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Birdflight (Updated!)
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Name: Birdflight (Birdi, Apple-Jack, Apple Birdy, Bird.)
Clan: WindClan
Rank: Deputy
Age: 32 moons
Gender: She Cat
Mentor/Apprentice: Former Apprentice: Rockpetal /Former Apprentice: Mapleheart /Former Mentor: Oakshadow
Mate: Sunbeam <3
Kits with Nightwhisper: Stormstrike Boltclaw Autumndawn Leopardheart
Kits with Sunbeam: Sandkit Leafkit Brackenkit Flarekit
Parents: Leafwhisper (deceased) Sparrowtalon (deceased)
Littermates: Bramblethorn (Alive) Hawkpaw (deceased) Dawnstorm (adopted)
Favorite Prey: Rabbits and birds
Personality: Birdflight is a natural leader and very bold and fearless. She is daring and loves taking risks especially in battle. One quote she has said is, "You never know unless you try" Birdflight is very valient or lionhearted in battle and loves adventure and action. When Birdflight was an apprentice one of the apprentices, Brightpaw, decided to make Birdflight's life miserable. (They were best friends when they were kits) All of a sudden Brightpaw completely dumped Birdflight as a friend developing her courageous and spirited personality. At first Birdpaw then had a low self-esteem because of Brightpaw but thanks to her mentor, Oakshadow at the time, he helped her gain more confidence in herself making her like the cat she is today. She is strong and fierce and loves her clan more then anything. One of Birdflight's dear friends had moved to a different clan and Birdflight was furious making her fiercely loyal so she can prove to her friend how loyal she is. Constantly Birdflight thinks she needs to prove herself, or she will be weak. She constantly compares herself to other cats of the clan such as the senior warriors and can at times be very sad and upset about how she is compared to a cat. This makes her even more fierce and determined to show everyone that she is not someone to mess with and that she is worth something. Birdflight is fearless so if a badger or an enemy warrior were standing before her, without hesitation she would fight rather than freeze with fear. She hates being left behind and loves her clan above all else. Despite her fierce, spunky, strong and fearless personality she can be very sweet and loving around her friends and family. Birdflight hates feeling weak and thinking she's not good enough and can occasionally be very hard on herself. Birdflight is incredibly clever and no matter how tempting something may be she stays loyal, never wavering.
Warrior Skills: Birdflight's strong point is fighting. She has long, sharp claws and razor sharp fangs. She is agile and swift while she's fighting and lands powerful blows. She is a pretty decent hunter. She is one of the fastest cats in the clan so she can easily catch a rabbit but after a while she starts to get tired and doesn't catch as much. Overall she is an incredible fighter and is very agile, elegant and swift.
Flaws: Birdflight is very stubborn, and absolutely hates it when someone points out she's wrong. She can sometimes jump into things very quickly and wants to be on top. She can be very self-conscious and is very hesitant in some important decisions that may impact her clan for the rest of her life. Birdflight also gets jealous easily. She forgets about the accomplishments she's done and focuses on what other people are better at then her, making her feel even worse about herself. This happened especially as an apprentice and young warrior. Over the years Birdflight has matured and become more wise but she is still young. Since she is very daring she has a higher chance of getting injured.
Appearance: Beautiful dark brown she cat with coal black tabby stripes and a white underbelly. Also her front left paw and her back right paw are white. She has white ear tips and her left ear has a notch in it from a battle. She has beautiful golden eyes and her foster mother, Runningstream says they remind her of the sun, bright and alluring. Birdflight has a somewhat long tail and whiskers and very sharp claws. She is an average sized she cat and is determined to succeed and help her clan.
History: (Be prepared for a short story ;D) http://www.warriorcatsforum.com/t2494-birdflight-s-short-stories#76687
More about Family:
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- Leafwhisper- Beauitful dark brown tabby she cat with stunning leaf green eyes and one white paw. Leafwhisper is very soft spoken and quiet. She is very sweet and loving to her friends and family. When Leafwhisper is on the battle field she is the exact opposite. She is fierce and aggressive when in battle and will not stop to rest except in an absolute emergency. Murdered by ThunderClan cats right after she had her kits
Sparrowtalon- Handsome and muscular light brown tabby tom with scorching golden eyes. He is very fierce and aggressive and is an incredible fighter. He will never back down and is very loyal, brave and determined. Sparrowtalon is one of the most respected cats in WindClan and one of the best fighters. When he was around Leafwhisper he was loving and very protective of her. When Leafwhisper died he was crushed and wouldn't fall in love with another she cat again. Yet, he knew if he died to join Leafwhisper, she would never forgive Sparrowtalon for making her kits go through life without any parent. Sparrowtalon was determined not to let his mate or his kits down and raised them himself with the help of him and Leafwhisper's best friend Runningstream. Died of old age and a strange sickness
Hawkpaw- Swift light brown tabby tom with golden eyes and longer, more thick fur then the rest of his family. Hawkpaw is very fierce and has always loved to spar with any cat he sees. He loves the idea that he was born in battle. Although with his crush or his family he is very funny, light-hearted, and still fierce as ever. Leafwhisper named him after Hawkstorm her father, because she sensed that Hawkpaw would be as fierce and strong as Hawkstorm and indeed he was. Hawkpaw is very courageous but died at a very young age and never received his warrior name. Hawkpaw's personality is a lot like Sparrowtalon's. Murdered by one of the toms that was involved in his mother's death. He suffered a head injury and died saving his sister's life. In StarClan he loves the idea that he was born in battle and that he died in battle
Bramblethorn- Large, well-built dark brown tabby tom with deep forest green eyes. He has a white muzzle with a small stripe that stops in between his eyes. Bramblethorn is mysterious and quiet. He is an incredible fighter and can be very fierce when he wants to be. Also, he is very quiet around strangers but around family members or close friends he is very funny, hyper, and adventurous. He is also very sweet, kind, heroic, and brave. Bramblethorn is one of the best fighters in WindClan but is a lousy hunter. He mostly relies on brute strength and he can be very powerful when fighting yet he is still somewhat fast thanks to his WindClan origins. When Sparrowtalon died, Birdflight was his only real family that he had left making him fiercely protective of his sister. If anyone said anything bad about his friends or family he would make that cat his enemy. Overall Bramblethorn is mysterious, quiet, sweet, yet fierce, protective and brave. Bramblethorn's personality is a lot like Leafwhisper's except he is a little more fierce. Currently still alive
Runningstream- Beautiful white she cat with blue-gray splotches and ice blue eyes. Runningstream is very sweet and motherly to all cats. She is an amazing hunter and a very swift and elegant she cat. She is graceful and beautiful and one of the fastest in the clan. Runningstream is the mother to Iceflight and Echoheart although she loves all her kits including Birdflight, Bramblethorn, and once Hawkpaw equally. Runningstream was crushed when Hawkpaw was killed. Hawkpaw was her son basically. When Sparrowtalon died she was in incredible pain just like she was for Hawkpaw. Sparrowtalon was her best friend and they had raised the kits together. Runningstream is very sweet, kind, and loving. Currently still alive
Well-Known Kin: Bramblestar, Hawkfrost, Squirrelflight, Tawnypelt, Tigerstar, Onestar, Firestar, Leafpool, Crowfeather, Goldenflower, Flametail, Dawnpelt, Tigerheart, etc.
Origins:Birdflight is basically pure WindClan for she has never been in any other clan, other than WindClan. Also, because of her ancestors she has some ThunderClan and ShadowClan blood. She is not as nervous when there are trees and she is an incredible fighter like ShadowClan cats. She is also descendant of Bramblestar since her grandmother was the daughter of Bramblestar and Squirrelflight. She also is a descendant of Tigerstar, Onestar, and Firestar.
Other Information:
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Birthplace: In a badger den during a huge battle
Clan Born Into: WindClan
First Memory: Hearing her mother die at the paws of enemy warriors
First Words: Saying, "Mother?" to her foster mother, Runningstream, when she first opens her eyes
First Toy: Mossball
Type of Childhood: Tragedy at times but mostly a nice child hood
Biggest Childhood Fear: Spiders, blood, and her friends and family dying
Biggest Childhood Trauma: Hearing her mother die when she was born
Biggest Childhood Dream: To become a leader
Biggest Childhood Hero: Oakshadow, her mentor
Childhood Friends: Bramblethorn, Iceflight, Crowfrost
Childhood Enemies: Brightleaf
Most Memorable Event: Her mother's death (she had a dream of her mother's death everyday when she was a kit) Becoming Deputy
Main Childhood Beliefs: If you prove yourself, the outcome is great. To prove yourself you must work hard. And to work hard you most have commitment and loyalty.
Favorite Time of Year: Green-leaf
Least Favorite Time of Year: Leaf-bare
Favorite Food: Rabbit
Least Favorite Food: Fish
Favorite Colors: Gold, green, blue, and all beautiful colors in Leaf-fall
Favorite Lesson Taught in Apprenticeship: Fighting
Least Favorite Lesson Taught in Apprenticeship: Stealth (she thought it was boring lol)
Favorite Activities: Running, Sparing, Relaxing in the sun
Religion: StarClan
Level of Activity: Prays sometimes
Level of Influence: Extremely Strong
Physical Abilities: Running, Jumping
Eating Habits: Eats neatly and takes her time but will eat quickly if necessary
Walking Habits: Long strides of authority (lol)
Sleeping Habits: Curled up in a small ball with a paw over her nose and her tail by her muzzle
Nervous Habits: Shuffles on her paws and her tail lashes
Strengths: Fighting, Speed, Calmness, Hunting
Weaknesses: Tree Climbing, Stealth
Regrets: For not figuring out if Hawkpaw was in DF
Fears: Losing Bramblethorn
Desires: To become the leader of WindClan
Flaws: She is a perfectionist and can easily lose her temper at times
Dreams: To become the very best and be the leader
Secrets: She has a secret mate in RiverClan who is Sunbeam <3
Main Authority Figures: Honeystar, The Elders, StarClan, Runningstream, and her parents before they died.
Relationship Chart:
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- | Sunbeam | • • • • • • • • • • (Love)
| Bramblethorn | • • • • • • • • (Family)
| Snowlily | • • • • • • • • (Best Friend/ Family)
| Rockpetal | • • • • • • • (Best Friend/Former Apprentice- Deceased)
| Windystorm | • • • • • • • (Best Friend)
| Lightningstorm | • • • • • • • (Best Friend)
| Viper | • • • • • • • (Best Friend)
| Honeyleaf | • • • • • • (Good Friend- Deceased)
| Dawnstorm | • • • • • • (Good Friend)
| Gingerblaze | • • • • • • (Good Friend)
| Honeystar | • • • • • • (Good Friend/Leader)
| Sparkflame | • • • • (Friend- Deceased)
| Brightstar | • • • (Acquaintance)
| Cheesestar | • • • (Acquaintance)
| Streamfur | • • • (Acquaintance)
| Maplestream | • • (Stranger)
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- Enemy - 1
Stranger - 2
Acquaintance - 3
Clanmate - 4
Friend - 5
Good Friend - 6
Best Friend - 7
Family - 8
Crush - 9
Love - 10
Pictures:
Birdflight
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Sandkit
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Leafkit
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Brackenkit
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Flarekit
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Updates:
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- 11/15/12: Updated the format and made things somewhat neater. Updated Age and Epilogue and some changes were made in relationship chart. Also I added nicknames, Origins, Other Info, and Credits.
12/24/12: Moved History to different topic (See Link) Added some people to my Relationship Chart
12/25/12: Added pictures for my new kits and decorated the top ;D
12/27/12: Added special effects to kit pictures
Credits:
Windystorm- For Relationship Chart and Key, you are so creative Windy and your idea is perfect!
Lightningstorm- For Other Information, it is such an awesome idea and I'm going to keep updating it!
Brightstar- I used your charrie sheet A LOT and it helped me so much so thank you!
Phantom- I went off of your's as a template and I will be adding Other Characters soon, so in advance thank you so much for everything!
Also, thank you to everyone who actually read everything! I worked really hard on it and it means a lot, so thank you all for the support!!!
Last edited by Birdflight on February 8th 2013, 23:14; edited 47 times in total
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Re: Birdflight (Updated!)
Lol It looks like all the sections from name to history was copied off mine. Did mine become the template? I don't mind though. Lol Looks good Applefur. The only reason I haven't done the stuff about my family is because it's supposed to be about me. My kits will get their own.
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Tee hee...maybe But it was really really organized and I wanted mine to be organized like yours was because I really liked the style of it. Im sorry if I offended you
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Re: Birdflight (Updated!)
Oh no, no, no! I'm absolutely not offended. I'm actually pretty flattered that you liked it so much. Thanks. You couldn't offend me by doing something like that. Don't worry about it. Why not add a mentor and apprentice section too? I put it on mine this morning.
I'll like this. I actually have more to add to mine that I haven't figured out how to go about doing yet. Keep checking back.
I'll like this. I actually have more to add to mine that I haven't figured out how to go about doing yet. Keep checking back.
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Re: Birdflight (Updated!)
It's not a problem. I'll let you know if I come up with other things. But for my character sheet my goal is to keep it about me as much as possible.
I know you said you were having trouble finding pictures and I came across this.
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I know you said you were having trouble finding pictures and I came across this.
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Re: Birdflight (Updated!)
Oh thank you! I have that already for when she was an apprentice but thank you anyway ^.^
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Re: Birdflight (Updated!)
Sorry pics didn't show up before. Something is wrong with my computer. Oh well.
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Re: Birdflight (Updated!)
Oh, nice idea, App! I should add to my family members!
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Re: Birdflight (Updated!)
lol family members is getting popular... i recently added them to mine. o.O i like yours, Apple. it's sweet and sincere. although i'm just gonna say.... you have a little [/u] next to the WindClan you should probably fix... the last kit picture is so cute though!
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I like the idea but I'm keeping my sheet about me strictly. This is really good Applefur. Nice work on it.
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Having ancestors is pretty cool and you got the family members thing from mine! xD
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I personally love this one. The eyes aren't quite perfect but I thought it was a good picture.
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Yay Applefur! It's great, did you see mine yet? You might have to scroll down, though I forgot if you commented or not lol
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I love how you changed the story of Nightwhisper, that you changed into warrior version. Great job, Apple!
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Lol thanks guys for all the feedback I'll be sure to check your guy's character sheets in a sec Im going to check out all the other topics right now and get caught up real quick
Thank you all a ton!
Thank you all a ton!
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I like it!
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Re: Birdflight (Updated!)
Updated almost everything! I had to redo every single thing though because I accidently lost everything DX But I hope you enjoy it
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Re: Birdflight (Updated!)
Applefur The history is really interesting! You're the only cat I know who was born in a battle, in a badger den :O The Birdkit pictures are really cute!
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There were some grammar mistakes, but I probably wouldn't want to read over everything if I had just lost it, either everything has a lot of detail and your mother was a cool cat you're one of the only people who is actually a pure-bred Clan ct who never switched Clans xD good work
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I wish I could write as descriptive as you, but I spend most of my time typing with my novels. I LOVE IT
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Re: Birdflight (Updated!)
Nice! It's really good. I would give almost anything to write as descriptive as you! I'm horrible at that kind of thing.
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