Return of the rats rping

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This is a rp so nobody should be using their selfs in this roleplay.These cats are rouges who need to fight some rats.To join fill in the following
Name
Looks Like:
gender:
Reason for fighting rats:
These are my cats
Name:Snowy
Looks Like:Gray and White with Sky blue eyes
Gender:She-Cat
Reason for fighting rats:getting revenge for the death of her mother and father
Name:Lilly
Looks like:Pale gray with darker flecks dark blue eyes
Gender:She-cat
Reason for fight rats:getting revenge also for the death of her mother and father
Members:
Lily[Is not a good fighter.]
Rouge
Bubble[Face's a destiny that no other cat or dog or rat knows.]
Bright
Scar
Scratch
Gold
Red
Dawn
Maple
Spirit[Likes scar alot]

Oh and if their brother and sister they can have the same reason for fighting the rats

Bubble leaped to her paws and hissed to Scratch " The rats! There getting closer! We need to get out of here!"

Lily turned around she saw the young cat.She wanted to help,and she did.

"What the rats are getting closer?!?" She meowed at Bubble. Looks like we can finally get revenge on the rats!

"Okay" Star meowed. Star and Scar followed Spirit.

Spirit felt rain."Great."She sighed."let's find somewhere dry and safe from the rats."She said.

"The rats will come closer iif we don't fight them" Gold said to Spirit.

Meanwhile, Red poked his head out from the shelter. Dawn and Storm were fast asleep. Red snarled. He saw cats coming closer. To their territory!? Not on my watch! Red looked back at Dawn and gently nudged her. Dawn leaped to her paws waking up Storm. "Hey! Whats going on?" Storm squeaked. He sneezed as a raindrop hit his nose. "Cats." Red mewed ignoring Storm. Dawn nodded and padded out where she saw a couple cats [Gold,Spirit,Star and Scar] "Hey! Get off our territory now!" Dawn yowled. "Yeah! Out out out!" Storm added very loudly for a kit.

Applefur wrote:Meanwhile, Red poked his head out from the shelter. Dawn and Storm were fast asleep. Red snarled. He saw cats coming closer. To their territory!? Not on my watch! Red looked back at Dawn and gently nudged her. Dawn leaped to her paws waking up Storm. "Hey! Whats going on?" Storm squeaked. He sneezed as a raindrop hit his nose. "Cats." Red mewed ignoring Storm. Dawn nodded and padded out where she saw two cats [Gold and Spirit] "Hey! Get off our territory now!" Dawn yowled. "Yeah! Out out out!" Storm added very loudly for a kit.

Star and Scar are with Gold and Spirit

~Sorry edit done! I think I got kind of lost but its raining right and you all are finding shelter and afraid the rats might come back, right?~

Red bounded up to them with Dawn and Storm at his side. "Who are you!? Tell me now." Growled Red. Storm stepped forward. "You dont wanna mess with Red! Or else! I think you all should do what he says!" Storm snickered. "Hush!" Dawn cried pulling Storm back with her tail.

"We are just getting away from the rats and trying to find shelter from this rain" Star meowed. "I'm Scar and this is my littermate Star" Scar meowed.

Red narrowed his eyes. Dawn stepped forward instead. "We have shelter. You can stay with us for the night. Well, only if you'd like." Dawn said. She flicked her tail toward a cave with bushes beside it. Dawn crawled in with Storm and Red behind her. Surprisingly inside the cave it was very big and roomy.

Hold on a moment. Did Crookedjaw just killed of my character Rogue?!?!
You said ... "Spirit jmped at a dark brown she-cat .She sank her teeth into her neck.Untill she threw her to the other side of the clearing."

I'll just forgive you this once and continue as if I didn't see this message.

Rogue noticed a group of cats. She asked them warily," Who are you?"

Red poked his head out of the cave. "Im Red." He said. Dawn and Storm stood by Red's side. "This is my sister Dawn and my son Storm. My mate died by the rats." Red mewed sadly. "If you need any shelter, we live in that cave. Its quite bigger than you think. By the way whats your name?"

"Rogue," the she-cat mewed. "I'll sleep at the entrance if you don't mind."

Red nodded. "If you need anything just yowl. Oh you hungry? We have prey." He mewed as Dawn and Storm slipped into the cave sleepily.

"I hunt and live on my own," Rogue snarled. She curled herself tightly and settled down on the cold hard ground.

Red nodded understandingly. "Alright." He mewed and slipped into the cave.

Rogue was thankful. "Thanks," she mewed," For understanding."

"Do you have something me and Star could share?" Scar meowed to Red.

Rogue gazed at her surroundings peacefully. She closed one eye, the other opened in case of intruders.

Red smiled warmly. He nodded and disappeared into a small room. He came back with a squirrel that was freshly caught. "Enjoy." Red mewed.

Suddenly, there was a loud wail from nearby.

Red jumped to his paws pricking his ears. Storm was fast asleep with Dawn. He left them safe in the den and poked his head out of the cave. "What was that?" He asked Rouge.

Rogue narrowed her eyes. "I don't know... it sounded like a cat in help."

~I'll rp that cat!~

~Ok ~
Red narrowed his eyes. "I'll stay out here for a while, just in case." He growled.