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Sunbeam
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Name: Sunbeam
Gender: Tom
Age: 30 moons.
Description: A large golden tom with lighter yellow patches and black paws. He has unusually long claws and amber eyes.
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Strengths: He has powerful muscles that help him be a strong swimmer. He is extremely skilled at tactics and strategy, and can think up great battle plans.
Weaknesses: Because if his large frame, Sunbeam always seems to brush against reeds or snap a twig. He often misses prey, making him a not-so-great hunter.
Family:Cloud, River (Rain), Shadow, Sunflower
History: As a kit named Fire, foxes raided his family's den, killing his mother, father, and littermate. He wandered alone for a few days, until a RiverClan warrior found him and took him to RiverClan. There he became an apprentice and trained in the way of the warrior.
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Other Info
(Credit to Lightningstorm!)
Favorite time of year: New-leaf
Least-favorite time of year: Leaf-bare
Favorite food: Water Vole
Least favorite food: Blackbird
Favorite thing taught during training: Fighting and battle tactics.
Least favorite thing taught during training: Races
Phsyical abilities: Swiimming, fighting, pouncing, strength and accuracy
Strengths: Fighting, Swimming, Debating, Strategy
Weaknesses: Running, Climbing, Stealth.
Problem solving skills: Looks at all the options and then picks the best possible one.
Communication Skills: Tries to convey things clearly and quickly.
Leadership skills: Good
Teamwork skills: Tries to see from another perspective, cooperative.
Learning skills: Quick
Organization skills: Careful and meticulous.
Investigation skills: Persistent and very meticulous.
To a lack of food: Encourages and hunts for his friends and clanmates.
To a lack of sleep: Easily angered, tries to stay awake.
To someone finding your darkest secret: Make then promise to keep it, feel nervous.
To a begging friend: Helps as much as he can.
To a begging stranger: Careful but might help (depending on the situation).
To the death of a loved one: Sad, moody, hollow
To the death of a stranger: Curious, a little sorry.
To a starving cat: Hunts for them
To a sick cat: Take them to a medicine cat.
To be in trouble: Looking for a way out, apologetic, and embarrassed.
To be lied to: Steady and persistent, trying to find the truth and the reason why you were lied to.
To see someone bullied: Break it up, speak to the bully/bullies.
To be trapped: Calm, looks for a way out, comforts friends/clanmates.
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Gender: Tom
Age: 30 moons.
Description: A large golden tom with lighter yellow patches and black paws. He has unusually long claws and amber eyes.
Pictures:
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Strengths: He has powerful muscles that help him be a strong swimmer. He is extremely skilled at tactics and strategy, and can think up great battle plans.
Weaknesses: Because if his large frame, Sunbeam always seems to brush against reeds or snap a twig. He often misses prey, making him a not-so-great hunter.
Family:Cloud, River (Rain), Shadow, Sunflower
History: As a kit named Fire, foxes raided his family's den, killing his mother, father, and littermate. He wandered alone for a few days, until a RiverClan warrior found him and took him to RiverClan. There he became an apprentice and trained in the way of the warrior.
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Other Info
(Credit to Lightningstorm!)
Favorite time of year: New-leaf
Least-favorite time of year: Leaf-bare
Favorite food: Water Vole
Least favorite food: Blackbird
Favorite thing taught during training: Fighting and battle tactics.
Least favorite thing taught during training: Races
Phsyical abilities: Swiimming, fighting, pouncing, strength and accuracy
Strengths: Fighting, Swimming, Debating, Strategy
Weaknesses: Running, Climbing, Stealth.
Problem solving skills: Looks at all the options and then picks the best possible one.
Communication Skills: Tries to convey things clearly and quickly.
Leadership skills: Good
Teamwork skills: Tries to see from another perspective, cooperative.
Learning skills: Quick
Organization skills: Careful and meticulous.
Investigation skills: Persistent and very meticulous.
To a lack of food: Encourages and hunts for his friends and clanmates.
To a lack of sleep: Easily angered, tries to stay awake.
To someone finding your darkest secret: Make then promise to keep it, feel nervous.
To a begging friend: Helps as much as he can.
To a begging stranger: Careful but might help (depending on the situation).
To the death of a loved one: Sad, moody, hollow
To the death of a stranger: Curious, a little sorry.
To a starving cat: Hunts for them
To a sick cat: Take them to a medicine cat.
To be in trouble: Looking for a way out, apologetic, and embarrassed.
To be lied to: Steady and persistent, trying to find the truth and the reason why you were lied to.
To see someone bullied: Break it up, speak to the bully/bullies.
To be trapped: Calm, looks for a way out, comforts friends/clanmates.
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- Relationship Chart:
- Birdstar | * * * * * * * * * * | 10, Mate
Streamstar | * * * * * * | 6, Good Friend
Flamepaw | * * * * * | 5, friend
Snowstar | * * * * * | 5, Friend
Thuderclaw | * * *| 3, Acquaintance
Tell me if you want to be added!
- Key:
- 1=Enemy, 2=Stranger, 3=Acquaintance, 4=Clanmate, 5=Friend, 6=Good friend, 7=Best friend, 8=Distant Family, 9=Close Family, 10=Mate
Last edited by Sunbeam on August 6th 2013, 00:45; edited 39 times in total
Sunbeam- RiverClan Senior Warrior
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Re: Sunbeam
Wait, is Sunbeam's mom my cat Sunflower? xD I dunno. (That would mean that Sunbeam would have had to have been born like 20 moons after Windystorm )
Anyway, cool sheet Sun. Maybe you could add in a bit more info about your past if you had one before Riverclan, or maybe some more weaknesses. He seems pretty strong.
Anyway, cool sheet Sun. Maybe you could add in a bit more info about your past if you had one before Riverclan, or maybe some more weaknesses. He seems pretty strong.
Windystorm- WindClan Warrior
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Re: Sunbeam
I agree with Windy on that, because you can't be invincible. And since RiverClan's territory is mostly "bendy stuff" like reeds, clumsiness doesn't make much difference... meh. Just my opinion, ignore me if you want xD I'd suggest adding more detail on the 2nd sheet
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Re: Sunbeam
Yeah, he has speed, strength, the claws... Riverclan cats are sorta lazy xD They aren't fast, really. The claws are ok, and I can see the strength coming in, but don't make him invincible. If I put myself against him in a battle I'd probably die in a few moments...
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Re: Sunbeam
@Windy: She's a different cat.
I updated my strengths and weaknesses! Tell me what you think!
I updated my strengths and weaknesses! Tell me what you think!
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Re: Sunbeam
That's a bit better but he's still super powerful I suggest doing some physical weaknesses since he only has 2 minor weaknesses, and they're mental.
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Re: Sunbeam
"Unpredictable temper that tends to get unpredictable." Lol
If you take off the 'unbeatable tactics' thing, or at least make it 'clever tactics', it might make it better. xD Every cat has flaws.
If you take off the 'unbeatable tactics' thing, or at least make it 'clever tactics', it might make it better. xD Every cat has flaws.
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Re: Sunbeam
Add me to your relationship chart!!
And I think strength and lightning fast don't go along together much... :3
And I think strength and lightning fast don't go along together much... :3
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Re: Sunbeam
Do you still need to find pictures Sunbeam? Cause I found a couple~
Okay, maybe more than a couple.
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Okay, maybe more than a couple.
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Re: Sunbeam
Thanks, Brighty! I'll use those!
Sunbeam- RiverClan Senior Warrior
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Re: Sunbeam
I accidentally deleted it, so I redid it all! I also added "other info".
And the answer to my poll is.....
Thin Air! (She is my sister Cloud.)
And the answer to my poll is.....
Thin Air! (She is my sister Cloud.)
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Re: Sunbeam
I honestly like the detail. I would also like to be added on the relationship chart :3 Thanks
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Re: Sunbeam
I like it. Can I be added to the relationship chart?
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Re: Sunbeam
It's nice Sunbeam. ^-^ Just telling you, though. There's a 'her' in your Other Info. And your second spoiler isn't working.
Oh I just remembered guys. In Official RPGs, what really counts for who defeats who is your AP. So Windy would still defeat Sunbeam.
Oh I just remembered guys. In Official RPGs, what really counts for who defeats who is your AP. So Windy would still defeat Sunbeam.
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Re: Sunbeam
Brains over brawn ;D Er, kidding. More like speed... xD Good, Sun. You're more balanced now! :3
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Re: Sunbeam
UPDATED!
I updated the relationship chart, other information, and cleaned up other miscellaneous errors!
I updated the relationship chart, other information, and cleaned up other miscellaneous errors!
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Re: Sunbeam
Hay Sunny, can be on the Relationship Chart? Thanks
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Sunbeam- RiverClan Senior Warrior
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Re: Sunbeam
Sunbeam wrote:Just a quick question, how do you delete a poll?
I think only GMs can do it. o: I'm not sure though. Ask Frost or Chez or Whiteout.
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Sunbeam- RiverClan Senior Warrior
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Re: Sunbeam
I would like to be added to the relationship chart if that's okay. Even though we don't talk much these days.
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Re: Sunbeam
Sure thing! I added you as acquaintance, but if you want to be friend, just let me know!
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Re: Sunbeam
Can I be added to the chart?
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Re: Sunbeam
Done! Anyone else want to be added?
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