A New Life

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My friend made this as a story and I thought it might be a cool RP. So here it is!
A New Life-the plot:
A girl named Sun lives in a mansion with her mother and father. One day, she goes on a short walk. She finds her path blocked by a strange, gnarled, old man in a fedora and trench coat blocking her path. He grabs her and she passes out. When she wakes up next, Sun is in a dark room full of kids all chained to a metal chair. She finds that the same is done to her. A man like her kidnapper steps in. He demands that she, and all the other kids, take a white pill. She does, and wakes up two years later on another planet. She, and all the others, have microchips implanted in them. The kids are settled into a small village, and Sun receives knowledge that the chip channels her inner powers, and that she and the other children are all destined to save the planet from an evil group with an evil plot. Mostly, Sun and the others must start a New Life.
You are the kids. Choose a name that goes with your power.
Entry Sheet:
Name:
Age:
Power:
Personality:
Looks:
Background:
Destiny:
Mine:
Name: Sun
Age: 12
Personality: Intelligent, sunny disposition, fiery, bubbly, can be sassy, kind, fair, loyal, a born leader, and sweet.
Looks: Long golden hair, skinny, tan skin, blue and golden eyes, small frame, and sharp finger nails.
Power: Light, heat, other sun-like things
Background: Raised in a mansion with her mother and father, spoiled but didn't care. She tried to make friends, she really did, but she was always teased for being a rich little brat. She had a few friends, though. She hates her twin brother, Sol, because he acts all nice outside, but on the inside is a total jerk, and he is cruel to her sometimes, occasionally hitting her. All of her friends were kidnapped with her.
Destiny: Destined to lead the kids into battle and lead them to victory, while overcoming the fear of her brother, yet forgiving him and bringing him goodness and refuge from evil.
These are people, so act like a person. Follow the normal rules, and please join! This is my first time creating a RP, so I'm kind of nervous.

Blade looked over at Sun in the opposite tree when the golden-haired girl spoke of important matters while Edge just watched as Sol got closer and closer.
"You can grow wings like Animalia," the girl had said, "Just concentrate really hard and they will come."
Blade nodded in response, glancing down to where she had last seen Sol before following Sun's example and closed her eyes. She nudged Edge a bit, telling him to do the same. They sat there like that for the next few minutes, listening as Sol spoke.
"I know you're up there Sun. Come out, come out, wherever you are," she heard Sol speak, obviously looking up at his sister from the ground.
She heard Sun respond with, "Well, Sol, if you want!" and then branches shaking, obviously the girl jumping from the tree. There was never a ground impact, though. Instead, there was slight shaking branches. It was kind of like a wind slight breeze.
Taking this as her signal, Blade opened her eyes and hopped down from her tree, dragging Edge with her. Wings tore perfect holes through her shirt as they materialized from thin air. Her clothing remains in one piece once they finished growing in. Glancing between her wings and Edge's, she could see they were the same: dragon-like, but metallic. Where the "fingers" of the wings were, there were the blades of large swords and along the top of the wings was metal spikes. The twins smirked and launched themselves into the air, Blade changing the spike the held into a thin metal whip as she flew up. She lashed it out once, hitting the tree right behind Sol before following after Edge and Sun. She quickly caught up to her twin, smiling.
This is amazing! Blade thought as she glanced back at their wings, The metal for these wings must be extremely light, and highly strong, for them to allow us flight. I am surprised that our shirts aren't shredded from their creation, however.

~Is my character accepted? The sheet's on the first page

Edit: "Wang wang" is the sound dogs make in Chinese ~

Yes, you are accepted, Blackstone.

Riverstorm wrote: Sun leaned over to Storm. "Psst, Storm." She whispered. "Can you make some clouds?" "Why?" Came the reply. "He knows what my sunlight looks like, and he knows I would climb a tree, because he can't, if he came near. So, if he saw my light, he would know that I would be in a tree, and from there, he could use his powers to track us to this tree, then blast the tree with a trick we learned in training. It's called a Solar Blast. It blows things up. He could have us knocked out in seconds." Sun explained. "Oh. Ok." A gray cloud enveloped the sky.

Please don't god-mod me (In case you don't know that means control my character) I'll just go with it though.

Storm nodded and set her mind to growing wings. The idea was crazy, but she trusted Sun. She knew she could do it. She took her mind off keeping the clouds in the sky (because she knew they'd stay up there, whether she wanted them or not). Suddenly, she felt black feathered wings coming from her back, ripping two holes where the wings were in both her gray t-shirt and her heavy blue jacket. "My favorite jacket!" she whined. But Storm spread out her wings and gave them little flaps. She laughed. "Awesome." She reached out to touch them but was electric shocked. She hissed like she was a cat who'd fell in a river. "Guys, don't touch my wings," she warned.

~Yeah, I'm just gonna pretend Nocturnal was there all along ~

Nocturnal nodded to Sun and concentrated hard. After about half a minute, two large wings unfurled themselves behing him. They were dragon-like, black and almost spectral. Wisps of darker and lighter shades of the black colour danced around them. Nocturnal was amazed.

~I have to put new covers on my bed bye~

Yuuki blinked. "Seriously? Awesome!" she grinned. Closing her eyes, she imagined a pair of wings, and immediatelu, a pair of black, demon-like wings appeared on her back. Giving a flap experimentally, she gasped when she felt herself lift up into the air. "Amazing!" she exclaimed. Flapping harder, she took off into the sky, and arrived over to where the other kids were. "This is so cool!" she called to them.

Animalia threw her arms into the air slowly. The animals rose from the ground as Animalia flapped her wings. Her animals were Japanese so she had to talk to them like that. "Attack!" she ordered in their language (the translator only did the Japanese Letters XD). Animalia howled (she has some animal traits now) along side the lead wolf. The animals swarmed into hiding, waiting for Sol to do one wrong move into their paws. Animalia now had the mind of a wolf. She didn't want to fly. "Hey feather brain!" she called to Sol, "Whatcha doin'?" she growled sarcastically. She was just teasing him.

Nocturnal looked at Sol and leaped down from his branch, cushioning his fall with his wings. He held out his hands and his shadow lifted off from the ground and gathered around his hands. The shadow materialised into two long, black swords, one for each hand. Nocturnal tightened his grip around them. His shadow weapons were extremely sharp, with slightly serrated edges and a gap through half of the middle areas, making them look like they each had two blades. He wouldn't want to be impaled on one of those. "I never liked light and explosions that much, to be honest," he growled at Sol.

~I never had time in my last post to say this, but the wings have a similar look to the effect Skyrim's Ebony Mail when sneaking. And the swords are based on Daedric ones. They're actually quite hard to describe Yes, I play too much Elder Scrolls.~

"Guys!" Sun shrieked "We have to go! We can deal with my idiot brother later!" Sun flew in place, her lithe wings fluttering. 'Why was I afraid of him all these years? He's only a waste of time.' She thought. "Animalia! Nocturnal! Come on, we are going back to camp!" She snapped angrily, surprising even herself. Sun had never, ever, snapped at anyone in her life. "Now!" She demanded.

Sol's P.O.V.
Sol froze when he heard Sun snap. She never snapped, at anyone. He was older than her by 5 minutes, and he had heard every word that ever came out of her mouth. Not in the 12 years that she had been alive. He finally unfroze, and conjured a Solar Blast in his hands. "Now you will be out of my way, Sun. But this time, for good." He threw the ball of light at his little sister, chuckling as it made contact with one of her wings. He quickly conjured another and aimed it as Sun fell out of the sky.

Storm gasped as a ball of light flew violently down at Sun. "No!" she yelled, leaping in front of her. A burst of pain went through Storm as it smashed her. She screamed in agony. It'd hit her in her hip. She held her side, wishing with all her heart her mother could be there to help her through it, like she did whenever she scraped her knee on the sidewalk or one of the kids that goes to her old school tripped her. Storm cried, hoping she'd be okay.

"Storm!" Yuuki gasped, and immediately flew to her side. "Are you okay?" she demanded. "Come on. We need to get you to medical treatment." Slinging one of Storm's arms around her neck, and flew after Sun. Catching up to Sun, she grimaced at the injured wing. "You, too, Sun," she muttered. "We have to hurry back. Your injuries might get infected out here." With a powerful flap of her wings, she supported the two back to camp, making sure the rest were behind them.

Storm limped all the way to camp, trusting Yuuki to keep her up. She winced in pain with every step she took. You're almost to camp, she encouraged herself. You will be safe at camp.

Sun leaned on Yuuki as the girl supported her. The small blonde girl turned her head slightly, looking back at her twin brother, who remained standing where they had left him. Barely moving her hand, she conjured a weak ball of light. Sun flicked the ball of memories at her lost brother.

SOL'S P.O.V
Sol only looked up in time to see the flickering ball hit him. He was overwhelmed with darkness.
~~Flashback~~
A light appeared. The sound of laughter filled in the silence. A scene appeared of two young children, a boy and a girl. The young boy was swinging the girl around, both laughing. Out of nowhere, a black crow flew over, landing on young Sol's head. Little Sun screamed as the crow pecked at her, flapping it's wings and puffing up. Sun batted at the bird, making contact with a wing. With a loud caw, the bird flew off. "What is wrong with you! You hurt it!" Sol screamed at his sister. "I didn't mean to! It was hurting me me!" Sun whimpered back. Sol glared at his sister, a new, evil, glint in his eyes. "Shut up." He said angrily. "Just shut up. I know you're lying." He reached his hand back. "Sol? Sol, please! Don't!" She cried. Sol slammed his hand forward, slapping her across the face. Sun screamed as she fell back. She looked up, fear crossing her face. "I hate you." He whispered. "I never loved you, and I never will." Sol kicked his twin multiple times before turning and stalking off.
~~End of flashback~~
Sol stumbled backwards as more memories of his cruelty flew through his head. He sat down sharply as the last memory ended. 'What have I done?' He thought.

So, starting Monday, I'll be gone for all of July. Keep posting, but i won't be here.

~Aw... I'm going on holiday next Monday and I'll be back on Friday so I won't get on.~

Nocturnal sheathed his swords and they melted back into his shadow. He flew quickly after the rest of the group, but not without sending an icy glare at Sol, to get the message across that he'd be back after what he did. Nocturnal watched as Sol was knocked out by Sun's light ball. He caught up to the others and helped to support Sun and Storm. That Sol's an idiot to mess with us, he thought, scowling.

~Maybe someone can post on Riverstorm's behalf since she's gone so I can be accepted...because I want another character ~

Name: Alex
Age: 14
Power: earth
Personality: very competitive whether it comes to a game of checkers or a real legit battle, and a sore loser. But she is a very optimistic person; although her past was harsh, she always looks to the bright side of things.
Looks: dark brown hair and brown eyes, only wears band t-shirts and jeans.
Background: everyone knew about Alex's powers. And they knew well enough to stay away from her. Every time she walked by someone, they'd try to get away from her as quickly as possible. They knew what dangers she was capable of. Like one day before everyone shunned her, she heard a group of boys that went to her school calling her "Dirt Girl" from her bedroom window. Alex raised the patch of grass they were standing on in rage, telling them to leave her alone just with the look in her eyes and the way they floated in the air on a little grass patch, struggling to not fall off. They floated right next to her window. Alex's parents heard all this going on, so they rushed into her room; right before Alex was going to drop them. They forced Alex into putting them down back on the ground. Alex did as she was told. Of course, while she lay in her room, the group of boys spread around what happened to them, making it sound like Alex was some sort of villain and they were her victims. And that was when everyone stayed away from Alex, making sure she would harm no one else. But no one called her Dirt Girl anymore. One day, when she was sitting by a frog pond - that she created with her powers - a man in a fedora and a large coat came up to her. Alex scooted away from him, kind of freaked out by him. But her walked up to her again, this time he grabbed her wrist. Alex shrieked, but she was knocked out and woke up in a dark room with other people.
Destiny: to fight alongside Sun in battle

Animalia growled and crawled on four legs. "Whats did you DO?!" she howled. Her finger nails seemed like claws. The animals crawled out of the bushes and growled to. Animalia almost pounced but stopped herself. "Never touch any of my friends again!" she said and flew off with her animals close behind.

I'm back! Flameblossom, you are accepted.

Sun winced as she applied herbs to her injured wing. With hands trained from years of bandaging broken parts, she wrapped up her wing with a long, fine gauze, tying a stiff cedar board to the front and back for support. "Looks like I won't be fly for a while." She grumbled to the infirmary wall. Then she noticed Storm coming in. "Storm!" The blond cried out "Oh, Storm! Why did you do that!?" She glanced at the girl's bloodied leg. "Oh, that should've been me! You lie down, and I'll try to fix it." Sun told Storm, taking a seat by the nearest bed.

Animalia reached the place where the children lived. She went to her living quarters and sat on an old chair. She played with spirit dust and rocked in the chair. She noticed that she had claws when she looked at her nails.

"What the heck?!" Animalia gasped.

She stood up and looked in the mirror. She had whiskers and a snake tongue. Her fangs hung from her gums as if she was a vampire. A tail started to form behind her. A cat tail.

"WHAT THE HECK?! SOMEONE HELP ME!" she screamed at the top of her lungs.

'No, I needed to protect you. He could've killed you,' Storm said, lying down on the bed. 'I'll be alright. Walking will just be hard for a while...' Storm spread her wings out across the bed. They no longer blazed with sparks. They were just a dull black now. They didn't hurt, but she didn't have the energy to fly. 'I...just need some rest.'

"Alright, but at least let me bandage your wound. Please?" Sun said to Storm "I've been dealing with Sol for all of my life. I know how to do this." Sun finished, holding up some wraps and herb paste.

Animalia's wings began to feather like those of a hawk. She was growing fur all over herself. She curled up in her small bed and sat there in total shock.

"Mèiquī" she said.

Méiguī meant 'rose' in chinese. Her animals always called her that. She was a blooming rose with some tough thorns to them.

Animalia sat for a few minutes and realized the formation was complete. She had wolf claws, a cat tail, whiskers, a snake tongue, light fur, piercing amber eyes, and bear fangs. She was no longer like all the other kids. She urgently walked to Storm and just stared, not breaking silence.

Nocturnal went into the room where Sun and Storm were, to ask for a bandage for a gash he recieved while running after Sun, when he noticed Animalia standing next to Storm. Well, she's living up to her name, I suppose, he thought.
"What happened?" he asked, his eyes wide with disbelief.

Storm nodded. "Alright, fix me up. I can't just let it lay here and assume it will heal," she replied to Sun. She turned her head to see Animalia and Nocturnal. "I...uhm...jumped in front of Sun when Sol almost killed her. She could've died," Storm said. She closed her eyes and dozed off a bit, trying to ignore the pain in her leg.

Sun glanced up from her healing and chucked a spare bandage at Nocturnal. With a small smile, she surveyed the room her eyes landing on the misshapen creature,. With a yelp, the girl tumbled backwards out of her stool. "Animalia?" She whispered "What happened to you? You're...an animal!" Sun crept back into her chair, quickly applying a burn salve to ease the pain, then a numbing medicine. She grabbed some supplies and fashioned a cast for Storms leg, adding a shock proof coating as well. Then she turned back to Animalia. "Now," Sun told her. "I want an explanation."

Nocturnal caught the bandage and glanced at Storm. "Ouch... Well, I was talking to Animalia, but it's good to know he didn't kill you," he said. He sat down on a nearby chair and put the bandage on his wound, looking up every few seconds to hear Animalia and Sun a bit better. He didn't want to stare, but he was a bit weirded out by whatever it was that had happened to Animalia. She's like a cross between every living thing possible apart from plants and coral things... Strange, he thought.