Warriors Worldwar Fan-Fic: [Part 1] Midnight in the Balance
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Warriors Worldwar Fan-Fic: [Part 1] Midnight in the Balance
This is another crossover fan fiction by me. Based on Warriors- New Prophecy series [Second series], and the Worldwar series by Harry Turtledove.
Storyline: Generations have past since the Clans became a united confederation against the Empire. The war against Tigerstar, a generation ago, and the BloodClan insurgencies that followed it has made them allies. Now they set off in a expeditionary Conquest Fleet across the galaxy. To a distant life-bearing planet that the Clans hope to make their new home. Simply known as Tosev-3, it is known by [some of] the natives as Earth. Little do they realize that they arrived during the planet's darkest hour, where nearly every nation is at war. Soon the fate of both humans and aliens rests in the balance.
Prologue:
Chapter1:
Chapter 2:
Storyline: Generations have past since the Clans became a united confederation against the Empire. The war against Tigerstar, a generation ago, and the BloodClan insurgencies that followed it has made them allies. Now they set off in a expeditionary Conquest Fleet across the galaxy. To a distant life-bearing planet that the Clans hope to make their new home. Simply known as Tosev-3, it is known by [some of] the natives as Earth. Little do they realize that they arrived during the planet's darkest hour, where nearly every nation is at war. Soon the fate of both humans and aliens rests in the balance.
Prologue:
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- Firestar, ThunderClan’s Leader and Ship-commander of the C.S. Bluestar, was inside his Ship-Den. Hanging pots with creeping ferns dangled downwards like a green veil between the doorway and the rest of the den. To the right was a large nest made of moss, and further to the right was a trickling fountain and a private dirtplace. On the left was a large shelf containing books, paper, a porcelain drinking set, and containers of ink and paint. On the top mantle was a pair of sheathed swords hanging upon a wrack. Along the walls of both sides were paintings, portraits and written scrolls. Straight ahead was a large round window that showed the endlessness of outer-space. And in front of the window was his desk where he was reviewing a holographic image from the computer.
The image showed a blue, green, and white sphere, a perfect example of a life-bearing planet floating in space.
“So much like Home,” He purred, the image reflecting in his own green eyes. “The Clans will indeed prosper in this world, once it has been settled. And the natives will surely give us little trouble.”
After tapping into the hologram projector, the image of the planet was replaced by one showing a typical inhabitant: a tailless biped with red-brown skin, similar in height to a Mewtkaz. The being had no fur, save for what grew on the top of its head, which was long and black. It wore a strip of cloth around the middle of its body, and carried a bow, and a set of stone-tipped arrows.
The biped was replaced by one that was completely covered from head-to-foot in dirty gray-tan robes. A long-curved sword was slung to its side on a leather strap. Standing next to it was a long-legged riding animal with brown fur, a hump on its back, and an extended neck.
“That creature bares a strong resemblance to what FireClan use to have back Home.” Firestar purred as he skimmed through the sequence, passing by images of many different bipeds of various skin colours and other appearances. When he found the image he was searching for, he placed it on hold so that he could have a long good look at it. “Be hold, the great warrior of Tosev-3.” The Clan-Leader observed this image very closely.
It showed a native of the pinkish skin-type, though only his face and one of his hands could verify that. Protective gear covered the rest of his body almost as much as the robes did with the biped previously shown. A pointed iron helmet, with several dents on it, sat on top of his head. He wore a suit of mail of [slightly rusted] mail that reached to his knees, and heavy leather boots below them. A flimsy coat of bluish material helped keep the sun off his mail.
The animal the biped rode on was somewhat more graceful looking compared to the larger hump-back creature, and appeared bored with its job. An iron-headed spear stood upwards from the biped’s seat. Other armaments it carried were a straight sword, a knife, and a shield with a cross painted on it.
“How long would his kind stand up to bullets, armoured fighting vehicles, and aircraft?” Firestar asked rhetorically to himself.
Suddenly he received a call from the phone on his computer. The squeaking noise it was making meant that it came from the Ship’s main phone line. Had it been a private call from someone like his mate Sandstorm, or his daughters Squirrelpaw and Leafpaw, the phone would have made a mewling sound instead. Pressing the ‘answer’ button, a video screen opened up to show the long whiskery face of a Rezput junior officer. Its beady eyes seemed to be darting around looking at the background of Fireheart’s Ship-den, as if some unknown danger was lurking off-screen.
“Yes?” Firestar asked in a commanding, but non-threatening tone.
“Exalted Ship-commander, and Leader of ThunderClan, as you know, we are already well within Tosev’s system,” he squeaked in a voice that was almost a whisper.
“Well I have better know that already.” Firestar replied sarcastically, trying to humour the apparently disturbed Rezput. “But that’s not why you called me right?”
“Y-yes, I mean no, Exalted Ship-commander.” The junior officer seemed almost ready to end the call, when he finally calmed himself enough to continue. “Exalted Ship-Commander, I am Sub-lieutenant Skreeow of the Communications sector. Over the past few days, I have been picking up unusual radio transmissions, coming from this solar system. They appear to be artificial, and, and”- now he had to pause for a moment to force himself to go on- “from what I have been able to determine by the shifted frequencies of the signals, are being emitted from Tosev-3!”
Firestar was so shocked; he let his ginger fur rise up along his body. “Are you suggesting that the native Tosevites have managed to develop technologically enough to harness electricity?” He glanced slightly at the holographic image of the mounted armoured warrior that was still being shown.
“Exalted Ship-commander, I suggest nothing,” Skreeow replied, now appearing more ill-at-ease than before. “I am merely reporting to you a new source of data that may prove crucial to this entire mission. I have already spoken to the Communications sectors of other ships, and they are obtaining such similar transmissions.”
Fireheart paused to sort out in his mind what his ears had received. “T-thank you for calling me about this Skreeow [he didn’t even bother with his rank].” He ended the call, and quickly gave a command to the computer. Sure enough, all the data the sub-lieutenant had mentioned appeared on the screen. After studying this information, he asked the computer for implications. The implications were also as Skreeow had said: those were artificial radio signals coming from Tosev-3.
In a near whisper he mewed out, “Great StarClan!” What else besides radio did the natives know about already?
Chapter1:
- Spoiler:
- Just like the holographic image of Tosev-3 had appeared as a planet floating through space, so did the actual world itself, through an armourglass window, appear as nothing but an image on a hologram. But to see its other side, Firestar would have to wait for the planet to complete half orbit. Looking away from the window [and the world he would soon have to face], he returned his gaze back to the command station of Fleet-lord Aktvar’s bannership: the E.S. Fernier.
All the Clan leaders and deputies were here, along with the Empire’s ship-commanders, and some Rezput war chiefs. The Empire’s Conquest Fleet-lord [and Head of the Coalition operations] Aktvar, stood at opposite ends from the large window that showed Tosev-3. He glared down at his own holographic version of the planet, whose real presence on the window seemed unwelcoming to the meeting. Firestar hoped he would never receive such a glare from him.
“As we all know,” the gray tabby Mewtkaz finally spoke. “The native Tosevites have proven to be far more technologically advanced, than what we had anticipated before setting off on this expedition.” His sea-green eyes now looked at all the assembled members of the meeting.
Firestar heard a gruff snort coming from Leopardstar.
“When we of the Clan Confederation joined up with your emperor’s Conquest Fleet.” The last three words the RiverClan Leader emphasised in a low growl. “We had been told that the planet that was to be conquered was sparsely inhabited by rather ‘primitive’ beings, and the land itself was vastly undisturbed wilderness streaming with clean air, fresh-water, and abundant prey-potential wildlife.”
The holographic image of Tosev-3 was replaced by a sequence of images showing Clan-friendly environments, and numerous species of animals.
“Now we come instead to a planet that’s vastly inhabited by ‘primitively industrialized’ beings that’ve turned much of the wilderness for agricultural, industrial and urbanized purposes. Pollutants fill the air and water as we speak, while the numerous herds and flocks of certain species that could have sustained the Clans for generations are nowhere to be found. If you ask me,” Leopardstar mewed as she stood up to face the Fleet-lord better. “Had we actually known what we were putting ourselves into, we would have strongly refused with taking part in any such mouse-brain expedition like this!”
Many white rows of teeth were bared by the Imperial ship-commanders at Leopardstar, while Mistyfoot, the RiverClan Deputy gave a defiant hiss at them.
“Enough!” Aktvar barked.
The ship-commanders obediently, but reluctantly, settled down. Relief swept inside Firestar, since he and Greystripe sat between the two RiverClan Mewtki and the more numerous Imperial officers. Aktvar turned his attention on Leopardstar, who was still standing.
“I understand your frustration, Leopardstar. Had we known the Tosevites would advance at such a rate under 8oo years, the Empire would have taken the proper preparations for the conquest.”
“And why wasn’t such measures taken in the first place?” the Leader of WindClan, Tallstar asked as he too stood up. “Why weren’t more recent probes sent here first? Why did the Conquest Fleet set off now instead of earlier?”
Firestar noticed the Fleet-lord becoming agitated with such questions that were beyond his ability to answer.
“Firstly, because my superiors back on Home did not truly for-see the need to take such measures. Secondly, by the time we would have received such newly updated images, and made the preparations, I’m certain the Tosevites’ technology would have advanced much further, making the conquest mission even more dangerously difficult to accomplish than now. As for your last question, I’m sure you were around to know that our Empire was still trying to expand on Home first, before making any attempts of other planetary invasions_”
“And your Empire’s attempt to conquer Home failed during the last three wars it waged against the Clans.” Blackstar, ShadowClan’s Leader added in. “Not to mention getting rid of Scourge and BloodClan, if we hadn’t helped you.”
Aktvar glanced at the large black-pawed white male Mewtkaz, before continuing.
“Besides, at the time we had not yet developed the ability for space-craft to ‘Jump’ across the light-years. By the time a conquest fleet would have reached Tosev’s system, even through the use of ‘half-light-speed’ travel, the Empire would still be facing a more advanced opponent than what had been anticipated.”
Tallstar began to take his seat again, though this was more because his aging body needed rest, rather than his troubled mind being contempt with Aktvar’s explanations. Leopardstar still stood defiantly.
Firestar looked at Mistyfoot beside him, who was now standing up to speak.
“Another matter we need to be aware of about the Tosevites, is that they are all in the midst of what is either a single massive war, or a set of many smaller simultaneous wars across their world.”
The Fleet-lord became a bit more relaxed, now that the subject had been changed to what was happening on Tosev-3.
“Indeed it seems to be that way. We might be able to use this moment of their disunity to our advantage, if done right.”
Many brighten faces of agreement began to appear across the Command station.
“We must however try to avoid any cause for them to focus on fighting us rather than themselves.” Mistyfoot mewed with caution. “Nothing brings unity among foes greater than the threat of a common enemy. That was how we became a united confederation, rather than separate warring clans, in the first place.”
The ship-commander of the E.S. Fernier, Krien, stood and bowed to Aktvar in the manner of respect the Mewtki of the Empire used when addressing to one of higher rank, and waited for his Fleet-lord to acknowledge him to speak [which many Clan-Mewtki viewed as degrading and/or time wasting]. Aktvar calmly looked down at the commander of his banner-ship, and equivalent to a Clan Deputy.
“Exalted Fleet-lord,” Krien began to speak with concern in his voice. “Is it possible that we can overcome the Tossevites successfully? Along with radio and radar, they have aircraft and armoured fighting vehicles of their own. The new probes we’ve sent have clearly shown them.”
“But the weapons they have are far inferior compared to such similar types that we posses.” Blackstar was butting in again, “that has also been clearly shown by the probes.”
Cobrastar [FireClan’s Leader], rose up from his seat and confronted the ShadowClan leader.
“The Tosevites have a far greater number of these weapons currently in action though, and more being manufactured all the time.” The tan and dark-gray speckled male spoke grimly. “Our supplies are limited to what we have brought with us through the galaxies.”
“Do the Tosevites posses’ atomics?” A Ship-commander named Sturga jeered. “If all else fails, we can simply annihilate them into submission.”
“And reduce the planet’s value for the settlement of both the Clans, and colonists.” Rainstar of LeafClan mewed gravely.
“What other option would you have us choose?” Ghoststar of IceClan replied. “Turn our tails back Home, accomplishing nothing?!”
“I would rather do that than drag the lives of my clan-mates into an uncertain war on a planet that isn’t ours to begin with.” Leafstar of SkyClan answered back.
Blackstar turned towards the brown tabby and cream female and sneered. “If you didn’t have the strong scent of milk on you, I might have said you sounded more ‘like’ a worried queen than a real clan Leader.”
Firestar could not believe what he just heard, and neither did all the other Mewtki present.
“Are you accusing Leafstar of being a coward?!” Sharpclaw, Leafstar’s Deputy, growled at Blackstar.
“Not really, I’m just saying that her instincts as a mother may be fogging up her judgement. Not that having a female Leader with kits is a real surprise considering everything else about SkyClan. If Tigerstar were around I’m sure he would have plenty to say about it. ”
If all the Mewtki had been shocked by Blackstar’s previous remark, they were now totally appalled! Firestar’s fur began to rise.
“Talking about Tigerstar has nothing to do about our current situation!” he growled. “We, the leaders and deputies of the 8 Clan Confederation, must now decide on what path to take.”
“But the real decision lies with the Fleet-lord.” Krien spoke up.
Firestar looked at Aktvar, and waited for his response, as did everyone else in the command station. The Fleet-lord gazed at all the assembled leaders and commanders before him, then at the holographic image of Tosev-3.
“We may have to adjust ourselves to what lies ahead. But the weapons and warriors of the Empire and the Clan Confederation are ready. The Conquest of Tosev-3 shall proceed as planned.”
StarClan watch over us all. Firestar silently prayed. The Clans’ fate was now sealed.
Chapter 2:
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- Brambleclaw made his way towards the nursery of the Confederation’s Starcamp, Silverpelt, where all the Mewtki of the eight clans were living until they established their new territories on Tosev-3. With the way things were happening on that planet, he wondered how they would manage when that time came, which seemed really soon.
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This is a very detailed and creative fan-fic. Could you put it in spoilers though? It takes up a lot of space!
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Yes I will. Thank you for reading it. I ....hope...I can write and post more on here soon.
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This is a very interesting and creative idea
You're doing well with it too! Even though i've never read the WW series it was based off of, I enjoy reading this. Looking forward to see Ch.2. Good job!
You're doing well with it too! Even though i've never read the WW series it was based off of, I enjoy reading this. Looking forward to see Ch.2. Good job!
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Thank you Windypaw. I'm going to try and write chapter 2 really soon. Once I finish a few things of course.
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Hey there! Sorry for not making updates on here. I've been wanting to write more about this for some time.
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Hey! You've missed a lot. You should come on the chatbox sometime!
Well write it then!
Well write it then!
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Awesome! This is my favorite fanfic EVER !!! The only thing bad is the amount of writing. We need more, more, more! I am sooo "liking" this!!!
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Thanks very much Sunbeam, I'll do my best to make more very soon. I'm highly honoured that you chose this fanfic of mine as your all time favourite. When you say the amount of writting do you mean too much per chapter, or not enough? Anyways, going to see about either do chapter 2, or a second part of chapter 1, haven't really decided yet.
Thanks also to you Gingrblaze, and I missed you and everyone else too. It's so good to be back.
Thanks also to you Gingrblaze, and I missed you and everyone else too. It's so good to be back.
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I just meant more chapters. The amount of writing per chapter is perfect. Keep writing!
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Please post Chapter Two as soon as you can I just love the detail in this FanFic and I can't wait to read more!
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I will Maplestream. Thanks for your support and patience. I'm so glad to hear you enjoy this. Hopefully I'll get it on here soon.
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This is AWESOME Honeystar!!! I love it and you did such a great job with the story! Its such a unique idea. I'm liking this now! Cant wait for the next chapter!
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Awesome story Honeystar! It's really detailed, and creative. I like how it doesn't linger too much on detail like mine often do. Good job! And keep writing
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Thanks a lot Birdflight and Brightstar. And I will do my best to keep writing it.
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I have a million stories that I can continue... But I just don't have the time. :/ Lol I can relate if it isn't possible to update this for weeks.
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Well I'm going to try updating really soon. I just need to look at somethings before I do.
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Ok, I'm really sorry for not updating this again.....
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Honeystar wrote:Ok, I'm really sorry for not updating this again.....
It's okay. Just take your time
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Pace yourself. Work at your own speed.
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I guess Honeystar has his things to worry about since he's not a kid
Shall I lock this hun?
Shall I lock this hun?
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No Please Don't!!!!!!
I may have things to do but I will write something soon, now that I have a clearer idea on what I need to write.
I may have things to do but I will write something soon, now that I have a clearer idea on what I need to write.
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