Torrentheart :: {In Editing}

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Name :: {Torrentkit, Torrentpaw, Torrentheart}

Clan :: {RiverClan}

Rank :: {Deputy}

Age :: {23 Moons}

Mate :: {N/A}

Parents :: {Father: Hawkstrike : A half-loyal WindClan warrior full of respect, prosperity, and justice. He is a specifically charming gray tom with black tabby markings covering his face, back, flank, and legs.He has dark, large blue eyes.} {Mother: Orchidspring : Very alluring and sweet with a few nice drops of ferocity, this pure-white RiverClan warrior is sleek yet remains strong. She has dark green eyes with a few blue-gray hairs near her feet.}

Littermates :: {Brother: Reedstrike : Showing much resemblance of his father, this cat has deep sapphire-colored eyes and dark gray, long sleek fur. He is loyal and loves justice over others when it is needed. A little ambitious and arrogant, but still a strong and persistent young cat} {Brother: Mudthrash : Mud-colored and fierce, Mudthrash is very loyal, positive and untrusting. Born leader. He is a WindClan warrior, but he hates his father more than anything for being disloyal to the Warrior Code} {Sister: Pearlstrike : Pearlstrike is a pretty, smart, clever young she-cat with sleek white fur and a sharp sense. She is very sarcastic and laid-back, but still fierce and independent}

Education Received/Given :: {Mentor: Stonewater : A drizzle of almost every element of a loyal warrior. Respectful, polite, positive and brave, this average-sized, sleek, light gray warrior has pale blue eyes and a torn ear tip} {Former Apprentice: Frostclaw : Evil, ambitious, and greedy, this large brown cat has long sharp claws and is very dashing, despite being wicked. Dangerous rogue and former RiverClan warrior, he became a DF cat a little after he became an apprentice.} {Current Apprentice: Petalpaw: Pale sand-colored she-cat with darker stripes. Petalpaw is very loyal toward the ones she likes and respects. She does not fear to speak her mind.} {Education History: Torrentheart became a warrior of RiverClan by the age of exactly 11 moons. He received his first apprentice, Frostclaw, at 16 moons. Frostclaw became a warrior at 9 moons due to exceptional skill, so Torrentheart was only 19 moons then. He received Petalpaw one moon afterwards, and he's had her for 3 moons now, leaving him currently 23 moons. He became deputy of RiverClan after Streamstar became leader at 22 moons.}

Favorite Fresh-kill :: {Rainbow trout above all, but Torrentheart can usually do with a nice, plump little perch or even water vole and still be satisfied, because of his wide-varied diet. He also likes water fowl, even though it's rare to catch one, at least without a few scratches! Listed: Trout, Perch, mice, water vole, larger fish, etc.}

Hobbies/Habits :: {Loves to crawl up on rocks when the river is calm to gaze out over the sea and think. Hunts when emotionally disturbed and swims whenever he gets the chance. Visits the nursery and elder's den daily to speak with the queens, play with the kits, and talk to the elders. Often takes large branches he finds on the ground and floats in the river when the tide is low to think of ideas, because he thinks better when he is in motion. With permission, visits other Clans' territories to see friends. Explores his territory further when bored. Collects the most perfect shells he can find. Find old twoleg materials to make his life easier. Gossip and speak with others of his Clan.}

Likes :: (Note: Likes noted with a {*} are essential likes)

• Those of whom are loyal to what they seem is right {*}
  
  
• Ones who are confident and don't constantly look down on themselves or others; cats who see beauty in everything {*}
  
  
• Cats who fulfill their duties with pride
  
• Feeling like he's doing something to help his Clan {*}
  
  
• Being with friends and family {*}
  
• Young cats who are grateful too much and complain little
  
• Feeling safe and controlled
  
• Organized cats
  

Dislikes ::

• Completely disrespectful cats to others beliefs, or others in general {*}
  
  
• "Perfect" warriors or warriors with or act like they have infinite power {*}
  
  
• Cats of whom are better at using a skill than the cats of a clan who specializes such a skill {*}
  
  
• Cats that try to be cool just go they can smuggle out of something or just seem cool in general
  
  
• Procrastination
  
• Lying {*}
  
• Elders who take advantage of their old age
  
• Over-dramatic cats {*}
  

Appearance: Large, lean, and, well, gray! Torrentheart has a very flexible build in a large and well-muscled frame. He has a medium-length, light gray pelt with dark tabby stripes and white-gray spots on his muzzle, paws, underbelly, and in splotches on his tail. He has some blue coloring lining his muzzle. Very sharp claws but blunt teeth. Bright pink nose, long whiskers, and a larger-than-average muzzle. Has color-changing eyes, shifting between green and blue and sometimes will go in-between resulting in a pretty hazelish color.



Personality :: Compassionate, loyal, and fierce, this tom is a good example of a 'perfect' warrior on the outside. Inside, however, he is a bit less so. Torrentheart is very dedicated and often will take on jobs voluntarily that are not even his. He can be very OCD sometimes and go through phases where he spends a whole day cleaning and organizing the dens, ignoring any help offered. This gray tom is also fairly clumsy. If he really needs to be, he can be stable, but for the most part, he's always bound to trip over something or someone. He hates to be wrong and will usually be a bit shy and awkward if proved wrong in front of a crowd. Sarcastic and quite amusing to most when in a good mood. He never procrastinates, finishing what he needs to get done PRONTO. He is loving and caring to everyone, even the cats he hates, however he may be more blunt to those kinds of cats or strangers. Often will give others the good things he has before himself. Torrentheart is a creative thinker; give him time, and he will think of amazing improvements and inventions. Also very traditional and loyal to his beliefs, making him very wise when he needs to be. Being very fierce and over-opinionated sometimes, this can also make him lash out in defense at others if they disagree with him. Music affects Torrentheart very much. If he hears a happy birdsong, he will often be in his best mood and will be very happy, and the same is with if he feels sad. If something emotional happens to him, he will often refer himself back to an old tune that fits the moment and get it stuck in his head all day. Because of this, Torrentheart has a very short temper especially with ones he dislikes and can change moods quickly.

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Wow Torrent. This is actually really good for a start. Keep up the good work! ^-^

Hey Torrentheart, you could always refer to the Site Template for Create-A-Cat :DD

http://www.warriorcatsforum.com/t1896-create-a-cat-rules-template

Or you could refer to mine too 8D it's in my signature

No one ever uses my character sheet because it's hard to get to xD I think it's got some pretty awesome details in areas where people would just write a simple list. Your hobby part has some strange sentences where you used two or three compound words in one phrase. Reading aloud helps the choppy bits, even if it looks embarrassing. You also typed "hen" instead of "when" somewhere near the beginning of that section
Write your personality and description soon c: I wanna see it.