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Post by Guest June 22nd 2012, 22:11

Prologue:

Chapter 1:
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Post by Auburnflare June 23rd 2012, 01:35

This is very good! You're very detailed, Rainsplash. Probably one of the best Fanfic's I've ever read! I noticed a few mistakes, but I'm pretty sure they're just type-o's. I love it! Thumbs Up
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Post by Hazelstar June 23rd 2012, 10:58

Icee pretty much said all I had wanted to say, but to fit in my own word ~ The details in your fan-fiction are exquisite and always make the story better. Detail's are a key part when one is making a fan-fic, and it always brings more tension, or excitement to the reader. I'm looking forward to the next chapter Very Happy
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Post by Noxe June 23rd 2012, 21:33

I think you used great vivid verbs and very exquisite detail. This, and the fact that the work doesn't lack action, makes it a really good fanfic. Besides the typos, I didn't see anything that needs improvement. Great job! Very Happy
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