A Time of Betrayal RPG

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Info.: The Dark Forest has succeeded, and the era of the Clans has fallen. The Clans have broken up into smaller, individual packs. They fight for territory, prey, and alliances. War is coming between these five Packs.

Packs:
Fire Pack: extremely loyal cats that have the best hunting grounds. They are loyal and wise, good battle strategics, but are not very good at fighting Opposite Pack: River Pack
Storm Pack: sneaky, shadowy cats that have no particular permanent hunting grounds. They move where-ever the prey is most plentiful. They are hot-tempered and fierce, and are good fighters Opposite Pack: Sky Pack
River Pack: graceful, strong cats that control the marshes and rivers. They are patient and clever, and are excellent swimmers Opposite Pack: Fire Pack
Sky Pack: aloof, swift-footed cats that live on the plains. They are wily and persistent, and are fast-runners Opposite Pack: Storm Pack
Star Pack: Impatient, powerful cats that live on the mountains. They neutral and cautious, and are the best fighters, but do not like to fight Opposite Pack: N/A [currently neutral in wars]

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Fire Pack-
Leader: Emberstar
Deputy:
Medicine Cat: Spiritdust
Warriors:
Speckleflame

Storm Pack-
Leader: Battlestar
Deputy: Cloudsong
Medicine Cat:Stillwater
Warriors:

River Pack-
Leader: Splashstar
Deputy: Snowbreeze
Medicine Cat:
Warriors:
Rippleclaw
Dreamsoul

Sky Pack-
Leader:Skystar
Deputy: Tundrabreeze
Medicine Cat:
Warriors:
Moonflower

Star Pack:
Leader: Aurorastar
Deputy:
Medicine Cat: Starshine
Warriors:
Batstripe

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Name:
Description:
Personality:
Mate:
Pack:
Rank:

My Characters:

Name: Aurorastar
Description: golden she-cat with brilliant green eyes
Personality: wise, protective, strong, loyal, sweet
Mate: looking
Pack: Star Pack
Rank: Star Pack leader

Name: Rippleclaw
Description: silver-and-black tabby tom with blue eyes
Personality: fierce, strong, tough, loyal, protective
Mate: looking
Pack: River Pack
Rank: warrior

Name: Thunderheart
Description: dark grey tom with pale-blue eyes
Personality: brave, loyal, clever, strong, persistent
Mate: looking (Cloudsong?)
Pack: Storm Pack
Rank: warrior
*Note: Characters must be approved by Brightstar
Plot: Fire Pack against River Pack, Storm Pack against Sky Pack. Star Pack currently neutral.

~Who thinks I should delete one or two of the packs?~

~Don't!!!!!!!~

~But its all too confusing, I think~

~I'll post since oh you know why.~
Name:Snarltooth
Descrition:large dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes and long claws
Personality:powerful,ambitious,dark,cruel,and bloodthristy even since his mate Riverrose died but very nice to clanmates.
Mate:Riverrose[dead]But looking.
Pack:Fire pack
Rank:warrior

Batstripe was worried about Starshine.She went out of camp when a fire pack warrior came out of no and pinned her down."Hello."He snarled."Snarltooth."Batstripe hissed.After minutes of fighting she yowled,"Help-"But she was broken of as Snarltooth sank his teeth into the back of her neck and her body went limp.

~Can I still join? O.o~
Name: Coldfang
Description: silver tom with icey blue eyes
Personality: Calm, loyal, determined
Mate: Looking (Aurorastar?)
Pack: Star Pack
Rank: Deputy?