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Post by Mossfoot November 26th 2011, 16:07

Warning:This takes place between last hope and the last owls book.So it has some spoilers.
This about if Rocky really came to the clans only later.
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Three cats looked at each other sharply.Untill one spoke.
Tigerstar:In the name of all clans why did you choose to meet here.It's so wet and I and I can't hear myself think.
Flametail:Stop complaining Tigerstar.I chose this place because it's damp and noisy.I have things I don't any other cat to over hear.
Foxheart:Come sit by me.There's a dry spot just here.
Tigerstar:If this is dry Foxheart then I'm a mouse.Well Flametail what is it?
Flametail:There have been strange cats in the forest since after the battle.
Tigerstar:I haven't see a single cat since then.
Runningnose:Starclan has.Shouldn't the dark forest have to see it to?
Tigerstar:I guess your right.
Flametail:Of coruse.So that is why I want to send Soren a sign.
Tigerstar:Are you mouse-brained?They have been enamies ever since.
Flametail:But they should.
Tigerstar:I guess your right.Do has you wish.
Flametail:I sent a sign about the stars falling on fire and taking down the whole forest.
Redtail:I guess that's good sign.
Soon all the cats of starclan and the dark forest fadded away into the mist and darkness.
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Post by Honeystar November 26th 2011, 16:11

Uh Crookedjaw, this seems to be copying a number of things. Stareye has already begun a Warriors-meets-Guardians fan fic already. I dn't think she'll apprecciate that. and also the dialogue is way too similar to the intro of OOTS book 1.
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