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Post by Mallownose December 21st 2011, 14:17

Ok, there is only one clan and a bunch of roue packs!

Fireclan~
Leader: Sneerstar-large dusty brown tom with darker stripes with amber eyes. He also has part of his jaw in a prement Sneer that ruined his face.MATE TO-Cherrymoon!
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Deputy: Morningsun-beautiful creamy she-cat with a small crest shaped sun on her head above her aqua eyes.
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Medicine cat: Grasswhispers- grey tom with a speckled coat and brilliant green eyes.
Medicine cat apprentice: Moonpaw- silver she-cat with white splashs and bright blue eyes.
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Warriors-
Owleye-Large brown tabby tom with wiry body and blazing unblinking yellow eyes,also Dirtfang's brother
Dirtfang-Muscular deep brown tom with blazing green eyes, also Owleye's Brother
Applegaze- Beautiful brown tabby she-cat with strange amber eyes
Tanitedblood-Large muscular black tom with almost red splashd on his pelt and deep blue eyes
Hawkfire- Small light warm brown she-cat with white markings and green eyes
Meadowflame-Large brown tom with a scarred face and amber eyes-MATE TO-Lavendernose!
Bananaeye-Orange-yellow tom with green eyes MATE TO-Mousefire
Brightfire-small ginger she-cat with white patches and blue eyes
Ashfur-Grey tom with a white paw and chest and blue eyes
Snowflower-Beautiful white she-cat with blue eyes and a snowlily tattoed into her fur
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Apprentices-
There are currently no apprentices!
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Queens-
Mousefire-Small beautiful brown she-cat with lighter stripes and blue eyes. MATE TO-Bananaeye
Kits: Expecting
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Cherrymoon- Pretty silver she-cat whom is almost pink, with aqua eyes,Also is Lavendernose's sister! MATE TO- Sneerstar
Kits: Pinkkit-Small almost pink she-kit with one blue eye and one amber eyes, Snarlkit: Large black tom-kit with starnge red eyes, and Firekit-Large tabby brown tom-kit with darker stripes and blue eyes and Applegaze.
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Lavendernose-strange light silver pink she-cat with blue eyes, also is Cherrymoon's sister! MATE TO-Meadowflame!
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Elders:
Blackclaw-eldery black tom with a scarred face a blue eyes, FATHER OF- Owleyes and Dirtclaw! MATE TO- Moonflower

Moonflower-once pretty silver she-cat with white markings and amber eyes,MOTHER OF-Owleyes and Dirtclaw! MATE TO- Blackclaw

Snarlface-Dusty brown tom with a prement snarl on the right side of his face, and blue eyes, FATHER OF-Sneerstar, MATE TO- Windsquirrel

Windsquirrel- light dusty orange she-cat with amber eyes, MOTHER OF-Sneerstar,MATE TO-Snarlface!

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Pack of Broken Bone ~Note, this pack is all toms except for Sally!~
Leader- Sally-Small white she-cat with a missing eye and one blue eye.
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Her Followers-
Hoot-Large black and white tom with amber eyes
Jumper-Hoot's twin
Mallow-Large grey tom with drab and dull green eyes
Bounder: Reddish tom with rusty hazel eyes
Leaper- Bounders brother, Reddish tom with dark blue eyes
Balto-Large dull grey tom with white paws and chest with blue eyes
Sea- Balto's brother, Large light grey tom with blue eyes
Larh- Sally twin brother except he has both eyes, but they are a dull silver
Razor- Ginger tom covered in scars with green eyes
Claws: Razor's twin brother
Jerely-Husky large tom with grey pelt and dull aqua eyes
Bear-Latge muscular brown tom with dark brown eyes
Liks-Bear's younger brother but with bright green eyes

~Sally might be heartless but she would never tear apart a family that why there are alot of brothers!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Pack of Sparrow~~~~~~~~~~
Leader- Sparrow-dark brown tom with bright,friendly green eyes
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Followers-
Moon-Silver she-cat with bright blue eyes
Lake-Big blue-ish tom with hard but yet calm blue eyes
Elliete- Small grey tom with goofy and friendly green eyes
Winter-White she-cat with piercing blue eyes
Soul-Black tom with white patches and green eyes
Fire-ginger tom with narrow amber eyes
Liegha-Beautiful black she-cat with bright but cold green eyes
Rio-Blue-ish she-cat with blue eyes, also Lake's only sister
Sun: Bright ginger she-cat with sky blue eyes!

~Note: This is a tribeish group of cats who live next to the lake they call: Tangia!~

Prolouge:

Thunder cracked against the sky as two spirits flew through the real world. One spirit mumured "Ah! The perfect place to begin the era of the clans! What do you think Lourease?" The kind and good spirit name was Quinted, while the dark cold hearted spirit name was Lourease. These two spirits were the gods of the clans and had been sent to map out the world to find a place for the clans, but Lourease had something else in mind, he wanted to create an empire and rule under his commrad while Quinted only wanted to create a peacefully place for the clans. "Well I think its time for your journey to end Quinted!" Lourease roared, he flew at Quinted spirit and attcked the peacefull spirit. Quinted eye's widened and he shouted "LOUREASE! HAVE YOU LOST YOUR MIND?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?" Lourease laughed madly and spat "NO! All I want is my own world to rule Quinted!" the two spirits clashed for seven days and seven nights until finally, an desperate Quinted flew at his oppent and shreiked, "BE GONE SWIFTLY ON THE WINGS OF HUAL!" Lourease screamed in agony as his spirity body dissvoled away into the beautiful starry night. Then in a final attemp to win, Lourease flung himself into Quinted body and became part of him. Quinted understood what Lourease had done, so when Quinted made the clans, they would be cursed with Lourease's thrist for power and war. Quinted dismissed it and travled on for many,many moons. He travled alone, looking all over the world for the right place until he came to a beautiful cave. Quinted eagerly flew into the cave, deep,deep,into the cave to find himself in
another world. There, under the earth he spent so long roaming, was the future home for the clans.....SO when Quinted found the world under our world, he grew so excited he completely forgot the dangerous spirit, Lourease inside of him. Quinted quickly created all six clans, Windclan the swift, Shadowclan the fierice,Thunderclan the brave,Riverclan the cunning,Fireclan the battle warriors,and Starclan the great spirits of the clans. But something went wrong when he created them because soon all the clans were at war, attacking eachother ruethlessly. Quinted could only watch as the clans he worked so hard to build, slowly vanished, first Thunderclan,then Riverclan, next Shadowclan and finally WIndclan until Fireclan was all that remained. Soon two halves left Fireclan and one became the ruethless rouges called 'The Pack of Broken Bones' while the other half became the peaceful 'Pack of Sparrow'. But Fireclan was stubberon and would not be whiped out, soon they began to thrive and became the Fireclan we know and love today.

Chapter 1: Applegaze is gone!

Applegaze looked up from her warm nest with a sigh, then she wriggled around to find a handsom tom blocking the den enertrence. "B-Bounder?!?!?!" she gasped as the tom stalked forward, like a ghost, stepping over Owleye's,Dirtclaw, and Morningsun. Then three cats followed him. "Bounder! Get o-" Bounder cut her off by wrapped his tail around her tail purring "I've come to take whats rightfully mine!" he flicked his tail and the two toms grabbed Applegaze and quietly stepped over the warriors and once they got out of the camp, they ran away, into the sparse tree's and raced with Applegaze to their camp. Bounder was about to leave but then he thought up a plan and turned back to Applegaze's nest. Bounder held up his paw and ripped the skin with his teeth and blood began to flow. Bounder smiled and dribbled his blood into her nest before he turned and bounded away. Owleye's awoke to see Applegaze gone already from her nest. "Hmmmmm...She's never really up before dawn like this!" he leaned over to check on her nest only to find...blood! Oh no! WHat happend to Applegaze?! How could this of happend?! How could a fox or badger gotten in,stolen Applegaze and snuck out without anyone waking up?!?!?!?!? I must tell Sneerstar! He'll know what to do to save his daughter! Owleye's thought painciedly before he raced out of the den, waking warriors. He ran to Sneerstar's den and cried "Sneerstar!Sneerstar!Sneerstar!Sneerstar! Come quick! Its Applegaze!!!! We have to save her!" he gasped, then Sneerstar brust out of his den and panted "Applegaze?! WHat happend to my daughter?!" he spat and Owleyes gasped and panted "SHe's she's gone! APPLEGAZE IS GONE!" he panted and the two cats raced to the warriors den. "Check for scent!!" ordered Sneerstar quickly as he sniffed the den with other awoken cats. Then as Owleyes heard a deep growl he brought his head up to look at Sneerstar who had a dark angered look frozen on his face. "What happend?!?!?!?!" he mewed nervously as Sneerstar looked darkly at him and spat "Bounder!" Owleye's froze as Sneerstar roared "Bounder has taken my daughter!"

~Thats all for now Folks!~


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Post by Mossfoot December 21st 2011, 15:29

wow.can't wait for the prolouge.
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Post by Mallownose December 21st 2011, 17:50

Thank you! My PROLOUGE HAS BEEN POSTED! Smile
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Post by Guest December 21st 2011, 18:49

Wow nice prolougue! ANd I like your allegiances too. Smile
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Post by Mallownose December 21st 2011, 21:08

Thank you! CHapter one has now been posted!
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Post by Guest December 21st 2011, 22:19

Poor Applegaze. I wonder what would happen to her and why would Bounder take her away. Great job on writing! Smile
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Post by Frost December 21st 2011, 22:22

Nice story. I guess I know where you got the names from. Varjark Paw? Lol Sally Bones, Razor? Wink
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Post by Mallownose December 22nd 2011, 11:40

XD Yes! I love Varjack Paw! Its one of my favorite books! Thank you for the compliments! XD
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