Hawkwing

Cat Name: Hawkwing

Gender: Tom

Age: 25 moons

Favorite Warriors Characters: Firestar, Bluestar, Swiftpaw

Appearance: Hawkwing is a large, long furred tom with brown tabby markings on his head back and tail, while his paws, stomach, muzzle, blaze, and chest are all pure white. His eyes are amber, and he has a fluffy tail.

Personality: Hawkwing is a very focused individual. He is loyal to his clan, and anyone he considers a friend. He is confident in his abilities as a warrior, but does not trust easily.

Special Traits: Very good at being silent, sharp claws.

Weaknesses: Sometimes being large makes him easily seen, he doesn’t trust easily,

Family: Storm (deceased) and River (deceased) – both were loners

History/Origins: Hawkwing never knew his parents, both of them killed when they were attacked by rogues when he was only a week old. He was taken in by a stray she-cat who’d recently had kits, and then dropped off at the entrance of camp when he was 3 moons old. He was then taken in and raised as a clan cat.

I think this is very good for your first draft. It's basic but you also just started. You should have seen my first draft, it was horrible. If you want to see my current one click the little skull on my signature. xD Whether if it is still horrible is up to you. It is a nice start though.