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Phantom
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Name: Phantom
Status:Deceased
Age: 27 moons
Rank: RiverClan Warrior, former; IceClan Warrior, former; Dark Forest Leader, former
Mentor:Shimmerfur (RiverClan), Silverhawk (Dark Forest), Fallendust (Dark Forest)
Apprentice: N/A
Well-Known Kin: Bluestar, Oakheart, Mistystar, Stonefur and whoever are their descendants
Weaknessess: Being small in size, she relies more on her agility than her strength. Not very used to climbing trees but prefers jumping. Hates showing weakness before others. She is easily influenced by her emotions, which is her greatest flaw.
Special Traits: Good at camouflaging and is extremely hard to spot unless you look for her very closely. Ability to swim well. A fast runner. Agile and nimble. She excels in stealth and is good at blending herself with the shadows.
Family: Whiteshadow (Father), Hunter (Mother), Rogue (Sister), Coldfur (Brother), Aere (Adopted Sister)
Personality: Mysterious and unnerving. Hardly anyone knows much about her because of her lack of presence... She used to be a stubborn kitten, full of confidence. However her personality changed as she grew older. Her close friends thinks of her as a mischievous she-cat who was always up to no good. She enjoys company and is always looking forward to adventures.
Description: Blue-silver she-cat with a white-tipped tail and cold blue eyes which were inherited from her mother. She has a long tail, pale underbelly and a lean figure. Her claws are very long with incredibly sharp edges.
History:
More about Phantom's Family
Other Cats
Special thanks to the members of WCF whom I referred to their characters sheets
Name: Phantom
Status:Deceased
Age: 27 moons
Rank: RiverClan Warrior, former; IceClan Warrior, former; Dark Forest Leader, former
Mentor:
Apprentice: N/A
Well-Known Kin: Bluestar, Oakheart, Mistystar, Stonefur and whoever are their descendants
Weaknessess: Being small in size, she relies more on her agility than her strength. Not very used to climbing trees but prefers jumping. Hates showing weakness before others. She is easily influenced by her emotions, which is her greatest flaw.
Special Traits: Good at camouflaging and is extremely hard to spot unless you look for her very closely. Ability to swim well. A fast runner. Agile and nimble. She excels in stealth and is good at blending herself with the shadows.
Family: Whiteshadow (Father), Hunter (Mother), Rogue (Sister), Coldfur (Brother), Aere (Adopted Sister)
Personality: Mysterious and unnerving. Hardly anyone knows much about her because of her lack of presence... She used to be a stubborn kitten, full of confidence. However her personality changed as she grew older. Her close friends thinks of her as a mischievous she-cat who was always up to no good. She enjoys company and is always looking forward to adventures.
Description: Blue-silver she-cat with a white-tipped tail and cold blue eyes which were inherited from her mother. She has a long tail, pale underbelly and a lean figure. Her claws are very long with incredibly sharp edges.
History:
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- Icekit was born in the dead of winter, together with her sister, Rogue and her brother, Coldkit. Her father, Whiteshadow, wanted his kits to be raised under RiverClan but her mother, Hunter, kept Rogue behind because of her deformity. Having lived in RiverClan from young explains her extraordinary swimming skills and her lack of fear for water. Her birth itself was a curse, for her mother was a rogue. Being rejected from a young age, Icepaw had no friends nor company in RiverClan. Her ever protective brother, Coldfur, always stayed by her side, standing up for her and gradually, she started to gain confidence of herself. Even though she tried her very best to prove her own loyalties to her Clan, she knew deep down in her heart that there will never be a place for her in RiverClan.
Icepaw had a dream one day with a strange tom called Silverhawk. He claimed that she was one of his kin and he had died many many moons ago. Little did she know that he was from the Dark Forest . He recruited her when she just became an apprentice, thinking that she was worthy enough to be trained. She was trained under Silverhawk for a while before becoming Fallendust, a formidable Dark Forest warrior's apprentice. She was a newly-made warrior when she found out she had been tricked. Just as she left, Fallendust mysteriously told her a prophecy.
"You will lose everything you love, go through a time of darkness, loneliness and misery. But all those are worth it, to become the cat you were supposed to be."
Iceclaw was deeply puzzled by the prophecy but she ignored it, thinking that Fallendust was just trying to trick her again. It became true when her father died in a battle against ThunderClan and eventually, even her brother mysteriously disappeared, leaving her behind in a mournful and lonely world. Her foster mother, Frozenfur, drowned in a flood while her first apprentice, Dustpaw, died from greencough. She couldn't it any longer and hence, left the Clan at a mere age of 14 moons. She wandered far and wide across the snowy plains, hiding in the darkness as she spied on the other Clans. She learned some of their secrets and managed to use her new skills to survive by herself. She changed her name to Phantom then.
During a short stay at RiverClan, whom Brightstar welcomed her warmly, she was out wandering alone and discovered a cave. Curious, she went inside, not knowing that the place was dangerously fragile. When a gust of strong blew, the icicles that were formed at the ceiling broke off and fell onto Phantom. She died of massive blood loss.
Phantom, now a wandering spirit, eventually decided to go back to the Dark Forest, a place where no one judged her for her past but rather for her abilities. She proved herself to be a great member and is resourceful. In the Dark Forest, she was feared and highly regarded by many. She met another she-cat by the name of Aere and they became best friends. After many moons of training, she was promoted to be one of the legendary leaders of the Dark Forest. However, after the Battle of the Clans, she found forgiveness in her heart and called off the battle against the Clans. StarClan granted all the Dark Forest cats with a new life for them to repent.
More about Phantom's Family
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Whiteshadow (Father): A black tom with a distinctive white pelt and bright yellow eyes. He is a well-knowned RiverClan warrior for his battle skills. He is the youngest son of the RiverClan leader, Mistystar. He favours his son more than his daughter, which makes Phantom extremely jealous. He was killed in a battle against ThunderClan.
Hunter (Mother): A white she-cat with stunningly beautiful yet cold blue eyes. Hunter is a rogue and lives in the snowy mountains. She saves Whiteshadow's life one day from a harsh blizzard and from then on, the both of them developed a strong friendship. They eventually became mates.
Rogue (Sister): A dark gray she-cat with white-tipped ears and a permanently twisted paw. She lives with her mother as arranged by her father because of her deformity.
Coldfur (Brother): A blue-gray RiverClan tom with gray paws. He has one green and blue eye. He loves his sister, Phantom, very much and is always by her side until one day he mysteriously disappears and nobody has heard of him ever since.
Aere (Adopted Sister): A short-haired brown tabby Dark Forest she-cat. She trained with Phantom when they first joined Dark Forest and they have shared many memories and are very close.
Other Cats
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- Dustpaw: Small gray tom with a white chin and paws. Has a scruffy coat and wide amber eyes. His father was a kittypet and thus, like Phantom, he was shunned by the Clan. Phantom's apprentice. He died from greencough.
Frozenfur: Long-furred pure white she-cat with gray eyes. She is a popular queen, known for her love for kits and her devotion in bringing them up. She was Phantom's foster mother but drowned in a flood.
Fallendust: A formidable black-furred Dark Forest tom icy blue eyes. His front fangs are very long and sharp. He actually fell in love with Phantom but she had no feelings for him. Until now, he still watches over her, sometimes whispering to her in her sleep.
Silverhawk: Silver-furred Dark Forest tom with a pale muzzle. He has a distinctive fluffy tail and has long striped hind legs which is useful for springing. He claims that Phantom is his kin but no one knows whether it is true or not.
Special thanks to the members of WCF whom I referred to their characters sheets
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Re: Phantom
The pictures are really good, I love how Silverhawk just sounds evil from his name (:<
*Maplestream shivers* oh how i hate the dark forest
*Maplestream shivers* oh how i hate the dark forest
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Re: Phantom
Oh, its nice how you included stuff about the Dark Forest! And how did you add words onto the pictures?
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There's websites where you can do all kinds of stuff! I'd tell you the name of one I go to, but It's against the rules.
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Lol, PM it to me please. I think it just applies to forums. But don't do it again! I'm letting you go this time. xD
Oh, and this conversation never happened.
Oh, and this conversation never happened.
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Do what? I didn't do anything?
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Don't spam, I think.
Yeah, I'm really curious to find out how Icey did that...
Yeah, I'm really curious to find out how Icey did that...
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Re: Phantom
Wait... Your character has hair?
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I don't use a website for the words in pictures. Its a programme called photoshop!
AND WHAT DO YOU MEAN CHEETAHFUR?
AND WHAT DO YOU MEAN CHEETAHFUR?
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More like "cat-hair". And don't talk to your kit like that~! Jk But this is what I meant: She has a vicious scar across her right cheek from a kithood accident and always hides it behind a long tuft of white fur.
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(Iceclaw speaking): What's wrong with cat-hair? O.o
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It's not real. XD
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What? Lol
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Updated! Iceclaw no longer exists but now its Chrome, the FEARED ONE
And I've changed quite a lot! Personality and history. Do take a look!
And I've changed quite a lot! Personality and history. Do take a look!
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In one spot it doesn't have the light blue color and it says "Chromewas". Also it still says "More about Iceclaw's family" and in the family section it still says Iceclaw.
Other than that, I love it ! Good job.
Other than that, I love it ! Good job.
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Thanks Gingerblaze, I've edited the errors you pointed out
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Updated with new history.
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Well the history matches Aere's
There are a few mistakes in your description, just small grammatical errors like "... azure eyes, which was inherited her mother." other small things like "...barely visible stripes along the back with white tipped ears..." I think, since both errors come from the same sentence, it'd sound better as "...with faint stripes along her back and white tipped ears. Her eyes are azure, a trait she inherited from her mother."
In your personality, you wrote "... her lack of presence." in special traits, similar wording was used. The repeated detail sounded strange, like a reminder. I'd suggest different wording in your personality, or moving special traits lower in your profile
Other than that, it's good. The family is very detailed x)
There are a few mistakes in your description, just small grammatical errors like "... azure eyes, which was inherited her mother." other small things like "...barely visible stripes along the back with white tipped ears..." I think, since both errors come from the same sentence, it'd sound better as "...with faint stripes along her back and white tipped ears. Her eyes are azure, a trait she inherited from her mother."
In your personality, you wrote "... her lack of presence." in special traits, similar wording was used. The repeated detail sounded strange, like a reminder. I'd suggest different wording in your personality, or moving special traits lower in your profile
Other than that, it's good. The family is very detailed x)
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I really like your descriptiveness! Can everyone have two characters? Or just GM's?
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Nah you can have I think three roleplaying characters. One example is Lighty's another character, Heavystep yeah :3 hope it clarifies
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So could I make another character sheet?
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You could if you want but for the title, label it as "(name of character) Sunbeam's second RP character" or something like that. Make sure you state that it is your second roleplay character
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The picture for Feral is like a edited picture I saw XD "Street cred, I haz it."
ANYWAY! I love your charachtar sheet, (Who's Coldfur???) I recignize some pictures from the site. I like the history, too.
ANYWAY! I love your charachtar sheet, (Who's Coldfur???) I recignize some pictures from the site. I like the history, too.
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@Sunbeam you don't need RP characters if you're making new characters ever RPG. Most of the time, it's if you are using the same character for all RPGs.
Many members have edited versions of your family pictures as their avatars x) Was there a Coldfur in the books? If so, is he the same cat as your brother?
I sound like my media homework
Many members have edited versions of your family pictures as their avatars x) Was there a Coldfur in the books? If so, is he the same cat as your brother?
I sound like my media homework
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Updated! I just realised that I edited it 61 times O___O
I meant RP characters as in for your clan.
Nah there wasn't a Coldfur. He was created from my imagination
Coldfur's the brother of Phantom.
Well I got all these pictures on google images and edited them just to add the names.
Sparkpaw, well the Feral picture I have is the original one without edits :3
I meant RP characters as in for your clan.
Nah there wasn't a Coldfur. He was created from my imagination
Coldfur's the brother of Phantom.
Well I got all these pictures on google images and edited them just to add the names.
Sparkpaw, well the Feral picture I have is the original one without edits :3
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