Poems! I love to do them!

Twisted Jaw-from Crookedstar's point of view

Disgust fills my mothers gaze,

Pity fills my fathers,

I never met for this to happen,

Now my mother hates me,

and then clan thinks I'm uselss,

Oh Starclan why,

did you make me slip and break my jaw?!

If I could re-do it all,

I would in a heartbeat,

I hate the way other cats stare at the gathering,

But now I am leader,

I can't worry about myself anymore,

I need to look out for my clan!


Look mother! Look mother!


I want to make you proud!

But you don't care do you?

I wish you love me,

oh how I wish..........

Why won't she love me-AHfur

WHy won't she chose me?

Am I to plain and dull for her,

SHe rather have a cat with power,

like Brambleclaw,

and now, she hates me,

Oh STarclan why.....

WHy.....why won't she love me??

Do you mean like Oakheart? Oakheart is his brother. And didn`t Cheesestar already make a poem topic?