Falling tears
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Falling tears
Warning:This takes place between last hope and the last owls book.So it has some spoilers.
This about if Rocky really came to the clans only later.
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Three cats looked at each other sharply.Untill one spoke.
Tigerstar:In the name of all clans why did you choose to meet here.It's so wet and I and I can't hear myself think.
Flametail:Stop complaining Tigerstar.I chose this place because it's damp and noisy.I have things I don't any other cat to over hear.
Foxheart:Come sit by me.There's a dry spot just here.
Tigerstar:If this is dry Foxheart then I'm a mouse.Well Flametail what is it?
Flametail:There have been strange cats in the forest since after the battle.
Tigerstar:I haven't see a single cat since then.
Runningnose:Starclan has.Shouldn't the dark forest have to see it to?
Tigerstar:I guess your right.
Flametail:Of coruse.So that is why I want to send Soren a sign.
Tigerstar:Are you mouse-brained?They have been enamies ever since.
Flametail:But they should.
Tigerstar:I guess your right.Do has you wish.
Flametail:I sent a sign about the stars falling on fire and taking down the whole forest.
Redtail:I guess that's good sign.
Soon all the cats of starclan and the dark forest fadded away into the mist and darkness.
This about if Rocky really came to the clans only later.
Proluge
Three cats looked at each other sharply.Untill one spoke.
Tigerstar:In the name of all clans why did you choose to meet here.It's so wet and I and I can't hear myself think.
Flametail:Stop complaining Tigerstar.I chose this place because it's damp and noisy.I have things I don't any other cat to over hear.
Foxheart:Come sit by me.There's a dry spot just here.
Tigerstar:If this is dry Foxheart then I'm a mouse.Well Flametail what is it?
Flametail:There have been strange cats in the forest since after the battle.
Tigerstar:I haven't see a single cat since then.
Runningnose:Starclan has.Shouldn't the dark forest have to see it to?
Tigerstar:I guess your right.
Flametail:Of coruse.So that is why I want to send Soren a sign.
Tigerstar:Are you mouse-brained?They have been enamies ever since.
Flametail:But they should.
Tigerstar:I guess your right.Do has you wish.
Flametail:I sent a sign about the stars falling on fire and taking down the whole forest.
Redtail:I guess that's good sign.
Soon all the cats of starclan and the dark forest fadded away into the mist and darkness.
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Re: Falling tears
Uh Crookedjaw, this seems to be copying a number of things. Stareye has already begun a Warriors-meets-Guardians fan fic already. I dn't think she'll apprecciate that. and also the dialogue is way too similar to the intro of OOTS book 1.
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