If prey lived in clans Chapter 1
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If prey lived in clans Chapter 1
This is what it would be like if prey lived in clans.
Rabbitclan:
Animals included: Rabbits
Kit names: kits ex. Whitekit
Apprentice names: "hare" at the end. known as bunnies ex. Whitehare
Warriors: The rabbits call warriors "Rabbits" If an apprentice was becoming a rabbit, the end of the ceremony would end with " Congradulations Whitetail, you are now a full rabbit of Rabbitclan. Example warrior: Whitetail
Insults: Carrot brain, Worm dung, Cat dung, stupid/ lazy fluff ball
Twolegs: Twolegs are called giants
View of cats: The rabbits believe there are two kinds of cats: Those who kill them (warriors) , and those who take their food (medicine cats) Known as Rabbit eaters and Food eaters. The food eaters take the plants that the rabbits eat for food.
Mouseclan
Animals included: Mice, Voles, Shrews
Kits: "Pups" Example: Graypup
Apprentices: "Whiskers" Example: Graywhisker
Warriors: Scavengers
Insults: Flydung, Catdug, Nutbrain, Flybrain, Lazy/ Stupid hairball
Twolegs: Twolegs are also called Giants
Cats: Cats are called hunters. They pups that if they leave the nursery, hunters will eat them. (Which is true)
Birdclan:
Animals included: Birds
Kits: Chicks Example: Bluechick
Apprentices: Feathers Example: Bluefeather
Warriors: Flyers
Twolegs: Groundwalkers
Cats: Ground-killers They are called this because they usually only kill birds on the ground
Insults: Featherbrain, Wormdung, Catdung, Treebrain, Stupid/ lazy Featherball
Squirrelclan:
Animals included: Squirrels, Chipmunks
Kits: Pups Example: Brownpup
Apprentices: Cheeks Example: Browncheek
Warriors: Climbers
Chapter 1
A tiny rabbit kit peeked of the nursery for the first time. Reedstar, the Rabbitclan leader, had just called a gather. More tiny heads peeked out. The large brown rabbit hopped onto a rock and beconed the kits closer. "These kits have reached their sixth moon and are ready to become hares." As Reedstar spoke those words, Whitekit waited in excitement as his brothers and sisters got their hare names. "Whitekit, from this day on, you will be known as Whitehare until you earn your rabbit name. Your mentor shall be Darkspot." Reedstar said. Whitehare excitedly hopped up and touched noses with his new mentor.
It was a bright sunny day and heather was blowing in the breeze. The air was full of excitement as Whitehare and his brothers and sisters hopped out of the hare burrow for their first training session. Whitehare had just hopped up Darkspot, a terrible shriek filled the air and then all was silent. A rabbit sprinted back into camp and said "A cat killed Longhare!" Longhares dead? he thought in fear. Suddenly he wasn't so excited anymore. He didn't want to die like his brother.
Rabbitclan:
Animals included: Rabbits
Kit names: kits ex. Whitekit
Apprentice names: "hare" at the end. known as bunnies ex. Whitehare
Warriors: The rabbits call warriors "Rabbits" If an apprentice was becoming a rabbit, the end of the ceremony would end with " Congradulations Whitetail, you are now a full rabbit of Rabbitclan. Example warrior: Whitetail
Insults: Carrot brain, Worm dung, Cat dung, stupid/ lazy fluff ball
Twolegs: Twolegs are called giants
View of cats: The rabbits believe there are two kinds of cats: Those who kill them (warriors) , and those who take their food (medicine cats) Known as Rabbit eaters and Food eaters. The food eaters take the plants that the rabbits eat for food.
Mouseclan
Animals included: Mice, Voles, Shrews
Kits: "Pups" Example: Graypup
Apprentices: "Whiskers" Example: Graywhisker
Warriors: Scavengers
Insults: Flydung, Catdug, Nutbrain, Flybrain, Lazy/ Stupid hairball
Twolegs: Twolegs are also called Giants
Cats: Cats are called hunters. They pups that if they leave the nursery, hunters will eat them. (Which is true)
Birdclan:
Animals included: Birds
Kits: Chicks Example: Bluechick
Apprentices: Feathers Example: Bluefeather
Warriors: Flyers
Twolegs: Groundwalkers
Cats: Ground-killers They are called this because they usually only kill birds on the ground
Insults: Featherbrain, Wormdung, Catdung, Treebrain, Stupid/ lazy Featherball
Squirrelclan:
Animals included: Squirrels, Chipmunks
Kits: Pups Example: Brownpup
Apprentices: Cheeks Example: Browncheek
Warriors: Climbers
Chapter 1
A tiny rabbit kit peeked of the nursery for the first time. Reedstar, the Rabbitclan leader, had just called a gather. More tiny heads peeked out. The large brown rabbit hopped onto a rock and beconed the kits closer. "These kits have reached their sixth moon and are ready to become hares." As Reedstar spoke those words, Whitekit waited in excitement as his brothers and sisters got their hare names. "Whitekit, from this day on, you will be known as Whitehare until you earn your rabbit name. Your mentor shall be Darkspot." Reedstar said. Whitehare excitedly hopped up and touched noses with his new mentor.
It was a bright sunny day and heather was blowing in the breeze. The air was full of excitement as Whitehare and his brothers and sisters hopped out of the hare burrow for their first training session. Whitehare had just hopped up Darkspot, a terrible shriek filled the air and then all was silent. A rabbit sprinted back into camp and said "A cat killed Longhare!" Longhares dead? he thought in fear. Suddenly he wasn't so excited anymore. He didn't want to die like his brother.
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Is this a fanfiction? Oh and Streamfur, baby rabbits are called kittens so its should be alright if they are called kits!
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I would do bunny for the babies and hare for the apprentices...that's just my opinion though.
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what about squirrels or shrew or voles? well, they're insignificant. birds would work... but it's unrealistic for different species of birds to live together and interact like cats.
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This Fanfiction sounds very interesting! ^^
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Yeah! I can't wait for the first chapter!
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I like the idea! Prey living in clans sounds very interesting. Good work, I can't wait to see more
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That's a really cute idea! ^^ Nya.. ^^ Hare, Bunny and rabbit!
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I have updated the clans and will start writing soon.
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Browncheek? Haha interesting story!
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Chapter one is finished. Who thinks I should make a rp for this?
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i think it'd make a good RP. it's not about cats, so that's pretty good.
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