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Post by SkyStar December 20th 2011, 09:36

Characters in story
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Prologue
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Post by Nyx December 20th 2011, 09:42

Nice propehecy! ^.^
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Post by Scarlett December 20th 2011, 10:33

Lol suspense. I like it. You're very good at writing prophecies. And the work you put into the list of clan cats is amazing. I'd like to see some more detail and more chapters. Maybe a bit longer? Great work. Keep it up.


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Post by SkyStar December 20th 2011, 10:40

Thank you so much you are so sweet. I love how you are so positive. And when i have mistakes you are happy to help me thank you.
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Post by Scarlett December 20th 2011, 10:49

Lol I don't do anything special. It's just a bit of feedback but thanks. Sweat
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Post by Nyx December 20th 2011, 12:06

It's pretty good! xD
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Post by Guest December 20th 2011, 21:28

Wow I like your prophecy. The way you wrote the prolougues is keeping me in suspense. Great job! Wink
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