Survivorclan

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~Survivorclan~
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Survivorclan takes in all cats, no matter what age or fur length, young or old, or any beliefs (Although most of us believe in Starclan, and are clan rejects or runaways).

Part 1
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*Part 2 - Whitestorm*
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*Chapter 2-Redwing*
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Chapter 3~ Redwing (again)
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Chapter 4~ Swiftpaw

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Me-the-cat-who-has-pancakes-and-chocolate-hearts-but-not-eaten-together-because-that-would-be-weird.

Nightfrost-the-cat-who-eats=apple-pie-at-11:55-am-in-the-morning-because-apple-pie-is-really-yummy-and-awesome.

*directs attention back to story*

Hey um when will there b more?

Adderfang wrote:Hey um when will there b more?

yeah actualy that was pretty hot! ME WANTS MOAR!

Haha, ok. Ill work on more this weekend. I had acually given up on these fanfics. But, if you want more....

Everyone has. They start writing really good ones.... then they're like: yawn. Why bother?

Well, its not like I dont like it, but no one seemed to be reading it so I moved on. But il write more. I added a few sentences.

Few sentences?

Haha, yeah. Yesterday, before I went to have an epic water balloon fight, I added a few sentences to the end of Opalkit's training session. Im just editing the main post, but I guess I should post?

YES! There's like so many people online.

Icestar wrote:Haha, yeah. Yesterday, before I went to have an epic water balloon fight, I added a few sentences to the end of Opalkit's training session. Im just editing the main post, but I guess I should post?

I'm interested in seeing more. If you haven't noticed, you can earn WP for good stories.

Whoa! Awesome! Ill start writing more.

I sent Dragonclaw my Sign of the Stars story..... I wonder if he's read it yet.

Chapter 3~ Redwing (again)
When Swiftpaw, Opalkit, and I returned to camp, we ran into a patrol led by Aquastar.
"Badgers! On the border!" She quickly mewed.
"Opalkit, stay here!" I instructed, and ran out of camp with Swiftpaw close behind me.
Dodging through trees, we finally reached a clearing. A queen with two kits stood behind a tree, tail wrapped protectivly around the kits, with fear in her eyes. In the middle of the clearing, a tom, clearly the father of the kits, stood fighting the bigger of the two badgers. The badger knocked him off his paws and reached in for the death blow.
With a yowl, Swiftpaw rushed at the badger. Distracted, the badger looked up and gave the tom enough time to scramble to his paws and swipe the badger's nose. Swiftpaw took a great leap and landed on the bader's back, claws unsheathed.
I couldn't let the two cats fight alone, but where was Aquastar's patrol? Going against my better judgement, I attacked the second badger before he could assist his leader. With a yowl, Aquastar and Runningwind reached the clearing.
Oh? You thought a patrol would include more than two cats? We don't have enough cats to include more than two in patrols and still get tasks done.
Runningwind ran to the badger Swiftpaw and the tom were battering, and started attacking his legs. With a yowl, the badger ran off, his companion following.
I licked a scratch on my side, while Aquastar turned to a tree. "Okay, you can come out now." The queen I had seen before ushered her kits into the clearing. The kits immediatly ran up to their father, purring. "You saved us!" The bigger kit exclaimed. "No, these cats saved us." the tom said, gesturing to me and Swiftpaw.
Aquastar walked up, and dipped her head to the newcomers. "Hi there. I'm Aquastar, leader of SurvivorClan."
"Oh, Lilyheart! She has the same title as Siverstar!" The smaller kit blurted out. "Shh, darling." The queen murmured.
"You have been through a lot. Would you like to come to our camp and stay with us for a little?" Aquastar offered. The tom dipped his head, slightly embarrased he was accepting the offer. "Thank you, Aquastar. I'm Thunderclaw, this is my mate Lilyheart, and these are our three kits, Stretchkit, Tumblekit, and Marshkit."
"Welcome to SurvivorClan!" Swiftpaw cheered. "I'm Swiftpaw, and this is my mentor Redwing!" I dipped my head, but the introduction was wasted.
"Redwing?" Thunderclaw tipped his head to the side. "You're alive?!?" I sighed. This would be a long story to tell. "Yes, but I will tell you everything later."
Marshkit turned to Swiftpaw. "We ran away from the mean cats! Branchkit-" Lilyheart covered marshkit's mouth with her tail. "We will tell these nice cats everyhting in the morning, but now you need to sleep." With a dip of her head, Aquastar started walking back to camp, all the cats following her.

This was a great story! P.S. I LOVE your avatar!

Ya! Me too!!

That was AWESOME

Thanks!! More on the way, especially with school starting (I usually write in lunch study). Im making a poll, so vote for your favorite character!

CHapter 4: Swiftpaw
The next morning I woke up early to play with the kits before training. Pushing my way through the ferns covering the opening of the nursery, I was met with the sweet scent of the little kits not yet exposed to the harsh, sharp-scented forest air.
"Swiftpaw!" Marshkit squealed, and the three kits attacked.
Tumblekit swiped at my ear, and when I reached to bat him away, Marshkit scratched my belly with sheathed claws and Stretchkit leaped onto my back. With a groan, I collapsed, knowing this was a fight I could not win.
"Kits...." Lilyheart warned, and the kits jumped off my back.
"We were just playing!" Marshkit complaned.
"Yeah.... playing." Tumblekit licked his paw and swiped it over his ears, knocking off a bit of moss.
"Will all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather around me for a clan meeting!" Aquastar yowled from the main clearing. The dens started emptying of all the warriors and apprentices, but as soon as I sat down, Redwing came over and flicked my shoulder with his tail.
"We can't stay for this. I told Aquastar we'd take morning patrol, and if we wait any longer soon it will be time for sun-high patrol." Redwing mewed.
I sighed, and stood up. I'll get one of my denmates to tell me Aquastar's announcement later.
All throughout patrol, I couldn't stay focused. What if Aquastar was kicking Lilyheart and her kits out? I almost walked over a mouse in my path, and when I chased it and pounced I only caught it by a mouse-tail. It was a messy kill, and Redwing told me so.
After Redwing became impatient with my mistakes, he finally sighed and led the way back to camp, only returning with my mouse, a robin, and news of stale badger scent from last sunrise.