Have A Sparky One! [Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan]
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Have A Sparky One! [Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan]
Well, I'm wriing this and I need some cats for the Gathering, If you would like to be added to the story Just tell me!
Cats Currently added from the site:
Sparkflame
Moonblaze
Honeystar
Grasswhisker
Tigerlily
Sunfire
WindyStorm
DawnStorm
LightningStorm
Viper
Rockpetal
Nightheart
Brokenleaves
Honeyleaf
Sunbeam
Streamfur
CheeseStar
BrightStar
POV's:
WindClan POV: Sparkflame
RiverClan POV: Sunbeam
ShadowClan POV: Sorrelstar?
AwesomeClan POV: OPEN
IceClan POV: Pain??? Or a mystery?
MoonClan: OPEN
Dark Forest: Phantom
Cats Currently added from the site:
Sparkflame
Moonblaze
Honeystar
Grasswhisker
Tigerlily
Sunfire
WindyStorm
DawnStorm
LightningStorm
Viper
Rockpetal
Nightheart
Brokenleaves
Honeyleaf
Sunbeam
Streamfur
CheeseStar
BrightStar
POV's:
- key:
- ?= Unsure
Nothing= Secure
???= What?
WindClan POV: Sparkflame
RiverClan POV: Sunbeam
ShadowClan POV: Sorrelstar?
AwesomeClan POV: OPEN
IceClan POV: Pain??? Or a mystery?
MoonClan: OPEN
Dark Forest: Phantom
- Chapter One, What-Mas?:
Chapter 1, What-mas?:(Told in Sparkflame's POV)
Sparkflame raced into camp and rushed to HoneyStar’s den. “HoneyStar! HoneyStar!” She yelped loudly.
“Huh? What?” HoneyStar looked at the young she-cat barreling into his den.
“I was alking past twolegplace,” She began when HoneyStar intterupted her.
“What have we talked about the twolegplace, Sparkpaw?”
“Sparkflame," she corrected, and I know! But I saw some kittypets talking and they said something about.... about.... CHRISTMAS!”
“What-mas?”
“I don't know, but they said that their Housefolk hung up stockings and they get presents!”
“That’s quite interesting...”
“I know! Can we celebrate in WindClan?”
“I don’t know, we’ll have to talk to those kittypets, and I can bring it up at the next Gathering, maybe we can hold a Clan meeting, you can help me.” He said as he heaved himself out of his nest. Sparkflame bounced exitedly.
“Let all cats fast enough to catch a rabbit, gather beneath the Wind Rock for a Clan Meeting!” HoneyStar yowled from on top of the Wind Rock.
Sparkflame watched as her mother Viper, padded out of the nursery with Forestblaze’s kits trailing behind her and Lightningstorm, her former mentor following. Out of the warriors’ den came her sister, Moonblaze and her best friend Cloudsong. Following behind was Tigerlily, Sparkflame’s mate Grasswhisker and Sunfire. Then was Windystorm, DawnStorm and Honeyleaf, then Rockpetal. Bouncing out of the apprenmtices den was Spiderpaw, Heatherpaw and Burningpaw. Brokenleaves came out of the elders’ den with Nightheart on her tail.
“Today, Sparkflame saw some kittypets talking about a holiday called, Ratmus.”
“Christmas.” Sparkflame whispered.
“Oh, yes, Christmas. She wants the Clan to celebrate, we will give out presents, hang stockings and decorate a tree.” HoneyStar announced.
“Sounds as good as any idea.” Cloudsong said from the crowd of cats.
“I don’t know. We don’t have.... stockings.” Rockpetal said.
“I will bring it up, we will talk to these kittypets and have the best Christmas ever!”
- Chapter 2, Gathering of Christmas:
- Chapter 2, The Gathering of Christmas: (Told in Sunbeam’s POV)
“Cats of all Clans!” HoneyStar yowled.
Sunbeam finished his conversation with Streamfur and turned to face the Great Oak. “Sparkflame looks strangley happy.” Streamfur mewed.
“I’ll say. She looks like she’s about to burst with pride.” Sunbeam looked at the WindClan warrior. His Clanmate... from the Dark Forest.
:Sparkflame is a strange cta, Sunbeam.” BrightStar mewed before she hopped onto her brach on the Great Oak.
Sunbeam looked up at the leaders. Shuriken of IceClan, BrightStar of RiverClan, HoneyStar of WindClan, CheeseStar of AwesomeClan, IceStar of MoonClan, SorrelStar of ShadowClan, MonkeyStar of ThunderClan, and SkyStar of SkyClan.
“The youngest warrior in our Clan has asked me to celebrate a holiday she heard about in twolegplace.” HoneyStar mewed from atop the tall tree.
“Are you a mouse brain, HoneyStar? Letting your warrior to go to twolegplace?” MonkeyStar sneered.CheeseStar looked at HoneyStar. “Well, maybe we can have a whole-forest Gathering. AwesomeClan could cook.” She reasoned.
“You’re agreeing to this?!” A voice sounded from the back of the group.
“I think that is a wonderful idea CheeseStar,” HoneyStar mewed. “We could hold it here. We can give out gifts and eat and have stockings, just like the kittypets told Sparkflame.” He told teh other Clans.
Sunbeam rolled his eyes. “What?” He hissed.
“Then it’s settled!” BrightStar mewed. “Chrsitmas will be held...”
“NEXT MOON!” Sparkflame yowled from the back of the Island.
“Next moon.” Brightstar confirmed.
“The Gathering is Over.” Shuriken called the meeting to an end. Sunbeam followed BrightStar and Streamfur out of the island and swam back to territory.
- Chapter 3, Sparkflame Tells Phantom (Phantom POV):
Chapter 3, Spakrflame tell’s Phantom. (Phantom POV)
“Phantom! Phantom!”
“Phantom, I think someone’s here to se you.” Aere grumbled.
“I didn’t notice.” Phantom mewed sarcastically. She looked around the corner to see Sparkpaw rushing toward her.
“Phantom! Phantom!”
“What!?”
“In WindClan.. well every Clan is celbrating this holiday called Christmas!”
“Why does this concern me? Go train with Sunfire.”
“He’s not here yet.” She grumbled.
“Fine, what’s so important?” Phantom asked.
“Well, I have two questions.” Sparkflame told the leader.
“Then get on with it Sparkpaw.”
“I wanted to ask if you could appear in real life, the waking world, and If you could on.. well in a moon.”
“Well, I can but, why should I?”
“So you can join the celebration of Christmas.”
“Oh... we’ll see. If I decide yes, then we’ll be there. I have to speak with Aere. Go treain.” Phantom told the apprentice.
She watched as she walked away to talk to her father and snorted. Christmas, actually sounds like an interesting holiday. She thought.
(Sorry for the short Chapter!)
- Chapter 4, Christmas Day in WindClan(Sparkflame POV:
Chapter 4: Christmas Day(Sparkflame POV):
Sparkflame bounced around in the clearing of camp. She looked as her mother walked over. “Sparkflame, what in the name of StarClan are you doing?” She asked.
“Well Viper, I’m excited for the Christmas GAthering.” she told the older black she-cat. Viper shrugged. “Young warriors, always talking crazy-like.”
Sparkflame huffed. “Crazy?” she stalked away and stood in the clearing.
~LATER~
“Cats of WindClan, follow me!” Honeystar’s voice rang into the clearing as the warriors queens and the whole of WindClan fell in line behind their leader heading to the Gathering of Christmas.
There will be more Chapters in the other Clans.
I really need some more people for POV's for the two Open Clans if you;re in one, please tell me!
- Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan.:
Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan(Sunbeam POV):
“RiverClan! Gather before me to hear my message!” Sunbeam poked his nose out of the warriors’ den to hear what Brightstar had to say when he remembered it had been a moon and it was time for Christmas, he wasn’t sure when they were going, so he decided to listen to what Brightstar was talking about.
“Haha! Still in your den lazy cat!” An apprentice laughed. Laugh all you want but just know I was on the dawn patrol, and that apprentice has no chance against a Dark Forest Warrior! He thought. The golden tom turned his attention back to the RiverClan leader.
“We will be leaving at sunhigh so we can give WindClan a chance to ready fourtrees..” Brightstar announced.
Sunbeam was relieved that he could get some more sleep, he couldn’t wait to see Birdflight...
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Re: Have A Sparky One! [Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan]
Oooohhh, I like this idea, Spark :3 Some grammar errors, though. Are you making chapter one longer?
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Re: Have A Sparky One! [Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan]
No I don;t think so, I forgot to add I can share this with anyone who would like on Google Docs!
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Re: Have A Sparky One! [Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan]
I thought Forest died? o_O
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Re: Have A Sparky One! [Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan]
You should add me to the story (for the gathering). I like this so far!
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Re: Have A Sparky One! [Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan]
I like it! Add more soon! Just a few spelling errors. Besides that, nothing I could see.
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Pretty good. Write more soon!
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Re: Have A Sparky One! [Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan]
Why didn't you add me? :'(
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Re: Have A Sparky One! [Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan]
@Auburn It says her kits.
@Streamy: Okay!
@Thin: Thank ya!
@Sun: Yay!
@Lunar: the beginning of the story takes place in WindClan.... O.o
@Streamy: Okay!
@Thin: Thank ya!
@Sun: Yay!
@Lunar: the beginning of the story takes place in WindClan.... O.o
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Re: Have A Sparky One! [Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan]
Your tone would make you a good author or childrens' books xD Try to use periods more than commas though, because I notice you overuse them in dialogue bits a lot
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I wanna be added on your story
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Re: Have A Sparky One! [Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan]
Well this is interesting. XD Can I be in your story?
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Yup! And I'm going to add the leaders and deputies at the Gathering. Falsify if you want to appear then tell me how and where, WindClan WILL be inviting the other Clans to their celebration
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Re: Have A Sparky One! [Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan]
Could Sunbeam be at the gathering?
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Re: Have A Sparky One! [Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan]
This is a very cute little story
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Re: Have A Sparky One! [Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan]
Very interesting idea you've got there, Sparkflame. Update quickly!! :DD
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I will! Sure Sunny!
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Rockpetal is a former kittypet! She knows what Christmas is like! Anywho, good story! I am highly enjoying it.
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Re: Have A Sparky One! [Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan]
Maybe Sparkflame will ask her!
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Re: Have A Sparky One! [Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan]
Please add me!
Anyways, I really love that the chapters aren't to long to read, like many fanfics are.
Anyways, I really love that the chapters aren't to long to read, like many fanfics are.
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Re: Have A Sparky One! [Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan]
UH, Lunar, where and when would you like to come into the story? And thank you for the complimants! Really Cheese? A chidrens writer! I never thought of becoming an author! XD
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Re: Have A Sparky One! [Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan]
Ilike it! Only one thing: You said Monkeystar of RiverClan.
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Re: Have A Sparky One! [Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan]
Sparky can I be in the story? :3 I could come in the story cuz I'm in WindClan and all
Anyway, I love it so far Sparky!! Can't wait until Chapter 3
Anyway, I love it so far Sparky!! Can't wait until Chapter 3
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Re: Have A Sparky One! [Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan]
MonkeyStar leads ThunderClan not RiverClan...
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Pfft, how dare you mix me and Monkeystar up Spark. D:< Lol jk, but can you change it? Proofreading your work will always help. ^-^ Nice writing and keep it up!
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