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Post by Shimmerpaw July 11th 2012, 06:29

First topic message reminder :

Shimmerpaw

Name:
Shimmerpaw (Sparky, Feye, Shimmer)

Clan:
ThunderClan

Rank:
Apprentice

Age:
7 Moons

Gender:
She-Cat

Mate(Crush): -

Kits: -

Parents:
Scourge and Unknown She-cat

Littermates:
Chill and Jay (Brothers), Flamepaw (Sister)

Mentor:
Ghostfur

Apprentice: -

Hobbies:
Shimmerpaw enjoys running and hunting with her fellow apprentices. She enjoys walks when her mentor allows it . Though her favorite activity is not following the rules. This has always gotten her in trouble, but Shimmerpaw is a trouble maker.

Special Skills:
Shimmerpaw has large, soft paws which enable her to hunt well. She is a skilled hunter and fighter as well. But her downfall is tree-climbing.

Appearance:
Small, large-pawed she-cat with wonderful brownish green eyes. She has a beautiful, soft calico pelt and long legs. Her eyes are large and round and her tail is short. Her fur is short and silky to the touch.

Personality:
She is bubbly and always happy, though she is very skillful and witty. She has a big mouth, maybe too big for her own good. She cracks a joke all the time, but she is very serious about her work. She is also a big troublemaker, and she LOVES breaking the rules. So you can imagine how full her mentor's paws are.

History:
Kithood: Frost was a happy kitten. Her brothers Chill and Jay and her sister, Topaz, always kept her happy. She sometimes saw her father, Scourge, looking on with a disappointed expression on his face. He told her she was too happy. Frost tried to be more serious, but her father could see she was forcing it. She sometimes broke out into a laughing fit and her father would scorn her. She wanted her dad to be proud. She, Chill,Jay, and Topaz decided it was best to run away. They didn't want to be sad kits. As soon as they made it out of the reach of their father, a sudden flood separated Chill and Jay from Frost and Topaz. Frost and Topaz searched for days for their brothers, without them Frost didn't feel happy at all. Soon, while they were in the woods after giving up on finding their brothers, Frost came upon ThunderClan. The leader, Snowstar, saw how cold and scared Frost and Topaz were, and allowed her into the Clan. Where they named her Shimmerkit, for her shimmery pelt. And they named her sister Flamekit, for her ornage pelt. They were taken in by a she-cat named Sparkfire, who died soon after they were 5 moons old. Shimmerkit and Flamekit spent the rest of their kithood getting to know the customs of the Clans, getting into trouble, being confused how different life was from BloodClan, missing Chill and Jay, wondering if Chill and Jay were dead, and spending time with the other kits.

Apprenticeship: Shimmerkit has only just become Shimmerpaw, but I'm sure she has many adventures ahead of her with her mentor, Ghostfur

Origins:
Shimmerpaw is the daughter of Scourge, and her life in BloodClan was rough. Her father abandoned her when he found out she was too happy for his liking. She inherited his ability to make cats believe what she says.

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Kit:

Apprentice:

Details:






HEY! I wanted to make a sheet about MYSELF in real life so you could get to know me, I won't put like a history or anything I will make everything work Wink (Also the personality is written by Mooni Very Happy)

Name:
Madison (Maddy, Sparky, Bouncy)

Clan:
New England

Rank:
Sixth Grader

Age:
12 Years

Gender:
Female

Mate(Crush):
That, is a secret.

Kits:
Yeah, I highly doubt it.

Parents:
-I don't want to put there names here SOWWY-

Littermates:
Alison (Ali, Hami)

Mentor(s):
Mr. Wade
Mrs. Froment
Mrs. Gagnon
Mrs. Day

Hobbies:
Writing stories, using Warrior Cats Forum, drawing, singing

Favorite Fresh-kill:
Pizza, Mozzarella sticks, bagels with butter, french fries (Wendy's is my favorite), anything salty, chicken (Fried or baked), steak tips, lamb

Personality:
She is a good humored person who can make a joke about almost anything. She can turn arguments inside out if she's not feeling lazy. She can be annoying (according to her sisters) and she is good at making friends. Her mind can get off track easily when she is required to focus on a test. She follows rules well and is sweet.

Special Skills:
She is a fast runner and she has a strong throwing arm. She also has good hand-eye coordination. She also able to handle a bow and arrow.

Appearance:
She is an average-sized 12 year old girl with short, light brown hair. She donated 8 inches to Locks of Love a few months ago. She has warm chocolaty brown eyes. Her eyes are quite round and large. She has freckles lightly dotting the bridge of her nose. Her hair tends to curl up at the ends of her head and her hand usually has "Hi..." written in red sharpie on it.

Origins:
She is mostly Armenian, her great-great grandfather Miskus(or something like that) immigrated to America from Armenia. Her great-grandfather (Grandma's father) immigrated with his wife from Italy making her grandmother 100% Italian, she is also Irish from her mom's side, also Scottish, English and many others.

Details:

Pictures

Young Maddy:

About 3 years ago:

Last Year:

Current:

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Post by Noxe August 26th 2012, 18:37

Uh... Did you make sure you saved? I don't see Brightstar's or my names on there Sweat
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Post by Shimmerpaw August 26th 2012, 18:52

I didn't add you yet, sorry and did Brightstar ask to be there?
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Post by Noxe August 26th 2012, 20:15

Sparkpaw wrote:Oh, that makes sense now, and thanks Bright and Windypaw, you can tell me if you don't want me to list you as i did, i can list you as a friend if you like.
^I implied that Brightstar wanted to be added XD
The rating's fine Very Happy given that we're in different Clans
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Post by Shimmerpaw September 11th 2012, 16:21

Holala! I have updated and edited so you understand why I keep calling Viper "Mom" oh, and My history is longer, so enjoy that Very Happy

-Sparky Sneaky
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Post by Noxe September 11th 2012, 16:24

Haha Doctor of Doom that's creative Razz I really like your history Smile
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Post by Shimmerpaw September 11th 2012, 16:27

Thakns Maple, I added that when I first made it... O.o
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Post by Nyx September 11th 2012, 16:45

Nice relationship chart. Razz So everyone's your friend? xD
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Post by Shimmerpaw September 11th 2012, 16:51

I guess, You may be a stranger...

But, I'm nice(ish) so I didn't want to me mean by calling someone not-my-friend. And I don't have enymys.
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Post by Shimmerpaw September 17th 2012, 16:37

I edited it, Just tell me if the green is too bright, i can fix it ;3
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Post by Noxe September 17th 2012, 16:42

Yeah, I think you should make the green darker Razz but it looks great! Thumbs Up
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Post by Jade September 17th 2012, 16:45

Lookin' good Sparky Very Happy I like the detail, like The history is good, but it might have to change slightly since I'm joining WindClan
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Post by Caraway September 17th 2012, 19:30

i think there should be another line between "History:" and "Kit:" so it looks like
History:
Kit: lol stufs here

instead of History: Kit: Wink

i think the green is okay, although i don't think i can read it for a very long time before i see green everywhere Razz
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Post by Nyx October 3rd 2012, 16:23

Lol yeah the green is fine now. Maybe you should add more things like a more detailed appearance? Very Happy Mine's like a whole paragraph long. xD I tend to over-write things.
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Post by Redstar October 3rd 2012, 16:29

LOLOLOLOLOLOL Razz You ACTUALLY put me as your Doctor of Doom. You're epic, Sparky X3
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Post by Caraway October 3rd 2012, 16:51

You actually acted on our suggestions Razz Many just filter out things they agree on.
For the description, you don't have to go all-out like Brighstar Tongue Just add things like physique; size, claws, build. A short paragraph is a good length for a description Smile
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Post by Shimmerpaw October 3rd 2012, 18:37

@Forestblaze: You bet I am!

@Brightstar: Yah, I fixed it because I was seeing green everywhere. Also, I don't really write long stuff, because I don't have a lot to say, but I can fix stuff when I get to my mom's though.

@CheeseStar: Yah, why wouldn't I? It helps make it better!

NOTE:

I might add a new credit thing at the bottom that tells you all the stuff people reccomended for example:

CheeseStar: Told me how to fix the personality so it made more sense.

Then every time Cheesey suggests something, I add it to her spot Very Happy ideas?


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Post by Sunbeam October 3rd 2012, 22:28

Could you add me as an acquaintance on your relationship chart? Thanks! Super Happy
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Post by Shimmerpaw October 4th 2012, 05:48

Okay Sunbeam! I'll add you on Sunday at the latest. (My time)
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Post by Noxe October 5th 2012, 16:12

The color is much better Smile and I think the credits is a good idea! Though it's probably going to take a lot of going back through the posts Razz
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Post by Shimmerpaw October 6th 2012, 06:39

Why, thank you!

I don't mind, I mean I'll add it yo the credits when I add it! But I won't add if you ask to be in the relationship chart. Ya' know?
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Post by Shimmerpaw October 26th 2012, 16:03

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAI!

This sheet has been.... drum roll please,

UPDATED!!!!!!!
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Post by Guest October 28th 2012, 23:31

Awesome character sheet Sparkpaw! (: It's short but gives a lot of information. Good job!

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Post by Sunbeam October 29th 2012, 06:40

Just a heads up: In your history it says, "She and Moonkit set off in search of the cubs and there Queen." Instead of "there" it should be "their". Very Happy
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Post by Shimmerpaw October 29th 2012, 07:39

@Sagedapple: Thanks, Sage! I tried hard when I started it XD

@Sunbeam: Hey! Thanks for catching that, Smile
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Post by Shimmerpaw November 3rd 2012, 12:02

I have updated this again, enjoy the improvment and Brokenleaves ;D
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