Oakheart of Riverclan

Name: Oakheart
Breed: Tabby
Gender: Tom
Age: 12 moons
Clan: Riverclan
Attack Power: 35,000
Mate: None
Father: Oakridge
Mother: Heartfire
Favorite food: Fish

Hobbies: Oakheart likes some alone time every now and then. He enjoys walks and the cool weather. He enjoys swimming as well as getting lost in his own thoughts. He enjoys training to make himself a better cat, but he will sometimes push his limits.

Skills: Oakheart has good teamwork as well as leadership skills. He is a great swimmer, and fisher. Oakheart is a good climber since his father showed him how to climb trees and ropes in order to survive in his circumstances. Oakheart is also a good strategist due to the fact he was on his own for a majority of his life. He can fight well with his claws and can be quick on his feet. He is swift and can be good a good supporter as well as listener.

Appearance: Oakheart a silvery black tabby cat with eyes with the mixture of green and blue which give the color of the sea. His fur his short and smooth, and his paws and nose are black except for one spot on his right paw is pink. His tail is a nice length and his claws are dangerously sharp.

Personality: He is a quiet cat who can be very serious at times. He is often calm, but can be stubborn and can get aggressive. He is an adventurer and a bit of a romantic. He is very loyal, but sometimes questions authority. He acts a bit of a loner, but he does enjoy some company. He always tries to do what he feels is right, and looks after those he feels close to.

History: Before Oakheart was a kit, his father was a pirate and his mother was a wildcat. Oakridge was one of the cats of the infamous ship called the Queen Anne’s Revenge. When the ship sunk near the coast of North Carolina, Oakridge met a beautiful wildcat by the name of Heartfire. The two fell deeply in love, and Heartfire became pregnant. During her pregnancy, the cat members of the Queen Anne’s Revenge came back to get Oakridge. When Oakridge refused, they attacked. The battle was fierce, and just when Oakridge was about to fall, Heartfire risked her life and took the final blow. Oakridge became filled with rage and killed the leader with revenge. He then found out that she had given birth, and decided to name the kit Oakheart after himself and his mate.

While Oakheart was a kit, his father taught him survival techniques he knew. Oakheart had learned to hunt, fish, swim, and climb at an early age. His father would tell him stories of the adventures he had been on, and secretly Oakheart wanted to follow in his fathers footsteps as a pirate. Then one day Oakheart was desperate for adventure and went out exploring on his own at night. He had ventured deep into the woods, and had gotten himself lost. He was terrified, but tried not to show it for an adventurer is always courageous. Then a starving wolf had found him and slowly circled Oakheart, and just as the canine leaped toward the kitten, Oakridge jumped out and dug his claws into the wolf. Oakheart just stood there watching as his father battled the ravenous canine. Oakridge was able to avoid most of the wolf’s attacks, but the dog made a deadly blow by biting down onto his neck. Oakridge slashed to wolf’s nose and it scurried away. Oakheart sat there by his father as he slowly died.

Completely on his own now, Oakheart was finding his own adventures. Sometimes he would act as a thief and steal some human goods, such as food. Other times he would help animals in need of assistance. He had developed his confidence in his decision making over the time, and continued to push himself to his limits. He had made good friends with another tabby cat called Brostfur. The two worked together for quite some time, as they made decisions together. Yet, mother nature made her toll when she brushed a wildfire across the woods. Oakheart was quick to dive into the water, but his pal was deathly afraid of the water and could not swim. Oakheart begged him to try, but Brosfur had took his chances with the flames. Oakheart and never seen him since then.

Oakheart grew depressed and decided that he would travel. He left his home and ventured out into the world. He didn’t know where he was going, but he didn’t care. The only optimism he was feeling was that this was a new chapter in his life. A new adventure. After what seemed like forever, Oakheart stumbled upon a group of cats known has the Riverclan. They offered him to join them with open arms. He accepted their greeting, but still feels the haunting ghosts of the death of his parents and friend.

It looks really good so far. Maybe you can add some pictures of your character? You may also want to reread for spelling and grammar errors. It my also help to start some of the sentences in the skills, appearance and personality with words other than "Oakheart".

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