Some poems I wrote

These are 100% true

I moved there in February 2008,
I was at the young age of 2,
Just starting to learn what life is,
I was shy and didn’t know anyone there,

Time flew by
From days, to weeks, then months,
Still not yet a single friend came to me,
Until one Halloween night.

Her name was Bay
We looked so alike,
We may as well have been twins,
Best friends forever we will always be.

As the years flew by, we always got along,
We went through everything together,
We thought we would never have to separate,
However we were wrong.

On a warm spring day,
I had to tell my best friend the worst news,
I had to tell her that I was leaving Alabama and moving away,
I was moving to a whole new state and a whole new place,
I had to tell her I was moving to Tennessee.

Now that I have moved away,
We no longer get to hang out every single day,
We don’t get to hug each other and tell one another that we love them,
We hardly even ever get to hear each other’s voices on the phone anymore,
It’s like our friendship is breaking apart.

I just wanted to say,
That no matter how far apart we are,
No matter whether we’re together or not,
Our friendship continues,
Forever and ever.

The second one is about a tornado htat I have been through. it s hte only actual tornado I have been through but i have been through liek 5 hurricane.s.

Long, long ago it happened
I was no older than four years old
It dark and scary night,
More like a living nightmare,

I remember it was April 10,2009,
I was sleeping away one night then I suddenly started to hear noises,
Frightening, loud, and strange,
Not long after,
My dad ran in my room, and carried me down the stairs,
I had no clue what was going on but I knew it wasn’t a good thing.

I was thrown in a closet with no windows,
My two sisters, my mom, my pets, and finally my dad all climbed in,
We stayed there for hours, but it was dreadful enough,
It felt like days.

Even blocked by the closet walls,
I could still hear the noises and possibly see bright flashes,
Howling wind, crashing thunder, hail pounding at the windows,
Suddenly, a loud crashing noise sounds,
Followed by a brief shaking of the earth,

After all the noises and the shaking, everything stopped,
Everyone climbed out of the closet,
A lot of looking around took place,
Seconds later I knew what that loud crashing and the shaking was about,
A big tree had fallen just a few yards away from my house.

It all happened because of a violent, strong, and disastrous storm,
It is known as a tornado,
This one was strong and violent enough,
It was ranked as an F5.

Very good Crimsonpaw! The tornado one is a very good description of what it's like to go through a natural disaster. I never went through an experience like that, but I can really imagine myself there because of your choice of words. The best writers use senses beyond just sight to describe a scene, and that's exactly what you did. I look forward to reading your next work!

thanks! I got a 100 on the project

Wow! I'm impressed haha. This is very good writing, Crimsonpaw. There's so much detail and imagery that it paints a picture in my mind. the second one reminds me of the time I went through some sever weather. Not as sever as that though. Anyways, very good work!

the teacher didnt recuire them to be true stories but mine were. When I got the papers back the teacher wrote a comment saying 'thanks for sharing [insert name here]'

Wow an F5 tornado! your lucky that your family survived.

I was so young just old enough to remember but I remember it clearlly

My sister is a huge fan of poems so she had me read this. Personally I am not to big of a poetry, unless it's Edgar Allen Poe, but I found your story truly fascinating! I love that you survived that day and that you shared your story with us. I hope You don't face something like that again.~