This story made me cry.
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This story made me cry.
This storyish thing seriously made me start to cry. It looks long but please read the whole thing...
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Mommy.. Johnny brought a gun to school,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > He told his friends that it was cool,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > And when he pulled the trigger back,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > It shot with a great crack.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Mommy, I was a good girl, I did What I was told,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > I went to
> >>> > school, I got straight A's, I even got the gold!
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > But Mommy, when I went to school that day,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > I never said good-bye,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > I'm sorry Mommy, I had to go, But Mommy, please don't cry.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > When Johnny shot the gun, He hit me and another,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > And all because Johnny, Got the gun from his older brother.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Mommy, please tell Daddy; That I love him very much,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > And please tell Bradon; my boyfriend; That it wasn't just a
> >>> >crush.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > And tell my little sister; That she is the only one now, And tell
> >>> >my
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > dear sweet grandmother; I'll be waiting for her now,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > And tell my wonderful friends; That they always were the best;
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Mommy, I'm not the first, I'm no better than the rest.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Mommy, tell my teachers; I won't show up for class,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > And never to forget this, And please don't let this pass.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Mommy, why'd it have to be me? No one deserves
> >>> > this,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Mommy, warn the others, Mommy I left without a kiss.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > And Mommy tell the doctors; I know they really did try,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > I think I even saw a doctor, Trying not to cry.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Mommy, I'm slowly dying, With a bullet in my chest,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > But Mommy please remember, I'm in heaven with the rest.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Mommy I ran as fast as I could,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > When I heard that crack, Mommy, listen to me if you
> >>> >would,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > I wanted to go to college, I wanted to try things that were new,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > I guess I'm not going with Daddy, On that trip to the new zoo.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > I wanted to get married, I wanted to have a kid,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > I wanted to be an actress, Mommy, I wanted to live.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > But Mommy I must go now, The time is getting late,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Mommy, tell my Bradon, I'm sorry but I had to cancel the date.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > I love you Mommy, I always have, I know; you
> >>> > know it's true,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > And Mommy all I wanted to say is, 'Mommy, I love you.'
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > ****In Loving Memory of The Virginia Tech Students Who Were Lost****
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Please if you would,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Pass this around,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > I'd be happy if you could,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Don't smash this on the ground.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > If you pass this on,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Maybe people will cry,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Just keep this in your heart,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > For the people who didn't get to say 'Good-bye'.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Now you have 2 choices,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > 1) Pass this on, and show people you care, resend this as 'Try Not To Cry'
> >>> > 2) Don't send it, and you have just proven how cold-hearted people really are
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Mommy.. Johnny brought a gun to school,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > He told his friends that it was cool,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > And when he pulled the trigger back,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > It shot with a great crack.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Mommy, I was a good girl, I did What I was told,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > I went to
> >>> > school, I got straight A's, I even got the gold!
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > But Mommy, when I went to school that day,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > I never said good-bye,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > I'm sorry Mommy, I had to go, But Mommy, please don't cry.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > When Johnny shot the gun, He hit me and another,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > And all because Johnny, Got the gun from his older brother.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Mommy, please tell Daddy; That I love him very much,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > And please tell Bradon; my boyfriend; That it wasn't just a
> >>> >crush.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > And tell my little sister; That she is the only one now, And tell
> >>> >my
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > dear sweet grandmother; I'll be waiting for her now,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > And tell my wonderful friends; That they always were the best;
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Mommy, I'm not the first, I'm no better than the rest.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Mommy, tell my teachers; I won't show up for class,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > And never to forget this, And please don't let this pass.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Mommy, why'd it have to be me? No one deserves
> >>> > this,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Mommy, warn the others, Mommy I left without a kiss.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > And Mommy tell the doctors; I know they really did try,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > I think I even saw a doctor, Trying not to cry.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Mommy, I'm slowly dying, With a bullet in my chest,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > But Mommy please remember, I'm in heaven with the rest.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Mommy I ran as fast as I could,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > When I heard that crack, Mommy, listen to me if you
> >>> >would,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > I wanted to go to college, I wanted to try things that were new,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > I guess I'm not going with Daddy, On that trip to the new zoo.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > I wanted to get married, I wanted to have a kid,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > I wanted to be an actress, Mommy, I wanted to live.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > But Mommy I must go now, The time is getting late,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Mommy, tell my Bradon, I'm sorry but I had to cancel the date.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > I love you Mommy, I always have, I know; you
> >>> > know it's true,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > And Mommy all I wanted to say is, 'Mommy, I love you.'
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > ****In Loving Memory of The Virginia Tech Students Who Were Lost****
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Please if you would,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Pass this around,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > I'd be happy if you could,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Don't smash this on the ground.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > If you pass this on,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Maybe people will cry,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Just keep this in your heart,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > For the people who didn't get to say 'Good-bye'.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Now you have 2 choices,
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > 1) Pass this on, and show people you care, resend this as 'Try Not To Cry'
> >>> > 2) Don't send it, and you have just proven how cold-hearted people really are
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Re: This story made me cry.
My friend was one of the people shot there. I miss you Skylar
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Re: This story made me cry.
That`s sad!! I`m sorry Skyspirit.
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Re: This story made me cry.
Oh it is okay she was a good friend but i am getting better.
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Re: This story made me cry.
Omg That was sooo sad...
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Re: This story made me cry.
I had to post the story. Its one of the only things that make me cry everytime a read it. I am always the only person that is sitting calmly, sometimes smiling, during the really sad part of like a movie. I dont cry when i get hurt. Its also a really good chain starter where you email yur friends to forward it to 5 more people. XD
hope you enjoy.
hope you enjoy.
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Re: This story made me cry.
Thats SO sad!!! I`m SO sorry Skystar! How old were they? Is "Johnny" in jail?
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Re: This story made me cry.
That is truly sad...sorry Skystar...
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Re: This story made me cry.
Omg! This is sooooo sad! Is it ok if I cry? WHY IS LIFE SO UNFAIR!?!?!
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Re: This story made me cry.
Life is cruel, unfair, crazy, it makes no sense....we just have to live through it our best....
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Re: This story made me cry.
Did Johnny really hit someone with a gun!? I mean is it real? How many people did he shoot...?
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Re: This story made me cry.
Aww its so saddddd
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Re: This story made me cry.
I almost cryyyeeeddd I don't like guns. My dad died cuz of one.
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Re: This story made me cry.
:O i feel sad for you...
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Re: This story made me cry.
awww thats soooo sad. i think i have heard something like that before..
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Re: This story made me cry.
I was young at the time so I don't remember much... :/ Anyways, that was a sad poem thingy.
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