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Post by Frost January 19th 2013, 11:02

Based on my character sheet: http://www.warriorcatsforum.com/t894p140-phantom-s-characters-updated#79462

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This is a really short snippet of my character's life. I'm really busy with schoolwork yeah so it would be a slow update. Hope you like it! Very Happy
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Post by Ren January 19th 2013, 12:37

Detailed and accurate. I like it so far, Phantom! Make more soon. There was a few errors, like 'they' instead of 'the', but it's just grammar Very Happy And in the beggining, you said Coldpaw, and then later he was Coldfur.
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Post by Nyx January 19th 2013, 13:10

Not bad for a start Phanny ^-^ It's short, but it starts the storyline nicely. Can't wait for the next update!
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