Tangleclaw (Updated)
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Tangleclaw (Updated)
Name:Tangleclaw
Age:18 moons
Gender:She
Clan:WindClan
BFFs:Rainclaw (not on yet), Blackstone, Foxfury, Thunderclaw, Torrentheart, Flamepaw, Scarheart
Fav food:MAC N CHEESE!
Fav color:Blue
Fav toy:LPS
Fav game:MineCraft!
Looks: Tan she cat with blue eyes. She has a light brown circle on her chest, left eye, tail tip, ears, and belly
Personality: Active she cat who loves joking around but can be serious at times
Kits: Firekit (later Firepelt), Leafkit (Later Leaffur), Soulfit (later Soulcloud)
Grandchild: Lionkit (later Lionclaw. Rainclaw's kit)
Sister:Rainclaw
Brother:Anyone?
Mother:Spice
Father:Tallstar
Step-sister:Aspenheart (made up), Foxfury (dead)
Mate:Thunderclaw
Tangleclaw Speaks. Struggling times: I padded up to Tallstar, so happy to see him again. I just wished that he was alive though. He looked younger and stronger now, his strong legs showed under his black and white pelt. "Father!" I purred, "Why have you brought me here? To StarClan?". Tallstar didn't look so happy now that I asked. His amber gaze was fixed on the rocky ground. He flicked his tail and a dusty tan she cat padded forward. "A kittypet!" I hissed, unsheathing my sharp claws. Tallstar glanced up. Fear and Anger was in his gaze. "Stop! Don't hurt your mother!" he growled. I flicked my tail in amusment. "Oh father. Ashfoot is my mother not this kittypet!" I giggled. The dusty tan cat turned around to face Tallstar. "You haven't told her?" the kittypet asked. Tallstar padded over to the kittypet and said, "No.". Tallstar turned his gaze to me. "This is Spice. Your mother. I was taking a walk with her one night and she lost control of her legs and fell. You and your sister were born but... Spice wouldn't get up." Tallstar sighed. I stared in disbelief. But I ran over to Spice and dug my muzzle into her comforting pelt. Tears rolled down my face like the river. "Don't leave me ever!" I cried. Tallstar and Spice nodded. "We won't." They mewed.
Name:Aspenheart
Age:18 moons
Gender:She
Clan:WindClan
BFF's:Rainclaw
Fav prey:Rabbit
Looks: Gray she cat (with darker flecks) with sea green eyes.
Personality: Active she cat and a experienced fighter.
Kits:Smallkit, Heatherkit, Seedkit (dead)
Sister:Spottednose
Brother:
Mother:Unknown
Father:Unknown
Step Father:Tallstar
Step sister:Tangleclaw, Rainclaw
Mate:Jaggedclaw
Updates coming soon!
Age:18 moons
Gender:She
Clan:WindClan
BFFs:Rainclaw (not on yet), Blackstone, Foxfury, Thunderclaw, Torrentheart, Flamepaw, Scarheart
Fav food:MAC N CHEESE!
Fav color:Blue
Fav toy:LPS
Fav game:MineCraft!
Looks: Tan she cat with blue eyes. She has a light brown circle on her chest, left eye, tail tip, ears, and belly
Personality: Active she cat who loves joking around but can be serious at times
Kits: Firekit (later Firepelt), Leafkit (Later Leaffur), Soulfit (later Soulcloud)
Grandchild: Lionkit (later Lionclaw. Rainclaw's kit)
Sister:Rainclaw
Brother:Anyone?
Mother:Spice
Father:Tallstar
Step-sister:Aspenheart (made up), Foxfury (dead)
Mate:Thunderclaw
Tangleclaw Speaks. Struggling times: I padded up to Tallstar, so happy to see him again. I just wished that he was alive though. He looked younger and stronger now, his strong legs showed under his black and white pelt. "Father!" I purred, "Why have you brought me here? To StarClan?". Tallstar didn't look so happy now that I asked. His amber gaze was fixed on the rocky ground. He flicked his tail and a dusty tan she cat padded forward. "A kittypet!" I hissed, unsheathing my sharp claws. Tallstar glanced up. Fear and Anger was in his gaze. "Stop! Don't hurt your mother!" he growled. I flicked my tail in amusment. "Oh father. Ashfoot is my mother not this kittypet!" I giggled. The dusty tan cat turned around to face Tallstar. "You haven't told her?" the kittypet asked. Tallstar padded over to the kittypet and said, "No.". Tallstar turned his gaze to me. "This is Spice. Your mother. I was taking a walk with her one night and she lost control of her legs and fell. You and your sister were born but... Spice wouldn't get up." Tallstar sighed. I stared in disbelief. But I ran over to Spice and dug my muzzle into her comforting pelt. Tears rolled down my face like the river. "Don't leave me ever!" I cried. Tallstar and Spice nodded. "We won't." They mewed.
Name:Aspenheart
Age:18 moons
Gender:She
Clan:WindClan
BFF's:Rainclaw
Fav prey:Rabbit
Looks: Gray she cat (with darker flecks) with sea green eyes.
Personality: Active she cat and a experienced fighter.
Kits:Smallkit, Heatherkit, Seedkit (dead)
Sister:Spottednose
Brother:
Mother:Unknown
Father:Unknown
Step Father:Tallstar
Step sister:Tangleclaw, Rainclaw
Mate:Jaggedclaw
Updates coming soon!
Key for my My ratings for you!
1: I would like to meet you!
2:Family
3:BFF
4:Friends
5:Clanmates
6:Uh... have we met
7:Stranger
8:I DONT KNOW YOU
9:YOUR A CRAZY STALKER!
10:GET AWAY FROM ME YOU CRAZY STALKER!
My ratings for you!
Thunderclaw 2, 3
Noxe 3
Flamepaw 3, 1
Ghostfur 4
Nocte 3
Blackstone 3
Tell me if you wanna be added.
Last edited by Tangleclaw on November 6th 2013, 17:11; edited 7 times in total
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Re: Tangleclaw (Updated)
You should include your name in the title so people know whose it is on the sidebar
Pretty good start there! I think you should still include appearance and personality, though; they're pretty major parts of it. The history seems a bit rushed. A few little sentences here and there with extra details would really improve it. And add pictures o: Hope you update soon
Pretty good start there! I think you should still include appearance and personality, though; they're pretty major parts of it. The history seems a bit rushed. A few little sentences here and there with extra details would really improve it. And add pictures o: Hope you update soon
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Re: Tangleclaw (Updated)
Updated! Please check it out guys.
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Re: Tangleclaw (Updated)
Cool thing Tangle! Can I be on the relationship chart! THANKS
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Re: Tangleclaw (Updated)
)Updated( Check out my new kits, Tangleclaw Speaks, and more!
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Re: Tangleclaw (Updated)
Updates! New Ratings for you, BFF's, and name changes.
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Re: Tangleclaw (Updated)
I'm in her relationship chart, I'm in her relationship chart( and I didn't even have to ask )
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