The Cat That Became a Kit Chapter started! Please comment!

by Brambleheart5 October 12th 2011, 17:11

PROLOGUE
Hazel, a brown she-cat, hissed as a black dog barked at her.
"Hazel!" Yowled her sister, Lucy, who was going to have kits any second now.
Hazel dodged a blow from the dog's paw. Oliver, Lucy's mate, stood by Lucy his eyes closed as Hazel fought for her life.
"Help!" Hazel yowled.
The dog's jaws snapped an inch away from her throat. Suddenly the dog gave a growl and grabbed her throat. Oliver sprang forward and clawed at the dog until it dashed off. hazel stumbled up.
"That was a close one." She meowed. "Thanks for saving me, Oliver."
Oliver didn't say anything he just ran up to Lucy. Hazel sat down not that far off and waited for Lucy's kits to come. Soon three kits lay on the ground all born dead. Lucy dipped her head back in a wail.
"It's OK,Lucy." Hazel meowed walking up to her.
"First Hazel now my kits!" Lucy wailed.
Hazel froze. "What do you mean I'm right here?"
Hazel bent down over one of the kits. A calico she-cat. Hazel laid a paw on the dead kit. Suddenly everything went black and silent. What was happening?

CHAPTER: 1
Moons went by and Hazel had lived in darkness and silence until one day she could hear and see. She opened her eyes to see Lucy looking down at her.
"She's opened her eyes!" She yowled. "Welcome to the world, Callie."
Hazel froze. Callie? Hazel stared at her sister.
"What are you talking about?" Hazel asked.
Lucy smiled and licked the top of her head.
"Oliver, come look she has opened her eyes!" Lucy yowled.
Oliver dashed up to them and licked the top of Hazel's head. Hazel jerked away.
"what is wrong with you two?" she asked. "I've had my eyes open as long as Lucy!"
Lucy and Oliver looked at each other.
"You learned are names fast for a kit." Lucy meowed.
Hazel twitched her tail and lifted her paw to strike Lucy. She gasped her paw was so tiny. W-what's happening to me? Could I have truly come back as my sister's kit? Lucy purred licking the top of Hazel's head.
"Stop it!" Hazel hissed jerking away.
Lucy kept on purring.
"Stay still my kit." She meowed licking her some more.
"I said stop it!" Hazel spat slapping at her with a paw.
Lucy pushed hazel's paw down with her paw.
"Calm down, Callie." She whispered.
"My name isn't Callie!" Hazel hissed trying to wiggle free of Lucy's grip. "I am you sister!"
"I can see your going to be a handful when you get older." Lucy meowed to Oliver.
Hazel hissed as Oliver licked the top of her head.
"Go to sleep young one." He meowed softly.
Hazel curled up in a tiny ball. Did she have a choice? Nobody ever listens to a kit. Nobody. She woke up to see Oliver leaning over her. She stumbled up. He smiled. Hazel stumbled up and saw a leaf fly by.
"Don't you want to go chase it?" Oliver asked her.
"No." Hazel meowed. "Only kits do that."
"But you are a kit." Oliver meowed.
"No I'm not."
"But you are."
"No."
"Yes."
"No!"
"Yes."
"No! No! No!"
Lucy appeared and shoved in between Oliver and Hazel.
"She's a kit." Lucy meowed. "They think they know everything let her be."
Oliver signaled for Lucy to follow him over to a pine tree.
"She just opened her eyes and she's walking, talking, She won't drink your milk and she doesn't play!" Oliver hissed. "What kind of kit is she?"
"She's ares and you should treat her kindly." Lucy spat. "She's just a kit."
"That's my point!" Oliver hissed. "She's not acting like one but she is one! There's something wrong with her!"
"There's nothing wrong with her!" Lucy hissed.

CHAPTER: 2

Hazel stared up at the stars as she sat next to Lucy.
"Stars are beautiful aren't they, Callie?" Lucy meowed.
"I guess so." Hazel shrugged. "I mean they're not that amazing."
Lucy turned to Hazel for a moment then meowed, "I thought kits loved everything?"
"I'm not a kit" Hazel spat.
Lucy just shook her head and stood up. Hazel watched her walk up to Oliver who was collecting moss.
"Believe me now." He hissed.
"Maybe there is something wrong with her." Lucy whispered glancing at Hazel. "She's to smart and doesn't care about anything."
"I told you." Oliver meowed.
"But she's still our daughter and we must treat her that way." Lucy meowed.
Hazel listened to them. Should she act like a kit just so her sister could have a kit? They wouldn't believe she was Hazel anyways. She stood up and padded over to them. Wait kits can't walk perfectly they stumble toward people. Hazel thought. She started to stumble toward them. She stopped at Lucy and stared up at her. Here goes nothing.
"Will you play with me?" Hazel mewed.
Lucy's eyes brightened. "What do you want to play?" She asked smiling.
Hazel froze. She never thought of what to play!
"How about..." Hazel trailed off.
What was the use? She wasn't a kit. She didn't even know any games to play.
"Nevermind." She meowed padding off.
Lucy gazed after her. "Why can't she be a normal kit?"
Hazel sighed. Would she be a kit forever?

CHAPTER: 3

Hazel curled up in a moss nest with Lucy. She closed her eyes hoping she would wake up as herself but she knew she wasn't dreaming. Soon she fell asleep. She opened her eyes as a bark filled the air. She jumped up.
"Hazel!" A voice yowled.
"Wha-" She was cut off as something knocked her down.
It was a dog. It growled and snapped at Hazel. What was going on? Suddenly it grabbed her throat. She yowled as she fell to the ground. Her eyes flung open. She was in her moss nest with Lucy again. It was all one dream.
"Callie," Lucy meowed. "You were having a nightmare go back to sleep."
"I know I was having a nightmare!" Hazel spat. I just wish this nightmare would end.
Hazel closed her eyes again. All she wanted was to be was hazel again. That wasn't much to ask was it?