The Aura Clan- Feather's First Fan-Made Warrior Story

Hello, I am Featherpelt. I have made a clan all by myself (Well, with slight help from Fireheart) and am telling the story about it.

Clan Name: Aura Clan
Location: The Caverns
Leader: Moonstar
Medicine Cat: Aspenstep
Deputy: Hawkfeather
Age of Clan: Many Moons Old.
History: Long ago a young kit named Moonkit, discovered the Caverns. He was amazed by there size and power. Thus, he showed his mother at the time, Flowerbreeze, the Caverns. When he became an apprentice, a rare instance happened. The leader of his clan, The River Clan, became his mentor. He showed his mentor the amazing site and asked to leave the clan to start his own, with his parents and sibling, Hawkpaw. The old clan leader thought his idea great and agreed. But then one other apprentice, Aspenpaw, joined him and became the clans first Medicine Cat. Later, Moonpaw, became Moonstar, Aspenpaw became Aspenstep, and also mated with Moonstar, and Moonstar's brother was accepted as the deputy. Which lead him to become Hawkfeather. Now there is a prophecy that Moonstar's Daughter will become the first Female Clan leader of the clan. Will it be possible? The story will show.

Name:Brightkit
Gender: She-Cat
Clan:Aura Clan
Age: Less than a moon old
Favorite Food: Mouse
Personality:Very kind, generous and loves to help others
Description:A snow like furred kit with blue eyes. A fast runner and always thinks of a way to settle things with NO WAR!
Sibling: Pebblekit
Mother: Medicine Cat ( Aspenstep )
Father: Leader ( Moonstar )
Wanted Position: Queen



Name: Pebblekit
Gender: Tom
Clan: Aura Clan
Age: Less than a moon old
Favorite Food: Vole and Mouse. He cant decide
Personality: Energetic, Playful, and always ready for a good time.
Description: A Light Grey Tom with White Speckles on his Underbelly. He has Black Paws and A white Muzzle.
Sibling:Brightkit
Mother: Medicine Cat ( Aspenstep )
Father: Leader ( Moonstar )
Wanted Position: Warrior

Name: Moonstar
Gender: Tom
Clan: Aura Clan
Age: Many Moons.
Favorite Food: He eats Moles mostly. He also likes voles.
Personality: Majestic and very wise.
Description: A dark grey tom with a moon marking on his under belly.
Sibling: Hawkfeather
Mother: Queen ( Flowerbreeze )
Father: Warrior ( Darkwave )
Position: Clan Leader
Mate:Aspenstep (She-cat)

Name: Aspenstep
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: Aura Clan
Age: Very many moons :33
Favorite Food: She eats Berries and Bats.
Personality: She is Loyal and kind-hearted, she loves kits.
Description: A light brown she-cat with Amber eyes.
Sibling: None
Mother: Unknown
Father: Unknown
Position: Medicine Cat
Mate: Moonstar (Tom)

Name: Hawkfeather
Gender: Tom
Clan: Aura Clan
Age: Same age as Moonstar
Favorite Food: He ALWAYS enjoys a good bird.
Personality: He is mischievous but can be responsible when needed. He is loved by many She-Cats in the clan.
Description: A White tom with rare Cyan colored eyes.
Sibling: Moonstar
Mother: Queen ( Flowerbreeze )
Father: Warrior (Darkwave)
Position: Deputy
Mate: Goldengrace (She-Cat)

PLEASE Comment and Critique!

CHAPTER 1

"The kits are here!" The young apprentice from the nursery yelled padding through the opening in the Cavern and running up to Moonstar.

"What?" The old clan leader shook his fur and stood up from his nap near the ferns.

"Your kits are here Moonstar!" Firepaw, the Queens apprentice told him again. This time mentioning the name of the majestic clan leader in the sentence he had spoke before. He then looked away and ran to the greatly sized caverns.

My kits are here! Moonstar thought to himself in excitement. He got up and sprinted to the opening in the caverns. Then padded around the stalactites and other various formations. Once here reached the nursery he looked to his left to find his Mate,Aspenstep, licking her two kits.

"Say hi to Brightkit and Pebblekit, your two new kits." She smiled and looked down at the two brand new kits. Moonstar padded his way over to Aspenstep. He looked at Brightkit.

"She looks kinda like Hawkfeather!" He reached a paw down and put it gently on the young cat. "And he, looks like my old clan leader." He bent down next to Pebblekit and licked is head. The young kits looked up but still with there eyes shut. "Pebblekit and Brightkit..."

"Well, its getting late Moonstar. Remember, tomorrow is the first day of Leaf-Bare!" Aspenstep picked up Brightkit by her scruff and laid her on the soft bed of ferns. Then did the same with Pebblekit. Pebblekit yawned and and snuggled next to Brightkit. The white snow furred kit let out a "Mrrop" and fell into a comfortable sleep. Pebblekit was already napping when Aspenstep laid her head down. "Good night you two." She licked both the tiny kit on the head and fell asleep.

Ill do more soon. This is not end of Chapter 1!

I like it! Brightkit? LOL ^.^

Blame Fireheart! HE CAME UP WITH IT! Jk, I like it :33.

Wow this is awesome!! I loved it

DragonMeteor wrote:Wow this is awesome!! I loved it

This is not even close to how awesome it shall beh!

Wow, DragonMeteor. Cats just love talking to cats when they're trying to punch you.

Moonstar is added!

Sagedapple wrote:I like it! Brightkit? LOL ^.^

Yepp, I chose that name for Featherpelt. But don't even think for a second that I got it from Brightstar! That is a lie, I got the name from something else. ^-^ Oh, and Nice job, can't wait for Chapter 1!

Thanks Fire!

CHAPTER 1

"The kits are here!" The young apprentice from the nursery yelled padding through the opening in the Cavern and running up to Moonstar.

"What?" The old clan leader shook his fur and stood up from his nap near the ferns.

"Your kits are here Moonstar!" Firepaw, the Queens apprentice told him again. This time mentioning the name of the majestic clan leader in the sentence he had spoke before. He then looked away and ran to the greatly sized caverns.

My kits are here! Moonstar thought to himself in excitement. He got up and sprinted to the opening in the caverns. Then padded around the stalactites and other various formations. Once here reached the nursery he looked to his left to find his Mate,Aspenstep, licking her two kits.

"Say hi to Brightkit and Pebble, your two new kits." She smiled and looked down and the two brand new kits. Moonstar padded his way over to Aspenstep. He looked at Brightkit.

"She looks kinda like Hawkfeather!" He reached a paw down and put it gently on the young cat. "And he, looks like my old clan leader." He bent down next to Pebblekit and licked is head. The young kits looked up but still with there eyes shut. "Pebblekit and Brightkit..."

"Well, its getting late Moonstar. Remember, tomorrow is the first day of Leaf-Bare!" Aspenstep picked up Brightkit by her scruff and laid her on the soft bed of ferns. Then did the same with Pebblekit. Pebblekit yawned and and snuggled next to Brightkit. The white snow furred kit let out a "Mrrop" and fell into a comfortable sleep. Pebblekit was already napping when Aspenstep laid her head down. "Good night you two." She licked both the tiny kit on the head and fell asleep.

Ill do more soon. This is not end of Chapter 1!

Ooo, going good so far. ^-^

hahaha, it was good!

Really? I didnt think it was very good.

You should write the second chapter.

Well first I am going to finish the 1st chapter So, how do I create a poll?

Ooo, a poll. I won't vote until I see more of the cats so sorry. ^-^

Yeah. I have to see more of the characters first. ^.^

These are the main character.