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Post by Frost September 25th 2011, 23:03

First topic message reminder :


Name: Phantom

Status:Deceased

Age: 27 moons

Rank: RiverClan Warrior, former; IceClan Warrior, former; Dark Forest Leader, former

Mentor: Shimmerfur (RiverClan), Silverhawk (Dark Forest), Fallendust (Dark Forest)

Apprentice: N/A

Well-Known Kin: Bluestar, Oakheart, Mistystar, Stonefur and whoever are their descendants

Weaknessess: Being small in size, she relies more on her agility than her strength. Not very used to climbing trees but prefers jumping. Hates showing weakness before others. She is easily influenced by her emotions, which is her greatest flaw.

Special Traits:
Good at camouflaging and is extremely hard to spot unless you look for her very closely. Ability to swim well. A fast runner. Agile and nimble. She excels in stealth and is good at blending herself with the shadows.

Family: Whiteshadow (Father), Hunter (Mother), Rogue (Sister), Coldfur (Brother), Aere (Adopted Sister)

Personality: Mysterious and unnerving. Hardly anyone knows much about her because of her lack of presence... She used to be a stubborn kitten, full of confidence. However her personality changed as she grew older. Her close friends thinks of her as a mischievous she-cat who was always up to no good. She enjoys company and is always looking forward to adventures.

Description: Blue-silver she-cat with a white-tipped tail and cold blue eyes which were inherited from her mother. She has a long tail, pale underbelly and a lean figure. Her claws are very long with incredibly sharp edges.

History:
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Special thanks to the members of WCF whom I referred to their characters sheets Wink


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Post by Noxe June 1st 2012, 11:52

The pictures are really good, I love how Silverhawk just sounds evil from his name (:<
*Maplestream shivers* oh how i hate the dark forest
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Post by Phoenixwing June 1st 2012, 15:51

Oh, its nice how you included stuff about the Dark Forest! Very Happy And how did you add words onto the pictures?
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Post by Shrewfang June 1st 2012, 16:14

There's websites where you can do all kinds of stuff! I'd tell you the name of one I go to, but It's against the rules.
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Post by Nyx June 1st 2012, 16:25

Lol, PM it to me please. I think it just applies to forums. But don't do it again! I'm letting you go this time. xD

Oh, and this conversation never happened. Razz
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Post by Shrewfang June 1st 2012, 16:33

Do what? I didn't do anything?
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Post by Noxe June 1st 2012, 17:35

Don't spam, I think.
Yeah, I'm really curious to find out how Icey did that...
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Post by Cheetahfur June 1st 2012, 19:40

Wait... Your character has hair?
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Post by Frost June 2nd 2012, 00:22

I don't use a website for the words in pictures. Its a programme called photoshop! Very Happy

AND WHAT DO YOU MEAN CHEETAHFUR?
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Post by Auburnflare June 2nd 2012, 00:41

More like "cat-hair". And don't talk to your kit like that~! Jk But this is what I meant: She has a vicious scar across her right cheek from a kithood accident and always hides it behind a long tuft of white fur.
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Post by Shrewfang June 2nd 2012, 00:44

(Iceclaw speaking): What's wrong with cat-hair? O.o
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Post by Auburnflare June 2nd 2012, 00:48

It's not real. XD
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Post by Shrewfang June 2nd 2012, 00:55

What? Lol
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Post by Frost August 10th 2012, 04:06

Updated! Iceclaw no longer exists but now its Chrome, the FEARED ONE Very Happy

And I've changed quite a lot! Personality and history. Do take a look!
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Post by Legendflower August 10th 2012, 12:39

In one spot it doesn't have the light blue color and it says "Chromewas". Also it still says "More about Iceclaw's family" and in the family section it still says Iceclaw.

Other than that, I love it ! Good job. Very Happy
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Post by Frost August 10th 2012, 22:56

Thanks Gingerblaze, I've edited the errors you pointed out Wink
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Post by Roguestar August 11th 2012, 11:32

I like the updatedness! Neat history, too. Great job! Thumbs Up 2
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Post by Frost August 16th 2012, 23:12

Updated with new history.
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Post by Caraway August 16th 2012, 23:35

Well the history matches Aere's Razz

There are a few mistakes in your description, just small grammatical errors like "... azure eyes, which was inherited her mother." other small things like "...barely visible stripes along the back with white tipped ears..." I think, since both errors come from the same sentence, it'd sound better as "...with faint stripes along her back and white tipped ears. Her eyes are azure, a trait she inherited from her mother."

In your personality, you wrote "... her lack of presence." in special traits, similar wording was used. The repeated detail sounded strange, like a reminder. I'd suggest different wording in your personality, or moving special traits lower in your profile Smile

Other than that, it's good. The family is very detailed x)

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Post by Sunbeam September 12th 2012, 01:49

I really like your descriptiveness! Can everyone have two characters? Or just GM's?
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Post by Frost September 12th 2012, 04:52

Nah you can have I think three roleplaying characters. One example is Lighty's another character, Heavystep yeah :3 hope it clarifies
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Post by Sunbeam September 12th 2012, 05:07

So could I make another character sheet?
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Post by Frost September 12th 2012, 07:52

You could if you want but for the title, label it as "(name of character) Sunbeam's second RP character" or something like that. Make sure you state that it is your second roleplay character Wink
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Post by Shimmerpaw September 12th 2012, 15:14

The picture for Feral is like a edited picture I saw XD "Street cred, I haz it."

ANYWAY! I love your charachtar sheet, (Who's Coldfur???) I recignize some pictures from the site. I like the history, too.
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Post by Caraway September 12th 2012, 15:28

@Sunbeam you don't need RP characters if you're making new characters ever RPG. Most of the time, it's if you are using the same character for all RPGs.

Many members have edited versions of your family pictures as their avatars x) Was there a Coldfur in the books? If so, is he the same cat as your brother?
I sound like my media homework Razz
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Post by Frost September 16th 2012, 06:58

Updated! I just realised that I edited it 61 times O___O


I meant RP characters as in for your clan.
Nah there wasn't a Coldfur. He was created from my imagination Razz
Coldfur's the brother of Phantom.

Well I got all these pictures on google images and edited them just to add the names.

Sparkpaw, well the Feral picture I have is the original one without edits :3
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