RainClan, MagmaClan, CloudClan and LightningClan (RPG)

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I decided to make an RPG, cos I like RPGs. I thought I'd do one a little like normal Warriors, but in a different forest and with different Clan names (LightningClan replacing ThunderClan, RainClan replacing RiverClan, CloudClan replacing WindClan and MagmaClan kinda replacing ShadowClan, but MagmaClan cats are evil). The alternate Clans also have the same type of territory, e.g. CloudClan lives in moorland and so on. This is the Character Sign-up Sheet:

Cat name:
Cat age:
Cat gender:
Appearance:
Clan rank:
Personality:
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Favourite fresh-kill:
Mentor (if any):
Apprentice (if any):
Clan:

The rules are:
Four characters allowed
No god modding
No killing other cats without permission from the victim, but let me know too
If you want, you can kill only your OWN characters if you don't want to play them anymore
Cats aren't immortal, not even leaders!
Fill out the character file thingy
Have some fun here! Of course, all site rules apply also.

Here are my characters!
Cat name: Foxstar
Cat age: 56 moons
Cat gender: tomcat
Appearance: orange-brown tom with mid-length fur, dark coloured ears, blue eyes and a white chest, muzzle and white tip on tail
Clan rank: it's pretty obvious- leader
Personality: secretive, kind and gentle, but a ferocious killer when battle ensues
Strengths: long, sharp claws, a long tail for balance and a very strong fighter, he still has 6 of his nine lives
Weaknesses: short, blunt teeth, a painful scar on his front left paw
Favourite fresh-kill: water vole and salmon
Mentor (if any): ...um... too old...
Apprentice (if any): one of the deputy's kits
Clan: RainClan

Cat name: Shatterpaw
Cat age: 9 moons
Cat gender: tomcat
Appearance: large brown bengal-type cat with black irregularly-shaped spots all over his body like shattered glass and yellow eyes
Clan rank: Apprentice
Personality: smug, ignorant, eager to train, bullying cat
Strengths: size, long, sharp teeth, spots and colour to blend into the undergrowth
Weaknesses: short tempered, slow to strike
Favourite fresh-kill: large plump frogs
Mentor (if any): the deputy?
Apprentice (if any): he is an apprentice...
Clan: MagmaClan

Cat name: Spottedberry
Cat age: 26 moons
Cat gender: she-cat
Appearance: tortoiseshell and white she-cat with long fur and green eyes
Clan rank: medicine cat
Personality: sweet, loving, loyal and gentle
Strengths: medicine cat pretty much explains it.
Weaknesses: has no battle experience at all
Favourite fresh-kill: hare
Mentor (if any): none
Apprentice (if any): maybe?
Clan: CloudClan

Cat name: Sparkfur
Cat age: 13 moons
Cat gender: Tomcat
Appearance: Light ginger tabby tom with bright yellow eyes. he is small and his fur stands slightly on end, as if he was hit by a very mild electric shock
Clan rank: Warrior
Strengths: Lightning-fast reflexes aid him in battle, can go without food for a while
Weaknesses: He can't stalk very well, and usually goes for slower things
Favourite fresh-kill: vole
Mentor: none
Apprentice: He is maybe not quite ready for that yet...
Clan: LightningClan
Personality: Energetic, jittery, inquisitive, happy little cat
~I accept myself!!!~

~Oh hai there, you're accepted Scarheart! Haven't heard from ya in a while.~

"Yes, Blazetail. MagmaClan. Those thieves! They'll pay! I will announce this at the next Gathering. They will have until the next one to choose sides," Foxstar spat angrily. "It's either they side with those LightningClan cats, or the CloudClan cats. Or both. I don't care, I don't care much for being enclosed by trees or being completely exposed on a hillside." He picked up the smelly lizard and started walking towards camp. "Wow, I must be claustrophobic and agoraphobic at the same time. Who thought that would happen, ha ha!" he laughed. He was determined not to let his anger spill out too much, for he was a fine leader. Some said he was like the legendary Crookedstar. He had heard whispers of great leaders in other forests, like Crookedstar, Bluestar, Tallstar, Raggedstar, Firestar. And of the bad cats too. Tigerclaw. Mapleshade. Darkstripe. Brokentail. He wondered if any of the cats in these other forests had territory squabbles too. He decided he would walk with StarClan tonight in his dreams (the cats of this forest have developed the ability to share tongues with StarClan in their sleep at will) and ask them about these great leaders. "Blazetail," he called. "Can you take... this, run ahead and... wait, no, no, no. No. I must be the one to show them. Ok, Blazetail, carry on."

( is it ok if nightmoons mom is mapleshade but she ran away and who's the leader of lightningclan?)

Icy eye gleamed from the shadows of a Bush. Nightmoon padded out where the eyes laid. Back from getting moss sobbing wet with water. She looked over to darkshadow and the others. Looking around not seeing her leader she continued with her duties.

~Hmm... I don't think LightningClan has one yet. We only have Nightmoon, Darkshadow (Thunderclaw's character) and Sparkfur (mine) in LightningClan. You can make the leader if you like! Well, I think Nightmoon would have to be like a grand-daughter to Mapleshade, because she was dead before Crookedstar was an apprentice. Or maybe great-grand-daughter. I don't know. It really depends when this is set, but I think it will be set near the end of the first Warriors series, because Crookedstar, Bluestar, Tigerstar, Brokentail (I'm calling that because Bluestar took away his Leader name when ThunderClan took him hostage) and Mapleshade were all dead. So, she can be a descendant of Mapleshade, or a great-niece or something. Or, we could say that one of her kits survived... and she never noticed in her grief. And that kit birthed Nightmoon's mother after migrating to the new forest, where this RP is set? Is that ok? It's the best I can think of.~

"Oh, hi there Nightmoon!" purred Sparkfur. He walked up to the Clan's newest warrior. "How are you?"

~Is it ok of Sparkfur sorta has a crush on Nightmoon but doesn't quite realise it, because he is quite immature for even a young warrior. He pretty much has the mental age of a 9 moon old kit.~

( I like that idea)


" fine except the water is low." Her voice was muffled by the moss. She placed it by the queen sleeping. " how was everything in camp?" She smelled the air.

Sparkfur sat down and curled his tail around his paws. "I wasn't in camp. I was out hunting when Darkshadow ran into me, and helped me carry my catch home. We got so many, come and see!" he mewed. He ran over to his catch. He had put it a little way away from the fresh-kill pile to show everyone the nest of mice he had caught. It was enough to feed the elders for at least 2 meals. Sparkfur was going to make sure that the mice would go to the cats who needed them most, like the kits, queens and elders.

She padded after him. Amazed by all the prey she knew she was a natural born fighter. Ever since she was born she was the first to walk and see. She started fighting soon as she could walk. Knowing she was sometimes feared for the personality of mapleshade. Looking into the sky silverpelt began to fly over. " night already? "

"Seems to be," Sparkfur mewed, looking up at Silverpelt. He wondered if his ancestors were looking down on him, smiling, purring, helping him. He went to the warrior den and curled up in his nest. "StarClan? Where are you?" he called out in his dream. A glowing white cat greeted him. "I am Whitestorm, the former deputy of ThunderClan," the white warrior meowed. "Oh, of course, you don't know what ThunderClan is, young warrior, do you? Well, it is a Clan in another forest quite far from here." Whitestorm chuckled.
"Whitestorm, why are you here? What must you tell me?" Sparkfur asked.
"Your Clan is in danger. The falling water has found scaled critters near it's home. The storm and the high water is dragged into a whirlwind of disaster. It ends with a tornado of claws, teeth and fur. Pass this on privately to your medicine cat, young Sparkfur. StarClan is relying on you," Whitestorm meowed to Sparkfur. Then he flickered out and Sparkfur had a dreamless sleep until morning.

~I decided to make a prophecy for CloudClan and LightningClan to let them know of the coming threat the rogue warrior has caused MagmaClan and RainClan.~

Nightmoon awoke to hear rustling. She stood up. She walked on over the sparkfur poking him. "Sparkfur wakeup someones outside and its not a lightning clan warrior.

( can I make a rouge character that helped the rougue but was captured by lightning clan.)

~Yeah that's fine. I suck at making prophecies lol~

"Ssh!" Sparkfur hissed quietly. "We'll creep up on him and grab him and... and... maim him!"

(Thanks)

Name: Nightmare
Age : 15 moons
Gender: F
Looks- Pitch black cat with one red eye and the other a glowing blue when she runs her glowing eye leaves a small trail and sparkles
Rank : rougue
strenghts : fear
Weaknesses : her leader
fav kill- anything
Clan : lightning g Cpa. Prison er

~You're accepted Scarheart ~

Nightmare hid in the brambles obeying her leaders orders. She closed her eye that gleamed to not be noticed.

Nightmoon stared into the bushes.

Sparkfur stayed back a bit, as stealth was just not his thing at all. He preferred to be making as much noise as possible to distract the enemy in the heat of battle. He let Nightmoon go in front, as much as he wanted to himself.

Nightmoon snuck forward but crepping in the shadows. She flicked her tail to signal sparkfur to come up.

Nightmare looked franticly around and walked away into the woods.

Sparkfur stepped forward as silently as possible. He went extremely slowly so his stealth would be more effective. His heart was racing, he could hear it thundering in his chest.

" the rougue ran off." She stepped forward. " wanna go after it?"

Darkfur padded up behind Sparkfur and whispered, "What are ou doing out this late at night?"

Nightmoon turned around ti the voice. She padded up to sparkfur. " something a cat was out here."

"Oh all right, Lets go, follow my lead." He said, and began to creep toward the entrance at an angle, signaling with his tail for Nightmoon to come from the other side.

Sparkfur crouched down in the shadows and widened his eyes to see someone signalling him.

Nightmoon creeped up to the side.

Nightmare vanished under the undergrowth and hid her scent.

Darkshadow stopped suddenly. "Mousedung! I've lost the scent!"

Sparkfur rushed forwards silently. "What should we do? Search everywhere? Get more warriors? Tell the leader?" he whispered. He looked at Darkshadow and Nightmoon.