good news for all those Clan-State Cops!" Claire and James turned back to the T.V they're ears pricked in interest. Then James shot her an annoyed glance before mewing "Oh well, see'ya later Claire!" Then James bolted out the door and ran to his job, as a Clan-State cop. Claire sighed and mewed "Looks like I better get dinner going!" then she headed to her fridge, and swung open the fridge door. "Ahhhh, perfect! Sushi for dinner!!!" Claire mewed brightly and grabbed the small fish bowl that contained four or five fishies. Claire placed the bowl on the small roller every Clan-State cat owned, and then she rolled the bowl over to the small cat stove. "Don't worry little fishies! I'm sorry 'bout this, no hard feelings?" Then she grabbed a strainer with her paw and shuffled the bowl closer to her. Then she pawed the the strainer into the sink and dropped the bowl above it. Claire watched as the water drained out of the fish bowl while the fishies flopped around dying. "Awww, I'm so sorry!" she cried before she clawed a small fishie out of the sink and used the Paw slicer 2000 to clean the dead little fishie. Then as she was putting the fishie on the plate next to her, the ground began to shake. "W-what the name in mouse kisser is going on?!" Claire gasped and she dropped the fishie and ran to the living room's window. Claire stared horrified as the ground groaned and spilt. "Oh-no! Oh-no! Oh-" Claire gasped as a ball of glittering white exploded in mid air after hovering and Claire was thrown back into her living room. A stinging pain forced Claire to open her eyes, then she let out horrified gasp, the whole front part of her was missing or hanging in blackend chunks. "No way...N-no way....This can't be happening!" Claire gasped, her eyes widening in horror as she saw the true extent of the bomb. Then Claire pushed herself up into a hay laying half sitting postion, and then she murmured terrified "Oh..my...God...We've been left to die with the Bio-terrors!"
Chapter 2: Race to the Station
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- Claire began to feel hot wet tears streaming down her face, she didn't want any of this to happen, she just wished she died in the explosion. "All right, get it together, Claire! You need to get to your brother, he'll know all the escape routes through the city!" Claire murmured to herself, shoving herself to her paws, letting a smalll muffled scream of pain. Claire looked at her leg, bloodied and ripped up. I guess I'm getting out alone! Claire thought, before gently pushing herself to her paws and stumbled to the kichten, and grabbing a small knife and her phone, praying James was unhurt and he still had his phone. "All right! You want me dead?! Well, lets see if you can kill me!" Claire hissed before she quietly ran out of her kichten, then she reached the the gap in her house and took a deep breath. "Ok, here I'm ready to die!" Claire mewed angrily. Then Claire set out into the empty streets. A Black foggy, smelly cloud hung over the skies, blocking out any light. Claire began to run through the empty streets, her fur began to bristle in fear. "Urrrghhhhhh" something or someone groaned. Claire ran by the dying Mr. Jenkins, knowing what was happening to him. Tears began to make they're way to Claire's eyes as she ran, Mr.Jenkins was still kinda alive and Claire was leaving him to die! Claire just shook her head and began to run faster. Suddenly a blinding flash had leaped in front of Claire, blocking her way. It was some sort of cat, but its brain was exposed and it had no eyes, it also had long razor sharp teeth and sharp pointy claws. Claire screamed in fear, and chunked her knife at the being, the creature dodged it and slunk toward Claire. Suddenly a black blurrr rammed into the creature, knocking it to the ground. The black tom cat yanked out a small bag and shuffled through it quickly while the monster struggled, then he found a long nettle and jammed into the monster's neck. It screamed and screamed till its head lolled and hit the ground, dead. Claire stared horrifed at the sight, then the black tom cat leaped off of the monster and headed back to Claire. The Black tom cat held her knife and when he got close enough to CLaire, he smiled and mewed "This must be your's!" he held the knife to Claire and Claire after a moment, Claire reached over and grabbed her knife. "Hehe, you must be wondering who I am." he chuckled nervously then smiled friendly to Claire and mewed "My name is Jack Krauser, you can call me Krauser!" Claire gripped her knife tighter and then mewed softly "Thank you, and my name is CLaire Redfield." Kauser nodded and then cocked his head and then asked "Now, Claire, why on earth are you out alone? You know that risk of getting infected!" Claire's tail brushed out and she snapped "Well, why are you out alone?! Well, I need to get to the Police Station." Krauser smiled and laughed "Temper, Temper! But the Police will be no help at this moment, they're all dispached for now!" Claire just snorted, but she liked Krauser, he was nice and funny, plus a good fighter. "Well, my brother works there, and I need to get to him!" Claire mewed then saw Krauser shifting on his paws, his eyes filled with sadness that his new friend was already leaving so soon, Claire insanitly felt bad for Krauser. "Well, are you coming?" Claire asked, pretending to be annoyed. Krauser smiled and mewed "Sure, after all, how are you going to get through this infected city?!" Claire just shook her head and held her knife closer and the two set off into the dark city. They didn't speak to eachother, they we're lost in thoughts untill a "URRGGHHHH!!!!" interupted they're thoughts. Claire whipped around to find another cat limping toward them, it was a kitten. "Oh my god!" Claire gasped, and started toward the kitten but Krauser put his paw in front of her and mewed coldly to the kitten, "Are you infected?" the kitten looked up terrified and shook his head and Claire ran toward the kitten, and wrapped her paws around his tiny body. Then she stood back up and she nodded to Krauser, and they took off, the young kitten clinging to Claire. Soon the Police Station came into view and Claire smiled in relief. The three padded up to the station and entered the building. As Claire led the way, the kitten clung to her. "Get Down!" A strong voice commanded Claire and the others to duck down. BANG!BANG! BANG! three gunshots rang in the air. Claire clutched the kitten to her and stood up and saw a brown tabby tom with lighter fleckers and icey blue eyes.
Chapter 3: Meeting Leon
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Claire flashed a glance at Krauser who was already making his way toward Leon. "Who......are you?" she asked and then tom flipped sone hair out of his face and mewed "Leon Kennedy, Special agent from the white house, sent here to finish the virus off." "Well, I'm Jack Krauser, I was sent from the white house tooo!!!" Krauser beamed and Claire picked Kitten up, and he sqeaked "What happens now?" and Claire sighed holding him closer before she admitted "I'm not really from here, I came to stay with my brother after I heard about that 'virus'. And I'm full of some surprizes too!" she winked then mewed "Well where do we go? I guess James isn't here.." Leon blinked and mewed "We need to get to the roof! Now!" Everyone nodded and Leon mewed "Hey, Claire, you'll have to let Kitten run beside you, you can't fight if he's holding on to you." Claire nodded her head and turned to Kitten and purred "Ok, Kitten, It's time to be brave! Just stay beside me and if anything happens, stay with Krauser and Leon, Promise?" Kitten nodded and Leon blinked and then growled "Lets move! Move! Move!" and they set out. BANG! BANG! BANG! three twiching cats fell to the ground, they spazzed out before falling Limp. Kitten smacked his teeth in a growl as he and Claire ran past them and Claire smiled, Kitten was a good kid. Suddenly something felt wrong, terribly wrong. drip,drip,drip something dripped behind Claire and she hissed slowly "Kitten, run to Leon and Krauser, now!" Kitten flashed a terrified glance at Claire before he sprinted to Krauser, who was facing the other way. Claire truned around, and then she saw it....and it saw her.......
Chapter 4: Life or Death, Fight or Flee
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- Claire gave a terrified gasp and held her knife closer and her eyes met the creatures. "URHGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!" it screamed in Claire's face, and Claire gave a terrified scream, then thought Claire, you can do this, just remember what James taught you! Claire yanked her knife of as the beast ran toward her, then as it lunged, Claire ducked down low so she was almost flat against the ground. The Beast crashed right into the wall, and it gave a low rumble. "Claire! Run! Don't fight!" yelled Krauser from down the hallway and Claire yelled back "Too late!" then the beast was running at her again but then it crashed straight into her, pinning her down and Claire yelled at the top of lungs "RUNN!!! I'll be fine!!!" and then she heard the terrified cry's of Kitten and heard Krauser murmuring something and Leon yelling for them to run. Claire let out a muffled yelp when she saw her knife so far away. Suddenly the beast fell back, roaring in pain and Claire twisted around and saw Leon. "Hurry! We don't have much time!" and he reached a paw out to Claire who after a second grabbed it and he pulled her up. "Come on, Krauser and Kitten will be waiting!" Leon mewed and then suddenly the roaring stopped and Leon froze before Claire said "Shall we run?" Leon nodded and they took of, running down the narrow hallway, Claire winced in pain as she noticed the blood trickling down from her right hindleg. Suddenly Claire was swept off her feet and hit the wall. "Claire?!" gasped Leon standing over her but Claire was dimly aware of him, she was floating in a black haze and the temptation to close her eyes was so strong. Claire felt Leon grasp her scruff and began to dragg her, but Claire could't feel anything, she had sunk deep into the black haze, far too deep...
Chapter 5: Breaking through the fog
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- "Hey....Claire, are you dead?" Krauser's voice forced Claire to the surface of the hazey fog. "Your an idoit Krauser, you know that right?" Leon's voice muttered. "Huh? Wait! No! I'm an like trillions of times smarter than you, Leon!" Krauser snapped, Claire pictured Krauser bristling over Leon's shoulder. "Oh, yeah? How old are you?" Leon retorted and Krauser was silent. "Hey! How am I supposed to know?!" snarled Krauser and Leon snorted "because that thing called 'age' makes you as old as you are!" "Both of you, shut it! I'm trying to die here!" grumbled Claire and Kitten sqealed "Yay! Krausers wrong! You are alive!" and Krauser growled "Course I'm wrong, thats just how I do it!" Claire blinked her eyes open and moaned "What the noodles was that thing that attacked me?!" Kitten laughed and growle darkly "Its was me! Nahh, I'm just kidding!" Claire groaned and shifted to her paws and growled "How did a couples of Idoits like you keep me alive?!" Leon shrugged his shoulders and Krauser mewed confusedly "Luck I guess...." and Claire gasped, pretending to be terrified "Oh! So I just layed there and you guys just prayed that I'd wake up?!?!?!" Then she groaned, getting to her paws and wobbling to the window and tears streaked her eyes when she saw her city. "W-we're not gonna make it out alive are we?" she looked back and Leon shook his head and Krauser mewed brightly "But let's die having fun! Maybe partying when a billboard falls and crushes us!" and Claire forced a smiled and whispered "Lord, help us all..."
Chapter 6: As days go on, cats can change
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- It had been three or four days since Claire had been injuired and Leon agreed its time to go. "Are you sure your ready to travel already Claire?" Krauser mewed, looking up from packing up all the gear. "I'm fine, ok?" Claire reassured him and she finished re-reading a small note. Then she folded it up, a small note of fury in her eyes. "Lets go!" Claire mewed, holding her knife. Leon and Krauser nodded while Kitten sqeaked "Are we still going to be crushed by a billboard?" Claire smiled as she creaked open the door. Claire waved her paw forward and Krauser moved in front of her while Kitten fell behind Krauser and Leon held up the back. Claire thumbed her knife, nervously while she could her Krasuer clicking his teeth while Leon was silent and Kitten was hummin 'The Ittie-Bittie-Spider'. Hmmmm....no zombies...strange...Claire thought nervously. Claire a snarl and leaped around and what she saw horrified her. It was a cat, maybe. But it was much too tall and it had no fur, also long razor teeth and flesh slicing claws and it's exposed brain and it had no eyes. But as it charged Krauser flung his knife forward at the aproaching thing. It screamed in agony as the knife sliced at it. Then Krauser was running toward it, his claws out and he screamed "Think your tough?! Lets see how tought you really are freak!!!" as Krauser leaped, he pulled the same kind of needle he used on the monster that attacked Claire. As soon as Krauser stuck the needle in the beast it feel dead. Claire felt dread welling up in her, the way Krasuer attacked it so fiercely and fearlessly showed....Krauser was changing.....
PLEASE EXSCUE THE BAD WRITING! ITS A PRETTY OLD FANFIC! DX
Last edited by Magicstar on January 23rd 2012, 14:44; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Needed to Update my story! ^^)
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Leon? Not suprised. Not suprised at all!
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This is really good. I can't wait to read more!
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xD Its old, I re-edited alot of it! I don't know how to start Leon's Chapter though! >.<
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Interesting Leon again Pretty good work done. Keep it up!!
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lol, his name use to be Wade but it didn't seem to fit when I re-edited it, so I changed his name to Leon. I don't even know where I got the name Krauser though...xD
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Krauser's hilarious. His expressions, his way of talking - his whole demeanor, really - make him an interesting character to read about. I feel bad for Claire, though, since she doesn't know whether he's harmless or not. In fact, I myself am not even sure either... but it still doesn't change a thing about his novel-hilarity.
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nice fanfic! i like the names of the chapters. there's sort of a rhythm with the syllables that make them fit together somehow. o.O
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This is funny! It`s great so far.
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