The Rise of BlossomClan

Prologue

Blossom ran as fast as she could, looking back now and again to see if the dog was chasing her. Luckily, it was nowhere to be seen, but she still ran. She ran until, BAM. She had run into a handsome ginger tom. He was looking down at her his eyes blazing. Blossom couldn't help shrinking back.

"What are you doing on ThunderClan territory?!" he growled.

"I-I didn't mean to enter your territory..." she meowed "I was running away from a dog."

The ginger tom's eyes changed from anger to worry. "Dog? Has it followed you onto our territory?"

Blossom shook her head. "I don't think so."

The ginger tom gave a sympathetic glance. "Come with me, for shelter for the night." He meowed. He sniffed. "You're a kittypet," he meowed.

Blossom couldn't help growl. What a horrible name! She was a house cat.

The ginger tom's whiskers twitched with amusement. "I was a kittypet once," he meowed. "Until I bumped into a forest cat... He was my best friend, but then one day, he was taken away." his eyes flashed with pain but were gone within a second. "Well, anyway let's get you to camp."

He led the way, until they got to the camp. Blossom's eyes blinked in amazement. This territory was amazing! She followed the tom into the camp and she felt many cats gazes burning her pelt. Some growled and one was about to leap on her but the ginger tom signalled him not to.

"Firestar!" one cat meowed, signalling the ginger tom. "What are you doing, bringing a kittypet into camp?"

"Brambleclaw, she was chased by a dog into ThunderClan territory. It is dark so I offered for her to stay the night." Firestar explained.

Brambleclaw bowed his head but his gaze wasn't very welcoming as he looked at her. Blossom felt very uncomftable.


A few days had passed, and Blossom was already getting used to Clan life. She was sad to leave, but she knew she had to. The cats of the Clan were not used to Blossom being around and did not like her being there. She would miss Clan life, she didn't want to go back to her owners... Then she had an idea... She could make a Clan of her own! Then she could be the leader, she could be Blossomstar. She would get as many house cats as she could, and find a nice piece of territory. She had always found places with lots of caves, dens, trees, prey and water!

Yes, it was time for a new generation to begin. It would be the rise of BlossomClan

Good for you!

Ooh, nice fan-fic. It was a pleasure to read; I hope there will be more

I agrree with mr. Dragonclaw up there. AWESOME! hopefully, many kittypets would want to run away from home to join the blossomclan.

Thanks guys!

Chapter 1

"Sure! It sounds like a great idea, Blossom!" Blossom's best friend, Smoke meowed.

"Don't you want to leave your Twolegs?" When Smoke gave her a confused look. "Oh sorry... I mean owners."

Smoke shook his head. "I've been trying to think of an excuse to run away from them." he meowed.

"Great! Let's ask all the cats in the neighbourhood!" she meowed leaping onto Smoke's fence. "You coming?" she asked.

"Of course!" Smoke followed her over the fence and to the next garden.

"Do you really think Shadow and Blizzard will agree to come with us? You know how reliant they are on their owners." Smoke meowed.

Blossom nodded. "It won't hurt trying." Blossom led the way over the fence and the two she-cats were lying on the grass.

"Hi!" Smoke greeted as he wandered over to them.

"What do you want?" Shadow rolled her eyes.

Blossom explained about the Clan she had stayed at for a couple of nights, and how her idea had come to her head.

"Are you crazy?" Blizzard meowed "How would you survive without your owners?"

"Easily," Blossom meowed "ThunderClan manages."

"They've been brought up that way," Shadow meowed "Anyway, the forest is dangerous."

"Are you scared?" Smoke teased.

"No!" Blizzard hissed.

"Are you sure?"

"Yes!" Blizzard hissed again.

"Then come with us." Blossom meowed "We'll look after you."

"We don't need looking after!" Shadow growled.

"Fine, we'll come and live with you in the forest!" Blizzard meowed.

It was going well so far, but there were still a lot more cats to go. Also, had Blossom thought this through? Yes, she had watched the warriors intently when they went hunting. Yes, she tried to memorise all the herbs the short days she was there. But would that be enough?

yay! some kittypets are agreeing to make a new clan! but will there be enough land for them to make a new clan?

Hey Tawnypelt!!!! You're a ShadowClan cat!! Yay

YUP. and now I'm also a public enemy...I was shocked until I realized it was another rank.

More ranks

~ Author's Note Okay so a lot of time has passed in this chapter, when BlossomClan turns into a proper Clan with loads of cats!

Chapter 2

"Smokepatch, Blizzardbreeze, Shadowpelt and Meadowfern shall go on the Dawn Patrol," Blossomstar meowed "Smokepatch will lead."

"Just because he's Clan deputy," Shadowpelt meowed irritably before heading out of camp.

Blossomstar had chosen her best friend Smoke (now Smokepatch) to be her deputy. He had learned the warrior ways, followed the warrior code and was always loyal to Blossomstar.

"Blossomstar!" a call came from below. Blossomstar purred as she looked down at little Shinykit. She was only 2 moons old. "When will I be able to be a apprentice?" Shinykit asked.

"Not yet, little one," meowed Blossomstar "You have to wait until your 6 moons."

"But that's ages away!" a new, squeaky voice meowed. It was Stealthkit, who had sat beside his sister.

"Shinykit! Stealthkit!" Silvesplodge called from the nursery. "Where are you?"

"They're over here!" Blossomstar led the kits toward their mother who was sitting outside the nursery.

"It's not fair!" Shinykit and Stealthkit whimpared in chorus.

"What isn't?" Silversplodge asked, drawing them closer to her with her tail.

"We can't be apprentices until we're six moons!" Stealthkit squeaked.

Silversplodge licked both kits in turn. "One day, little ones," she meowed gently "You'll be warriors. Trust me, it won't be long. Time flys."

yay! the clan actually took place! but where are their boundaries??

Erm... dunno.
*drives away with pure embarrassment* :lambo: (i had to choose a yellow car it's my fave colour! )
i cant believe i forgot the boundaries... oh well....
AAAHH I AM A FAILURE

ah, it's okay. let's just say it's somewhere in the forest where all the clans thought had too many deathberries, but the deathberry bushes all died out or something.

Wait! No! There are no other Clans! They set their territory in a different place from the lake.

Sorry, I only just thought of that....

Chapter 3

"Stealthkit, from now on, until you earn your warrior name, you will be known as Stealthpaw. Blizzardbreeze, you will mentor Stealthpaw. I hope that you will teach him your wisdom and courage." Blossomstar meowed.

Stealthpaw's eyes were shining, when Blizzardbreeze walked up to him.

"Shinykit, from now on, until you earn your warrior name, you will be known as Shinypaw. Smokefur, you will mentor Shinypaw. I hope you teach her your strength and courage."

Smokefur bowed his head as he walked up to Shinypaw.

"Surprise, surprise..." muttered Shadowpelt "The great deputy has been chosen to mentor Shinypaw."

"Hush!" hissed Silversplodge, who was watching her kits intently.

Shadowpelt just growled at her, and then turned back to the ceromany.

"Stealthpaw! Shinypaw!" everyone called; Silversplodge the loudest.

Shadowpelt was a jealous cat, because she hissed at Smokefur and left him confused.

Blossomstar ran up to Shadowpelt. "Don't treat your deputy like that!" she growled "You should respect him!"

Shadowpelt's claws unsheathed. And then Shadowpelt walked away.

Blossomstar turned to Smokefur. "Shadowpelt's just jealous." she meowed.

Smokefur nodded. "Maybe you choose me too much."

Blossomstar sighed. "But you're the best cat in the Clan!"

"That's what annoys Shadowpelt. That attitude, about me being your closest friend, and in that case, your favourite cat in the Clan. Shadowpelt just wants to be noticed." Smokefur meowed, pressing his muzzle against Blossomstar's pelt.

"You're right, Smokefur." Blossomstar meowed. "I should talk to her."

"Yes," Smokefur replied "But now. Let's eat." Smokefur padded over to the fresh kill pile and picked up a delicous looking vole. Blossomstar picked up a squirrel.

As Blossomstar ate, she couldn't help but think about Shadowpelt. Was all she wanted attention? And, it must've been pretty hurtful, that Blizzardbreeze got to mentor Stealthpaw and Shadowpelt didn't get to mentor Shinypaw. After all, Blizzardbreeze was her best friend, they must've wanted to mentor together...

Pushing the thoughts out of her mind, she concentrated on eating her squirrel, and devoured it in a couple of seconds.

Hey, Silversplodge, maybe you should change Shadowpelt to Shadowsong. Shadowpelt sounds like a boy name, no offense.

thats true... i thought she was a boy the whole time!

Thiis is a really good story! You should continue!

I like it!