A little kit on the edge of a Thunderpath... RPG

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Applefur padded through the territory keeping a look out for any intruders. She lifted her nose and breathed in deeply. I smell.. a Thunderpath and something else very faint ... a kit?! Applefur raced forward and saw a small light ginger kit laying next to a Thunderpath. Applefur padded forward slowly. There was only one kit and two more lay beside the alive kit dead. The one little kit was sleeping. She peered down to look at the two dead kits. Their sides seemed crushed and one had a gash on its head. Grief struck her heart for the sleeping kit and the two dead ones. She winced and clenched her teeth at the sight of the poor sleeping kit. It was covered in blood and her ear was torn. She moved the little kits away from the Thunderpath and into the territory more. The sleeping kit opened her eyes. "Who are you?" She croaked. "My name is Applefur of WindClan." The kit tilted her head. "My name is Morningkit, my mother Breezefur left us on the Thunderpath. She said to stay there and wait for her and to not move no matter what. We listened to her. She never came back. Of course we had moved. We had learnt to hunt and everything then. Yesterday... me and my siblings were crossing the Thunderpath when a car hit all three of us. Cherrykit my sister and Treekit are both... dead." Applefur nuzzled the kit. "Dont worry little one. It will be alright." Applefur said.

Kitty froze then grumbled " Fine, Now Honeystar whom shall I take?" She paced the clearing, but as she sniffed the air she detected the sent of blood. She froze then sniffed even harder, and mewed " Honeystar, I think Riverclans in trouble!!"

Applefur shook her head. "Trouble with what?" Applefur was still prickly with Kitty. She looked at Honeystar. "Shall I go see whats going on?" She asked him.

Looking at Morningkit and then back at Applefur. "You might as well. Have Fernleaf or Cougarpaw take a look at Morningkit's injuries [~are there any injuries?~], and find someone who will look after her while you're away."
"I'll do it!" a voice mewed from behind Honeystar. He turned to find Honeypaw looking up at him. "I can take care of her."

Morningkit raised her head. "I dont want to be looked after." She cried. Applefur nuzzled her and said. "If you be good for Honeypaw. You can learn the hunters crouch." She said raising her eyebrows. She knew kits after she had Stormpaw Boltpaw Autumnpaw and Leopardpaw. "And dont forget to go to Fernleaf and Cougarpaw for your wounds." She added.

~Yeah she has injuries. She was hit by a monster in her side and there's a gash there and her ear is torn so yeah ~

Streamfur felt blood trickle down her face and hissed "Who are you and what are you doing on Riverclan territory". Streamfur clawed the side of the she-cat.

Brightstar bowled a tom over, just as he screeched, "Attack, you idiots!" He attempted to throw Brightstar off, but she slipped to the side, clawing his face.

Kitty smiled,and a smug one at that too! Then she turned toward Applefur and mewed harshly " You can go get a few other warriors for this patrol!" Then turned her head and stakled proudly, but before she went she hissed to Applefur " Come on, Your not afraid of battle are you?"

Flamekit pawed Morningkit. "Let's play moss-ball," he suggested.

Applefur snarled. "Enough of your attitude Kitty. It is time we work together and help this poor kit! Now come on. And I am not afraid of battle and I never want to shed unnecessary blood. I will fight for what is right, if Im in danger or if anyone hurts my friends and family or clan. Let go." (WindClan warriors may come) Applefur pushed past Kitty and toward the scent of RiverClan.

Kitty blinked, and let out a laugh. She growled and pushed past Applefur and growled " Watch it! You may be deputy and I know that but this is my patrol! MY patrol!"|

"Your patrol was to scout the rouges! Stop at once!" She growled. Now she was mad. What is she thinking!?

Kitty stopped and glanced back and mewed " Applefur, is there a problem?" then she stopped dead and pricked her ears and growled "Windclan, are we ready for battle?" she gustered to a bush and pulled the leaves back to reveale a patrol of battling Riverclan cats!

Applefur who was still fuming pushed past Kitty and looked through. She lifted her her head and sniffed. "Rouges." She growled. She raised her tail for complete silence from the patrol.

Kitty growled and hissed " Applefur, this is my patrol! But do you have a battle suggeston?" She sneered the last words then growled to the patrol " Windclan are you ready?!"

Brightstar slammed her paw on the rogue tom's head and whipped around to confront the cats approaching. She relaxed slightly when she saw Applefur, then tensed again. Where they going to attack too?

"I said complete silence! Kitty you are leading the patrol to scout the rouges and see what their up to! Now lets-" All of a sudden 4 rouge cats slammed their paws down on her head. Pain flowed through her and she crumbled to the ground unconscious.

"No!" Brightstar yowled. Frostleaf, Ripplepaw, Echoblossom, and her all dived at the rogues. "Get out of here! Or you won't live to see tomorrow!" she yowled.

Streamfur was lying on the ground with a rouge cat on top of her, the cat was clawing her belly. Streamfur yowled in pain and pushed up her legs, throwing the rouge off.

While the 4 rouges were busy Breezefur saw her chance. She crawled forward and grabbed the unconscious dark brown tabby by the scruff. She raced over to the leader Hawk. Hawk took the she cat and easily lifted her up. "I'll hide her then we'll take her back to camp for questioning." Breezefur nodded and smiled. Hawk raced away into the bushes nearby.

Streamfur was about to pouce on another rouge when one snuck up behind her and clawed her belly so hard that she fell to the ground unconcious where the clan cats couldn't see her and only the rouges could.

Breezefur watched as the clan cats were starting to fall. Breezefur smiled. Maybe we can win this thing. She thought. Just then more rouges piled through. And Hawk has recruited more. Wonderful.

Brightstar beat the rogue unconscious and looked for Applefur. She was gone. Sent of rogue was intertwined with her scent. "those mange-pelts!"

"Ripplepaw!" Brightstar summoned the apprentice with a flick of her tail. "Get more RiverClan cats. And help if you can."

Kitty shrieked and struggled to her paws. She struck the tom so hard, he stumble to the ground. Kittykitty snarled and leaped for a large tom. She aimed for his face and struck him so hard, his face was matted with blood!

~ I want to be takne tooo! LUCKY!!!!!~

"They've taken Applefur!" Brumbytail yowled as she saw the one rogue tom drag her away.
"Then let's get her back from those dingohearts!" growled Boomerleap.
Suddenly more rogues came rushing in.
"It's no good, we're being out-numbered." Brumbytail cried in terror.
"Then go get Honeystar for help. I'll just stay here to even things up."