The Hunt for Coldgaze (RPG)

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(I didn't know whether to put this in Member-Created RPGs or Other RPing, so I just put it in Other RPing. Is that right? )

Someone (Sunbeam) requested an RP called "The Hunt for Coldgaze." I thought it was cool, so I wanted to make it.

If you are unfamiliar with the story of Coldgaze, it's in the history of one of my character sheets.([You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]) This RPG is about group of ThunderClan cats on a hunt for a certain murderous warrior named Coldgaze who went missing when he killed Grasspelt and Goldenfur. Now he will (hopefully) be found again.

Rules:

And the sign-up sheet:

Code:

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Mate/Crush:
Personality:
Appearance:
Other:

Mine:

Name: Ravenpaw
Age: 7 moons
Gender: tom
Mate/Crush: Flamepaw (crush)
Personality: cheerful and bright, always has a good spirit, unless things go too far.
Appearance: sleek black with amber eyes.
Other: parents were killed by Coldgaze. Spottedpaw and Frostpaw's brother.

Name: Frostpaw
Age: 7 moons
Gender: she-cat
Mate/Crush: Thunderpaw
Personality: sassy and grumpy. Likes to e the center of attention, but is still extremely loyal. Especially to her family.
Appearance: snowy white with soft emerald green eyes
Other: parents were killed by Coldgaze. Spottedpaw and Ravenpaw's sister

Name: Spottedpaw
Age: 7 moons
Gender: she-cat
Mate/Crush: N/A
Personality: shy, humble, and timid. She hates fighting other cats because she likes peace, but will do absolutely anything to get the chance to rip Coldgaze's throat out.
Appearance: dappled brown with amber eyes
Other: parents were killed by Coldgaze. Ravenpaw and Frostpaw's sister.

Name: Flamepaw
Age: 9 moons
Gender: she-cat
Mate/Crush: N/A
Personality: extremely, superbly sassy. A troublemaker who LOVES to break rules.
Appearance: my avatar.
Other: no one in her family was killed by Coldgaze, but is eager to kill him.

The RPG will start when someone (maybe Ravenpaw) will decide to stand up and try to get back at Coldgaze and kill him. The patrol will be formed and the cats will begin their journey. Anyone can join in at any time.

Fleetpaw walked into camp with her mentor at her side, carrying a vole in her mouth. She bounded toward the fresh-kill pile and dropped the prey, Berryclaw did the same. "Fleetpaw, good job today and we will go training tomorrow." Berryclaw smiled at her and padded to the warriors den, leaving Fleetpaw by herself.

Thunderpaw looked over at Fleetpaw."What about her?"He asked, and spotted Darkfur coming towards them."And him."Thunderpaw whispered, as Darkfur came to stand in front of them."You look like a couple of elders gossiping.You know gossiping is bad."He said and added,"Spottedpaw, how does some battle training sound?"

Name: Blackpaw
Age: 10 moons
Gender: Tom
Mate/Crush: Not at this time
Personality: Shy and cheerful normally, fierce and vicious when needed
Appearance: Profile pic
Other: None of his family was killed by Coldgaze but despises him anyway

~Who will be his mentor?~

~Accepted! Enjoy the RP ~

~Cool! Need a mentor for the rp though. Anyone's fine by me.~

~You don't really need a mentor right away since Sparrowflight isn't active anymore I don't think there's any warriors avalible to be mentors. You can make another character to mentor Blackpaw if you want

~Ok then!~

Name: Adderstrike
Age: 25 moons
Gender: She-cat
Mate/Crush: Somebody
Personality: Very quick-thinking, acts all tough and resilient, but really just a big softie on the inside
Appearance: Brown tabby Maine Coon type cat with green eyes
Other: Blackpaw's mentor, her mother named her Adderkit because of an adder that killed a fox that was about to murder Adderstrike when she was a newborn kit. Hates Coldgaze because he mauled her brother Hawkheart and left him severely disabled (Hawkheart now lives with Twolegs and goes by the name of Tommy)

~Can I rp Adderstrike now without being accepted first because you already accepted Blackpaw? Or do I have to wait for you to accept her before I can rp her?~

(Good question ) You do have to wait, and you're accepted.

~Cool. Thanks for the tip.~
Adderstrike and Blackpaw got back from a hunting session.
"I caught a bird today!" called Blackpaw proudly to Fleetpaw, Thunderpaw, Spottedpaw and Flamepaw. "I had to climb a tree and raid the nest. Adderstrike took the young ones back. Look! It was a whole family of sparrows!"
"Yes, you did a good job today, Blackpaw," mewed Adderstrike. "You will be a good warrior when the time comes."
"Thank you Adderstrike! I will take all the sparrows to the fresh-kill pile. I don't need help!" said Blackpaw, and he ran off to put the food on the pile.

Flamepaw chuckled when she heard Blackpaw announcing his catch. "Good job, Blackpaw!" she mewed. A thought suddenly entered her mind. "Hey Blackpaw!" she shouted over to him. "You wanna know a secret?" Flamepaw winked at Spottedpaw.

The dappled she-cat suddenly realized where the ginger apprentice was going with this. Blackpaw would make a great addition to the journey - he was cheerful, but fierce and vicious sometimes. And that's some great traits to have on a journey to hunt someone down.

Fleetpaw nodded in acknowledgement as Blackpaw finished bragging about his catch. She then wondered what secret Flamepaw had to say to Blackpaw as she called over to him. I guess its not that important. Fleetpaw thought, I bet its just them and their gossiping. She nuzzled through the fresh-kill pile making sure not to pick out her scrawny vole, and she picked up a mouse. She padded a few paw-steps away from the pile and settled down to eat.

Thunderpaw looked Blackpaw over. Well, he thought, he would be a good recruit. he nodded to Blackpaw and turned back to Spottedpaw.

Blackpaw wondered what Flamepaw wanted to talk to him about.
"What's up, Flamepaw?" he asked. "What do you need to tell me?"

~Haven't been on too much since Monday because I couldn't find my kindle. I only found it just now.~

Thunderpaw padded up to Blackpaw.He couldn't shut up. "We're going to hunt down Coldgaze!" He meowed louder than he meant to. He slapped his tail over his mouth, and looked around to see if anyone had heard.

"Whoaaaa..." Blackpaw whispered. "Really?" he mewed in a frightened tone. "But-" he stopped. He wouldn't remind them of that tragedy. He couldn't speak. Blackpaw was scared out of his pelt. He was determined not to show it. "I'll come with you, if you like." he miaowed confidently. He decided to be quiet for a while because he had a feeling Thunderpaw would appreciate it. He padded off, picked up his sparrow and went back to the apprentice den. He ate slowly, then slept.

"Really." he whispered as Blackpaw padded away. He wanted so bad to sink his claws into Coldgaze's pelt.

Fleetpaw pricked her ears and her fur bristled as she heard the name "Cold-gaze" come from the huddled group of apprentices. She turned her head to the apprentices and saw Blackpaw pick up his sparrow and pad quietly to his den. Now I really wonder whats going on... She flicked her tail in annoyance as they continued to chat and she finished eating her mouse.

Blackpaw woke from his nap. He got up and stretched his legs, then he padded out of the den. He must've slept for a long time because it was nearly moon-high. He decided to go and do something. He didn't know what. It would take his mind off Coldgaze for a while. Boy, would he be glad when the apprentices and him killed that murderer... He stopped walking abruptly. He heard a rustling in the bushes. This made him feel creeped out, maybe even slightly scared.

Thunderpaw brought down the mouse and licked his lips. He always went out at night for a stroll and think, and tonight the forest was full of prey, so he decided to hunt. Suddenly, a vole broke cover.Thunderpaw jumped after it... right into a thorn bush. He flailed around trying to free himself. "AAAARRG!Of all the times!" He said. "Someone! Can anyone please help me."

Blackpaw heard a call for help. "Huh? Thunderpaw?" he said. "Are you there? Can you hear me?" Blackpaw ran round some bushes until he found Thunderpaw, and then he hauled him out of the bush. "What are you doing here?" he asked. He brushed some thorns that had stuck in Thunderpaw's pelt onto the ground with his forepaw. "You know what? I thought you were Coldgaze for a minute there! I guess I'm just paranoid... that..." he trailed off. Blackpaw shuddered with fear.

Frostpaw padded away from Ravenpaw. She saw Fleetpaw eating a mouse. She would be a great recruit! Frostpaw thought, and padded over to the apprentice. "Hey Fleetpaw. Do you happen to know of a white cat by the name of Coldgaze?"

It wasn't often that Blackpaw got scared. But the fear that ate at his stomach was indescribable. Only one word could describe it. Coldgaze. "Come on Thunderpaw, let's go back home. I need my sleep. Today has been a whirlwind of emotion for me... I think sleep will help. It helps lots of different things, I'm sure it will help this," he said in a tired way. And with that he slowly padded in the direction of the camp. "You comin' or what?" he called out.

Thunderpaw looked Blackpaw up and down."Coldgaze?" He said. "No. I just like to hunt at night. But I think I'll stay out for a little longer..." He trailed off then said, "Actually I've been thinking of Coldgaze. I think we should leave tommorow. That's what I think. And if no one else is going, well, then I'll go by myself."

"I'll come with you if you like. If the rest of us don't. You're not alone, you have me. You'll be fine. It's just- I think we should wait until the younger Patrol members are a little stronger for the Battle with Coldgaze. Are there any med cat apprentices here? Cause I can't remember... we may need a med cat. I have NO knowledge of herbs whatsoever. We should make a mini Clan made up of apprentices just for this Journey. Then we could have leader, deputy, med cat, warriors... do you like it?" Blackpaw didn't realise he had been speaking for so long. He could tell by the expression on Thunderpaw's face that he should shut up now. "Ok then, I'll shut up... but still, was it a good idea?" he asked.

Fleetpaw turned her head to Frostpaw at the sound of her voice, "Um, yes of course I know him. Well, I have heard of him." She blinked, "Why do you ask?"