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Post by Shimmerpaw July 11th 2012, 06:29

First topic message reminder :

Shimmerpaw

Name:
Shimmerpaw (Sparky, Feye, Shimmer)

Clan:
ThunderClan

Rank:
Apprentice

Age:
7 Moons

Gender:
She-Cat

Mate(Crush): -

Kits: -

Parents:
Scourge and Unknown She-cat

Littermates:
Chill and Jay (Brothers), Flamepaw (Sister)

Mentor:
Ghostfur

Apprentice: -

Hobbies:
Shimmerpaw enjoys running and hunting with her fellow apprentices. She enjoys walks when her mentor allows it . Though her favorite activity is not following the rules. This has always gotten her in trouble, but Shimmerpaw is a trouble maker.

Special Skills:
Shimmerpaw has large, soft paws which enable her to hunt well. She is a skilled hunter and fighter as well. But her downfall is tree-climbing.

Appearance:
Small, large-pawed she-cat with wonderful brownish green eyes. She has a beautiful, soft calico pelt and long legs. Her eyes are large and round and her tail is short. Her fur is short and silky to the touch.

Personality:
She is bubbly and always happy, though she is very skillful and witty. She has a big mouth, maybe too big for her own good. She cracks a joke all the time, but she is very serious about her work. She is also a big troublemaker, and she LOVES breaking the rules. So you can imagine how full her mentor's paws are.

History:
Kithood: Frost was a happy kitten. Her brothers Chill and Jay and her sister, Topaz, always kept her happy. She sometimes saw her father, Scourge, looking on with a disappointed expression on his face. He told her she was too happy. Frost tried to be more serious, but her father could see she was forcing it. She sometimes broke out into a laughing fit and her father would scorn her. She wanted her dad to be proud. She, Chill,Jay, and Topaz decided it was best to run away. They didn't want to be sad kits. As soon as they made it out of the reach of their father, a sudden flood separated Chill and Jay from Frost and Topaz. Frost and Topaz searched for days for their brothers, without them Frost didn't feel happy at all. Soon, while they were in the woods after giving up on finding their brothers, Frost came upon ThunderClan. The leader, Snowstar, saw how cold and scared Frost and Topaz were, and allowed her into the Clan. Where they named her Shimmerkit, for her shimmery pelt. And they named her sister Flamekit, for her ornage pelt. They were taken in by a she-cat named Sparkfire, who died soon after they were 5 moons old. Shimmerkit and Flamekit spent the rest of their kithood getting to know the customs of the Clans, getting into trouble, being confused how different life was from BloodClan, missing Chill and Jay, wondering if Chill and Jay were dead, and spending time with the other kits.

Apprenticeship: Shimmerkit has only just become Shimmerpaw, but I'm sure she has many adventures ahead of her with her mentor, Ghostfur

Origins:
Shimmerpaw is the daughter of Scourge, and her life in BloodClan was rough. Her father abandoned her when he found out she was too happy for his liking. She inherited his ability to make cats believe what she says.

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Kit:

Apprentice:

Details:






HEY! I wanted to make a sheet about MYSELF in real life so you could get to know me, I won't put like a history or anything I will make everything work Wink (Also the personality is written by Mooni Very Happy)

Name:
Madison (Maddy, Sparky, Bouncy)

Clan:
New England

Rank:
Sixth Grader

Age:
12 Years

Gender:
Female

Mate(Crush):
That, is a secret.

Kits:
Yeah, I highly doubt it.

Parents:
-I don't want to put there names here SOWWY-

Littermates:
Alison (Ali, Hami)

Mentor(s):
Mr. Wade
Mrs. Froment
Mrs. Gagnon
Mrs. Day

Hobbies:
Writing stories, using Warrior Cats Forum, drawing, singing

Favorite Fresh-kill:
Pizza, Mozzarella sticks, bagels with butter, french fries (Wendy's is my favorite), anything salty, chicken (Fried or baked), steak tips, lamb

Personality:
She is a good humored person who can make a joke about almost anything. She can turn arguments inside out if she's not feeling lazy. She can be annoying (according to her sisters) and she is good at making friends. Her mind can get off track easily when she is required to focus on a test. She follows rules well and is sweet.

Special Skills:
She is a fast runner and she has a strong throwing arm. She also has good hand-eye coordination. She also able to handle a bow and arrow.

Appearance:
She is an average-sized 12 year old girl with short, light brown hair. She donated 8 inches to Locks of Love a few months ago. She has warm chocolaty brown eyes. Her eyes are quite round and large. She has freckles lightly dotting the bridge of her nose. Her hair tends to curl up at the ends of her head and her hand usually has "Hi..." written in red sharpie on it.

Origins:
She is mostly Armenian, her great-great grandfather Miskus(or something like that) immigrated to America from Armenia. Her great-grandfather (Grandma's father) immigrated with his wife from Italy making her grandmother 100% Italian, she is also Irish from her mom's side, also Scottish, English and many others.

Details:

Pictures

Young Maddy:

About 3 years ago:

Last Year:

Current:

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Post by Caraway November 3rd 2012, 15:27

Dont worry, I won't edit in detail Razz

In your description, make it "Fluffy, light brown.." instead of "Light fluffy brown".
Put colons for Special Traits and Weaknesses.

Watch for spacing, sentence length and variation and capitals. Also, be careful if you're using their, they're or there. I saw one in the kit history that was wrong. Find it Razz

Other than those things, the updates were significant and your history was nicely developed. Keep writing Very Happy
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Post by Shimmerpaw November 10th 2012, 18:18

The Charrie sheet has been... UPDATED!
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Post by Birdstar November 10th 2012, 19:26

Looks awesome Sparkflame! Wink Love your new avatar btw Very Happy
So here's my "OCD" shining through, on Kits: and Description: make sure there is a space before you type, ya know what I mean? Other than that it looks amazing Sparky!!
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Post by Frost November 11th 2012, 02:45

The pictures are just awesome! Spark-kit is sooooooo cute! Love your new avatar. Add me on your relationship chart :DD
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Post by Sunbeam November 11th 2012, 05:38

In your history you say she mournes for Spottedshine. What happended to her?
FYI: The common age for warriors to retire is 70-80 moons. You don't have to change it, but I thought you might want to know. Super Happy
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Post by Shimmerpaw November 11th 2012, 06:29

@Birdie: Thank you! I'll edit that if I can get on the computer Wink

@Phanny: Thanks! I got them on a site they are Brown tabbys. Should I know you well since Spatkpaw trains in the DF?

@Sunbeam: Spottedshine left to join AwesomeClan. She mourns not knowing what has/is happening to her.

Did you notice all the markixngs on the catt's heads are thevsame? Sneaky
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Post by Redstar November 11th 2012, 11:53

67 moons isn't old O.o And I like thr name Sparkshine better than Sparkflame. :3

1 year (Warrior age)= 12 moons
2 years = 24 moons
3 years =36 moons
4 years = 48 moons
5 years = 60 moons
6 years = 72 moons
7 years = 84 moons
8 years = 96 moons
9+ years (Elder age) = 108+moons
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Post by Shimmerpaw November 11th 2012, 15:58

FINE! Fine, I changed Brokenleave's age, shesh.
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Post by Sunbeam November 11th 2012, 19:40

I didn't mean to make you angry, Sparky, it was just a suggestion. Super Happy
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Post by Redstar November 11th 2012, 22:18

I didn't mean to make you mad, I just wanted to point that out. :/ Sorry if I angered you.
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Post by Shimmerpaw November 12th 2012, 06:31

No, no, don't be sorry. I know posts come over differently than if I were talking to you, Wink
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Post by Shimmerpaw December 3rd 2012, 15:47

HIA! I added some extra stuff, and can someone tell me, am I allowed to have more than one RP charrie?
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Post by Noxe December 3rd 2012, 17:06

I believe you can have 1 other character besides yourself.
Very nice detailed character sheet Very Happy I like the 2nd one too! Nice pictures, especially the elder one of Brokenleaves lol Razz
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Post by Shimmerpaw December 3rd 2012, 17:16

THank you MAple!
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Post by Shimmerpaw March 19th 2013, 08:45

I Updated the entire sheet to match my naem change I spent 2 dys on this I hope you like it!!!!!
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Post by Frost March 19th 2013, 09:05

I think your character sheet improved tremendously since I last saw it, Feye :DD

DF's proud of you. Permission to kill another cat. (HAHA JOKE)

Funny how we have Fallendust under our "Other Characters". Well seems like they're two different cats so i don't really care.

You spelled "details" wrongly for the last super long spoiler. I think I'll try doing that too!
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Post by Shimmerpaw March 21st 2013, 18:39

Fallendust... Haha, oops XD I was rushing when I made the last bit of info, so I might go back and change some anyway.
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Post by Shimmerpaw March 27th 2013, 17:23

I just toatally made a charachter sheet of myself Smile CHECK IT OUT Very Happy
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Post by Frost March 27th 2013, 17:45

You look adorable XD

Love the new update, it's rather creative of you!
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Post by Shimmerpaw March 27th 2013, 18:19

Thank you, and thank you! I thought it would be cool to do XD
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Post by Shimmerpaw May 6th 2013, 17:31

Hey Guis!! (Woah... what's that?) Anyway....

Character Sheet Updated!
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Post by Shimmerpaw July 1st 2013, 14:10

I UPDATED MY CHARACTER SHEET. Well, kind of, I fixed the history to match Flamepaw's since we decided to be sisters.
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Post by Noxe July 1st 2013, 14:26

I like it ^-^ the character sheet about yourself was a good idea Very Happy (LOL I recognize the chicken nugget pic Razz) There's a place in your cat's history that says "Sparkfire, who died soon after they.0 was 5 moons old." You might want to fix it Razz Other than that it's really good!
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Post by Shimmerpaw July 1st 2013, 14:28

Aha, of course you do, Noxe, and I will edit that, thank you! Smile
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Post by Tangleclaw July 1st 2013, 15:05

Shimmerpaw you are very pretty!!!!!!!! I never knew you were born in New England!
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