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Post by Shimmerpaw July 11th 2012, 06:29

Shimmerpaw

Name:
Shimmerpaw (Sparky, Feye, Shimmer)

Clan:
ThunderClan

Rank:
Apprentice

Age:
7 Moons

Gender:
She-Cat

Mate(Crush): -

Kits: -

Parents:
Scourge and Unknown She-cat

Littermates:
Chill and Jay (Brothers), Flamepaw (Sister)

Mentor:
Ghostfur

Apprentice: -

Hobbies:
Shimmerpaw enjoys running and hunting with her fellow apprentices. She enjoys walks when her mentor allows it . Though her favorite activity is not following the rules. This has always gotten her in trouble, but Shimmerpaw is a trouble maker.

Special Skills:
Shimmerpaw has large, soft paws which enable her to hunt well. She is a skilled hunter and fighter as well. But her downfall is tree-climbing.

Appearance:
Small, large-pawed she-cat with wonderful brownish green eyes. She has a beautiful, soft calico pelt and long legs. Her eyes are large and round and her tail is short. Her fur is short and silky to the touch.

Personality:
She is bubbly and always happy, though she is very skillful and witty. She has a big mouth, maybe too big for her own good. She cracks a joke all the time, but she is very serious about her work. She is also a big troublemaker, and she LOVES breaking the rules. So you can imagine how full her mentor's paws are.

History:
Kithood: Frost was a happy kitten. Her brothers Chill and Jay and her sister, Topaz, always kept her happy. She sometimes saw her father, Scourge, looking on with a disappointed expression on his face. He told her she was too happy. Frost tried to be more serious, but her father could see she was forcing it. She sometimes broke out into a laughing fit and her father would scorn her. She wanted her dad to be proud. She, Chill,Jay, and Topaz decided it was best to run away. They didn't want to be sad kits. As soon as they made it out of the reach of their father, a sudden flood separated Chill and Jay from Frost and Topaz. Frost and Topaz searched for days for their brothers, without them Frost didn't feel happy at all. Soon, while they were in the woods after giving up on finding their brothers, Frost came upon ThunderClan. The leader, Snowstar, saw how cold and scared Frost and Topaz were, and allowed her into the Clan. Where they named her Shimmerkit, for her shimmery pelt. And they named her sister Flamekit, for her ornage pelt. They were taken in by a she-cat named Sparkfire, who died soon after they were 5 moons old. Shimmerkit and Flamekit spent the rest of their kithood getting to know the customs of the Clans, getting into trouble, being confused how different life was from BloodClan, missing Chill and Jay, wondering if Chill and Jay were dead, and spending time with the other kits.

Apprenticeship: Shimmerkit has only just become Shimmerpaw, but I'm sure she has many adventures ahead of her with her mentor, Ghostfur

Origins:
Shimmerpaw is the daughter of Scourge, and her life in BloodClan was rough. Her father abandoned her when he found out she was too happy for his liking. She inherited his ability to make cats believe what she says.

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Kit:

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HEY! I wanted to make a sheet about MYSELF in real life so you could get to know me, I won't put like a history or anything I will make everything work Wink (Also the personality is written by Mooni Very Happy)

Name:
Madison (Maddy, Sparky, Bouncy)

Clan:
New England

Rank:
Sixth Grader

Age:
12 Years

Gender:
Female

Mate(Crush):
That, is a secret.

Kits:
Yeah, I highly doubt it.

Parents:
-I don't want to put there names here SOWWY-

Littermates:
Alison (Ali, Hami)

Mentor(s):
Mr. Wade
Mrs. Froment
Mrs. Gagnon
Mrs. Day

Hobbies:
Writing stories, using Warrior Cats Forum, drawing, singing

Favorite Fresh-kill:
Pizza, Mozzarella sticks, bagels with butter, french fries (Wendy's is my favorite), anything salty, chicken (Fried or baked), steak tips, lamb

Personality:
She is a good humored person who can make a joke about almost anything. She can turn arguments inside out if she's not feeling lazy. She can be annoying (according to her sisters) and she is good at making friends. Her mind can get off track easily when she is required to focus on a test. She follows rules well and is sweet.

Special Skills:
She is a fast runner and she has a strong throwing arm. She also has good hand-eye coordination. She also able to handle a bow and arrow.

Appearance:
She is an average-sized 12 year old girl with short, light brown hair. She donated 8 inches to Locks of Love a few months ago. She has warm chocolaty brown eyes. Her eyes are quite round and large. She has freckles lightly dotting the bridge of her nose. Her hair tends to curl up at the ends of her head and her hand usually has "Hi..." written in red sharpie on it.

Origins:
She is mostly Armenian, her great-great grandfather Miskus(or something like that) immigrated to America from Armenia. Her great-grandfather (Grandma's father) immigrated with his wife from Italy making her grandmother 100% Italian, she is also Irish from her mom's side, also Scottish, English and many others.

Details:

Pictures

Young Maddy:

About 3 years ago:

Last Year:

Current:

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Post by Noxe July 11th 2012, 17:57

Very nice! A few spelling and punctuation errors in the history, but otherwise it's great. Thumbs Up Do you have any special skills? Will you include any pictures?
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Post by Shimmerpaw July 11th 2012, 18:02

Um.. actually you may have to wait until I find out how toput in Pics and It will probably be easier on a computer and you might have to wait a few weeks till I go to my moms but I am planning to put some
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Post by Noxe July 11th 2012, 18:06

Autocorrect, it drives everyone crazy Razz I'm not sure but isn't there somethng in the settings that lets you turn it off?
And to insert a pic... Under "topic description" do you see the groups of icons seperated by "|" click on the second icon in the 5th group and type in the web address you found the pic on. Or click on the 1st icon in that group and select a pic from a file.


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Post by Shimmerpaw July 11th 2012, 18:07

I have a kindle fire. Thants why there's so many errors. I CANT FIND THE COMMA!!! and it chandes my words it drives me crazy!!
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Post by Lightclaw July 11th 2012, 23:14

I know, right?! Kindles SUCK! hold onto the period :3 that should help. Nice kitteh, by the way!
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Post by Redstar July 11th 2012, 23:57

Comma: Press the period( . ) and hold it, don't take your finger off the screen. A thing will pop up with commas, colons, etc. DRAG your finger onto it, then let go. There's your comma. Razz
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Post by Frost July 12th 2012, 00:42

Scarpath879 wrote:Um.. actually you may have to wait until I find out how toput in Pics and It will probably be easier on a computer and you might have to wait a few weeks till I go to my moms but I am planning to put some

Click here for the tutorial for hosting images.
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Post by Shimmerpaw July 12th 2012, 08:07

THANKS FOR YOIR HELP!! Oh and Flighty I found that on another warrior website XD! so I put it there (GaleClan, Specklepaw)
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Post by Noxe July 12th 2012, 09:21

Haha, I was going to use that pic for my avatar! Razz great job! Thumbs Up
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Post by Shimmerpaw July 12th 2012, 09:26

Haha! I'm glad you like it Maple! It does kook like you doesn't it!


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Post by Spicefeather August 23rd 2012, 19:58

Psh, Windypaw's 17 moons XD Good luck :3

jkjk X3 I like your sheet though.
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Post by Shimmerpaw August 24th 2012, 06:18

Thanks Spicepaw, if he were 17 moons he would be a warrior XD

6-12 moons= Apprentice
12-old dude= Warrior
Old dude-death=Elder
Death=StarClan
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Post by Spicefeather August 24th 2012, 07:39

Well, he's a late bloomer c:
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Post by Shimmerpaw August 24th 2012, 09:20

IDK, but I'm glad you like it Spice!
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Post by Caraway August 24th 2012, 10:26

nice relationship chart Razz yay i'm a friend on this one Dance well, there's actually a 9 dot on here Shimmerpaw's Character(s) 1818838577

Spark-something was a name I suggested for Lighty Razz It fits both your personalities pretty well x)

your personality seems a bit rushed, because it doesn't sound grammatically correct.
"Can be slightly annoying and very trusting she is easily annoyed and caring."
It should be worded with more punctuation and in a different order, for example:
"Can be slightly annoying, but gets easily annoyed; she is also very trusting and caring."

other than that, good job Thumbs Up
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Post by Nyx August 24th 2012, 10:47

I think it's a little more widespread than that Sparkpaw. o.O One moon equals one human month, and cats can live up to nine or ten years I think. So....

1-6 moons: Kit
6-18 moons: Apprentice
18-96 moons: Warrior
96-120 moons: Elder

Kinda inaccurate, but eh. Razz

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Post by Lunarlight August 24th 2012, 11:02

can I be on your chart please?
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Post by Shimmerpaw August 24th 2012, 11:09

Uh, sure Lunarlight! I'll add you! Thanks Brightstar, and CheeseStar! I'll fix that!
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Post by Lunarlight August 24th 2012, 11:18

thanks, wait OMG? you like Leafpool?!
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Post by Shimmerpaw August 24th 2012, 11:40

Well i like her and I'm only on the Power of Three.
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Post by Windystorm August 26th 2012, 14:05

Windclan's awesome Razz

That makes more sense Bright xD But I guess the wild cats don't live as long so the Erins probably shortened it. I think of moons as human years with Windypaw anyway xD He's like a teenager now. He's also the oldest apprentice.
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Post by Shimmerpaw August 26th 2012, 15:40

Oh, that makes sense now, and thanks Bright and Windypaw, you can tell me if you don't want me to list you as i did, i can list you as a friend if you like.
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Post by Noxe August 26th 2012, 15:43

A couple of grammatical/spelling/whatever errors in the history such as "Sparkpaw Was made an apprentice" and "Applefur take her trainign" but otherwise, it sounds great Smile can you add me in the relationship chart please? Very Happy
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Post by Shimmerpaw August 26th 2012, 16:45

Okay, I shall! *Goes to add Maple*

I case you were wondering, if you don't like the rating i give you, Tell me! I can remove you or change it (:
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