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Post by Ivyshade June 8th 2013, 16:41

This one's about Poppyflight, one of my OCs. Enjoy!

ALLEGIANCES
Spoiler:

PROLOGUE
Spoiler:

CHAPTER 1
Spoiler:

CHAPTER 2
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Last edited by Ivyshade on June 20th 2013, 13:11; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Adding spoilers & updating)
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Post by Streamstar June 8th 2013, 17:51

This is really good so far Ivyshade. Cat Smile I only noticed a couple mistakes. Near the begining it says, "The inclined her head as her sister’s blue gaze met hers." I assume you meant to put she instead of the. There was another mistake later on, and other than that, I didn't see any other mistakes. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Post by Nyx June 12th 2013, 11:13

I really like your story! (: You should continue it sometime. If it gets any longer though, it might be advised that you put the story into spoilers. To avoid making the reader scroll forever and ever. Razz
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Post by Ivyshade June 15th 2013, 10:51

Thanks, both of you! Oops, I do mean 'she', not 'the'. ^^" And I'll probably contain all the rest of the chapters into spoilers. Thanks again for the advice! c:
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Post by Tangleclaw June 15th 2013, 20:27

I only had time to read the prologue. But I loves it!
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Post by Sunbeam June 15th 2013, 22:52

Very good! It would help if you put it in spoilers so that the first post isn't so long. Oh, and by the way I'm Sunbeam, fellow member of RiverClan. Welcome to Warrior Cats Forum!
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Post by Ivyshade June 20th 2013, 13:12

Thanks for the advice, everybody! I've contained all of the chapters into spoilers and added chapter 2. c: Enjoy!

And thank you for the welcome, Sunbeam!
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Post by Guest June 21st 2013, 13:04

You're a really good writer, Ivyshade! Good job!(:
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