The Outdoor Swimming Pool

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Come outside to enjoy the sun and fresh air!

Fireheart wrote:Fireheart was falling deep in the water (hahaha, "FALLING IN WATER") and was motionless, even till he hit the bottom of the deep end side of the pool. He closed his eyes and hoped for hope to save him.

~Oh, and *Cough cough* by the way *cough*, this is my 1000th post. *cough* Still underestimating me now? Silverstar, watch your back! I am right behind you! ~

I posted 2764 times. *cough cough* I am not scared.

Lighteningpelt was looking up deep in thought and still distracted...

Blossomheart came in and threw a bucket of water on Silverstar. "Hi, Silver!" she called cheerfully, bouncing a beach ball.

Lighteningpelt watched amused and laughed before returning to his thoughts...

Max stared at Lightningpelt for a moment. "What are you thinking about? Come and swim!" Then the killer whale swam away to the deep end.

Silverstar looked up. "Whaaaa? I'll get you!" She got her own bucket, filled it with water and started chasing Blossomheart.

"Nothing..." Lighteningpelt jumped into the water and started swimming lengths.

Lighteningpelt was enjoying being in the water when suddenly something grabbed his leg and he got dragged underwater! Struggling he broke free and jumped onto the bank. Glancing around he saw that everybody was continuing what they were doing. Did no-one see that? Was he going mad?

Brightstar saw Lightningpelt suddenly dip under the surface of the water. Splashing around, the RiverClan tom ran for the bank. "Is something wrong, Lightningpelt? "

"Wha-wh" Lighteningpelt replied shaking. Then he passed out...

"GOLDENPAW!!" Iceshadow mrowed, before her head dipped under the water again. Fleetpaw rolled her eyes, sighed, and jumped into the water, paddling out to Goldenpaw. Grasping Goldenpaw's scruff in his teeth, he paddled back to the edge of the pool and dumped Goldenpaw at his mentor's paws. Nightfall started licking Goldenpaw's chest, and Goldenpaw started spitting out water. Iceshadow was still doggy-paddling in the middle of the pool, when suddenly her head went under. The world was full of bubbles and an unseen force dragging her down, down, down...

"speaking of fish im going hunting do you want to join me brightstar it would be a great apportunity for me to speak with you"

" oh no that creatcher has got iceshadow!"

Lighteningpelt awoke to hear screams and shouts! Iceshadow had gone under! Lighteningpelt dived into the water and couldnt see anything for a moment...

Then he saw a dark shape pulling Iceshadow down! Lighteningpelt attacked the shape and recieved a claw to his ear but managed to make it let go of Iceshadow!
The only problem was he had to save himself!!!

He could see nothing but water and darkness and then he passed out...

thunderblaze new what he had to do ha had to face his fears. Then he dove in to the water thinking to himself as he looked for lightning pelt " you tried to stel me my brother ice shadow and now lightning pelt" In moments thunder blaze saw lightning pelt at the bottem of the pool and grabed him and as he was 1 tail length away from the edge of the pool thunderblaze threw lightningpelt onto the edge and claw the edge and passed out. but he was still on the edge hanging by his claw.

Lighteningpelt slowly recovered to find he was at the edge of the pool.
He saw a paw clinging onto the edge and grabbed it with his teeth!
Slowly he heaved the cat up onto the bank !

Thunderblaze (Lighteningpelt just realized who it was) wasn`t moving and for a moment Lighteningpelt was panic-stricken!!!
Then he saw the faint rise and fall of breathing...
Relived he called across the pool: "Is anyone here a medicine cat?"

Nobody replied.

"Im serious, this cat needs help!" repeated Lighteningpelt.

~Echosong is the medicine cat. And what is this creature? Max? ~

( idk. Im making it up as i go along! And thx im new to Riverclan i dont know who anyone is lol )

~Who started this thing? Scary creature? In the swimming pool ? ~

(I have no idea what the creature is but i have some ideo of a story that will carry on to a diffrent RPG...)

~Agh. We should do that on a different RPG place. Where ALL Clans can participate.~