Risen ~ Golden Blood
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Risen ~ Golden Blood
- WANT TO JOIN THE STORY?:
I recently made a topic asking for volunteers to be in the story. I will accept people even after I start the story. http://www.warriorcatsforum.com/t2440-volunteers-needed#75667
- ABOUT:
Young warrior apprentice Birdpaw has a lot to learn about her new life as an apprentice of WindClan. She endures training, wars, and many other things. But as her new life progresses, Birdpaw receives a disturbing prophecy from StarClan she must prevent it's truth from happening. She can't tell anyone, either. "Wind, Shadow, River, and Thunder war and rage, but as the golden blooded riser progresses, 4 ancient ones in newfound brotherhood collide into two, brother against brother" is her first prophecy, but how will she reveal it's meaning? She recieves new prophecies every moon; ones that make no sense. As the prophecies unravel before Birdpaw, how will she act when her last and most important prophecy collide with her first?
- ALLEGIANCES:
- REMEMBER: If you want to join the story, please refer the link I've shared above. If you read all the people's positions, you'll know which ones are made-up in here, and if that position was made-up I will edit itRIVERCLAN
Leader: Brightstar
Deputy: Streamfur
Medicine cat: Dapplesong
Medicine cat apprentice: Hawkpaw/leaf
Queens: Lillymaw, Rainsong, Kestrelclaw, Whitelily, Violetshade, Maplepelt
Elders: Mistyfoot (), Hightail, Ravenclaw, Sixclaw, Ironfang
Warriors: Sunbeam, Firestorm, Sailfoot, Fangtalon, Youngpelt, Asheye, Dawnflare
Apprentices: Treepaw, Mountainpaw, Lillypaw, Hyperpaw (LOL), Lightningpaw
WINDCLAN
Leader: Rockstar
Deputy: Dawnstorm
Medicine cat: Gingerblaze
Medicine cat apprentice: N/A
Queens: Foresttail, Kittydapple, Sageflower
Elders: Mousetalon, Lillystream, Onewhisker (), Crowfeather, Heathertail
Warriors: Frozengaze, Lightningstorm, Lightfoot, Treetail, Quailear, Falconfrost
Apprentices: N/A
SHADOWCLAN
Leader: Foreststar
Deputy: Seartalon
Medicine cat: Lillystream
Medicine cat apprentice: N/A
Queens: Padtail, Honeyface, Brindlefoot
Elders: Brokenleaf, Pounceclaw, Tigerfang, Whitestorm, Heatherfalcon
Warriors: Shadowtalon, Nightpelt, Blackfoot (2), Soottail, Feathershine, Petaltail, Harmonysong
Apprentices: Flamepaw, Shallowpaw, Swiftpaw
THUNDERCLAN
Leader: Whisperstar
Deputy: Mudfang
Medicine cat: Dappleleaf
Medicine cat apprentice: Quailpaw
Queens: Dovewillow, Flowertail, Saltshine, Rivertalon
Elders: N/A
Warriors: Willowtail, Duskskitter, Spidertail, Whitepelt, Snowflight, Jaybeak, Sidetall, Blossomheart, Snowfrost
Apprentices: N/A
LONERS/OTHERS
Lunarlight - Loner
Birdflight - StarClan prophecy giver
Phantom - DF Leader
Aere - DF leader
Thin Air - Loner
- MAIN CHARACTER DESCRIPTIONS:
- Toffee/Moonstream/Moonstar - A small, beautiful tabby with a light silver pelt. She has a brown and cream face, dark silver tabby marks, a bit of white on her paws, tail, body, and face. She is lean and an even body keeps her steady in battle. She has slightly hooked claws and pointy ears. She has bright blue eyes. Much like my avatar
Snow/Snowfrost - A dark gray tom with a white tail and sharp fangs. He has bright blue eyes and very large paws.
Streamfur - Light gray she-cat with blue eyes
Brightstar - Long-legged, short-haired silver-platinum tabby she-cat with brilliant
green eyes twined with faint streamers with gold; and inky black
stripes. She has a small, black nose and angled ears
Lunarlight - dark brown tom with cream and white spots and dark brown dotted belly.
Birdflight - Beautiful dark brown she cat with coal black tabby stripes and a white
underbelly. Also her front left paw and her back right paw are white.
She has white ear tips and her left ear has a notch in it from a battle.
She has beautiful golden eyes and her foster mother, Runningstream says
they remind her of the sun, bright and alluring. Birdflight has a
somewhat long tail and whiskers and very sharp claws
- PROLOUGE:
Birdflight looked at the dark, tall pine forest as it's scent and itself flowed over her. She was waiting. Soon, as her fellow StarClan members predicted, would be the location of the prophecy. Her starry eyes followed the looming shadows, examining them. It would be a while, but she mind as well get used to the scent. It would soon be filled with the foul scent of lost warrior blood, anyway, so mind as well remember it to restore for later. A rustle in the leaves startled the StarClan cat, and she faded into thin air.
Brightstar and Streamfur padded out of the brush. The cold aura of something made them wince; it was not that cold outside. Brightstar looked at the pines. "So, Streamfur," she began, staring at the beautiful pines, "what was it you needed to speak to me about?" Streamfur shuffled her paws as her silver fur rustled in the burst of wind that came in from time to time. She didn't know how to start it. "Well," she said shakily. It was obvious was she was going to say, thus summing up Streamfur's nervousness. "I was wondering, well- RiverClan's warriors have been scarce. Lifeblood has been over-spilled, body's gone limp by the second. I....." she again shuffled her paws. "I believe we should start rebelling against another clan." She said it quickly and in a hushed voice. Brightstar turned her sharp gaze back to the stars, considering. "Rebelling?" she whispered to herself. She turned around with a despaired expression. "But..." she trailed off, her words evaporating into the air. "Why? The clans are already troubled, Streamfur," she finally managed. Other than the whispering voice of the despaired willows, all was quiet. "Just a suggestion," Streamfur whispered to her, and let her sharp ears down. She turned around to go back, but Brightstar stayed, looking at the ground. What about recruiting kittypets? she thought, but then quickly washed away the horrid thought. "Kittypets?" she chuckled out, and yowled in a humorous way. She turned around and, inhaling the sweet scent of fresh pines, stalked off into the darkness; into her clan's destiny.
- CHAPTER 1:
Toffee scrambled up her twoleg's tall wooden fence and looked at the dark, clustered pines. She had always wanted to go, but it was too risky. She inhaled the sweet scent of the pines, savoring the moment. "Today's the day..." she whispered to herself. She was now 6 months, so she figured it was the perfect day for her to explore the rim of the unfamiliar place. She licked her claws gingerly and got ready to pounce after the forest wind that was calling her name. Right before the pounce of powerful legs, the dawn's wind picked up her mother's gentle voice. "Toffee!" it echoed sweetly. Toffee tensed and shot one last glance at the ground below her, but turned around and pounced in her owner's backyard. She darted for the hearth-fire warm home, spraying large clumps of dirt behind her. Small white dots were starting to sprinkle the dawn sky as Toffee pranced inside and next to the warm hearth besides her litter-mates.
"Mother!" Toffee squealed as a gentle tongue pierced her velvet-soft fur, "I....." her voice trailed off. She realized it wasn't such a good idea to mention she almost went into the forest. "Nevermind," she murmured, looking up at her mother's gray face. She pounced up on her mother's velvet-like back and rubbed er paws against the short fur. She giggled and hopped off, sticking her rump in the air as her mother did the same. "I'm going to get you!" her mother's silky voice streamed out as she pranced after her kit. She then slammed her kit on her back, and pounced above her, batting at her from above. "Mother!" the kit squealed, and wormed from under her mother's shadow.
The playing eventually stopped, and the hearth dimmed as all the kits fell into a deep drift. An exception being Toffee, of course. She woke up as the morning light streamed through the tinted windows and looked at her dozing family. Sprawled out gingerly, snoring. She snorted and crept out of the kitten door to the backyard, and with one glance behind her she darted out, hopping onto the fence again. She looked again at the vast expanse of forest and land in front of her, and purred. Is it time? Should I go? she thought, glancing behind her only to thankfully see an empty, lush backyard. Finally, she scrunched up her tiny paws, aimed for an area in front of the forest, and, with all her might, leaped off, landing at the brink of the tall, bare forest. "Woah..." she whispered, and paced in front of the trees. She felt as the scent illuminated her, as the freedom filled her with pride. She jumped when a smoky gray tom jumped in front of her just as she was about to blindly dart into the forest.
"I don't suggest that for a kit like you," the cat hissed, snaking his head forward to the kitten's. "Those cats are more than you can handle, in there." Toffee shrunk down, looking up at the tom with big, fear-lined eyes. She mewed to herself and started backing away toward her fence. The tom softened. "I.... didn't mean to scare you, kit," he said, stepping forward and rising his tail. "I was just.... warning you." Toffee stopped, and puffed up again. "Oh..." she whispered to the tom, who crept closer. "My name is Snow, and I live far away from here, but I go here a lot," The dark gray tom mewed to her softly. Toffee tensed, and finally reached the rink of her fence and got ready to climb back up, but stopped. The tom finally corned her, and crossed his front paws in front of each other, still flicking his tail. "The cats in there are wild, and will tear you to shreds. I'm hoping to join them," he said boastingly, puffing his chest out. "My mother, Forestblaze, lived there, and so did my father, Eaglestrike." Toffee stepped forward. "Oh?" she purred with excitement. "I.... I would like to join." The tom reacted with a surprised expression. "Good luck, but I'm not taking you in there," he chuckled. A distant yowl echoed throughout the territory, and the tom's ears pricked. "Snowfrost!" The voice pierced through ears for miles. Snow stiffened, and turned around to the forest. He turned back to the kit and bowed. "I have to go," he said with a deep voice, and burst for the forest, jumping on a branch and making his way deeper.
Last edited by DawnStorm on December 24th 2012, 19:16; edited 12 times in total
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Nice so far! It's pretty cool! Write more soon!
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^^^^ Hahah it's kind of....... strange right now I just added more, though
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My school computer is being stupid right now, so I can't read it. But I will when I get home!
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UPDATE: Chapter 1 is finished! Chapter 2 in progress! Lunarlight, you have been introduced to my story! Congrats
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UPDATE: Error. I have to redo the whole story now :/There is now a new plot!! ;DD I accidently deleted all the other content, so I figured I'd have a new main character anyway :3
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