Shrewpaws destiny

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Chapter 1 ( Brambleclaws POV )

The clan was silent and the air was still...
It was at the dead of night and the whole clan gathered around Thornclaws dead body...
Brambleclaw was speechless. Thornclaw had always been a lively warrior and a skilled fighter as well. Brambleclaw couldnt believe he was dead...
"Tonight we are here to sit vigel for Thornclaw..." started Firestar. "He died saving Shrewpaw from a twoleg monster."
Shrewpaw was devestated and he leaned into someones fur. There were too many cats and Brambleclaw couldnt see who.
"Let each of us pay our respects..." Firestar continued.
When it was his turn Brambleclaw whispered " Your courage and faith in the clan will always be respected..."
He turned to look for Squirrelpaw. He was about to talk to her when she went over to Shrewpaw and whispered something into his ear. He nodded and they both went into the apprentices den.
Brambleclaw sat gloomily in the warriors den. Was he right? Did Squirrelpaw really care for Shrewpaw more then him...
Brambleclaw curled up uncomfortably missing Squirrelpaws sweet scent....

This is my first fan fic and it may not be as good as others but i hope you enjoy the story as it unfolds!

Wow, it sounds so epic!
I can't wait until the next part comes out!