Hawkwing (update)

Name: Hawkwing

Nickname: Splash (cause he fell in river once)

Gender: tom

age: 17.8 moons

clan: Thunderlcan

rank: warrior

favourite warriors characters: Crookedstar, Brackenfur, Ashfur and Half moon

Childhood: Hawkkit's went out of the Riverclan camp one day with his parents, they were showing him their territory when they were attacked by rogues, Hawkkit's parents had been killed but Hawkkit had escaped he ran away not knowing were he was going and ended up on Thunderclan territory, a Thunderclan warrior found him and took him back to Thunderclan he was raised in Thunderlcan and to this day he is a great Thunderclan warrior.


Description: Hawkwing is a smallish sized tabby tom with brown shortish fur and small white pads, with long razor sharp claws that can easily shred an enemy, he has a reddish pink small nose and his inside ear is pink. He has long white whiskers and big jaws with knife sharp teeth and a scar on his left eye from an fight with two young foxes, and distinctive lime green eyes, and a brown fluffy tail.
Crush: its Mousefall (I made it up)

Family:


Mother: Moonclaw white furred she-cat with ice blue eyes and a black paw

Father: Wavepelt bluish grey tom with green eyes

Brother: Nightfrost black and white tabby tom with blue eyes

Destiny: to become Thunderclan leader and eventually lead Thunderclan

Hawkkit



Hawkpaw

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Lots of detail I like the childhood history, it's very interesting.
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ok thanks for the feed back

He sounds adorable Despite the sharp teeth and stuff of course. Nightfrost was actually a cat on this site before. She's my friend in real life but she doesn't come on here anymore Anyways, can't wait to see he pictures!

oh really? I didn't know that   

17.8 moons? First time I ever saw a decimal  

Yes I have to agree with Caraway that Hawkwing sounds adorable (: Nice job!

thanks   

Hawkwing, one word posts aren't allowed. You need a minimum of 3 words Do read the site rules carefully (:

sorry I forgot