Icepaw's Adventure!

This is a story about Icepaw's (Icetail) first time outside of the clan.

Icepaw- Black and white she-cat with blue eyes
Cloudheart- Tom with creamy white pelt with brown legs, tail and muzzle. (Siamese) Very stubborn but loyal.
Blackwhisper- Black and white she-cat with green eyes. Very kind and caring. Icepaw's mother.

~Chapter 1~

Icepaw ran faster chasing after the mouse. She couldn't wait to come back and show everyone her first fresh kill. Sprinting she dodged a tree root sticking up from the ground, but seconds later she crashed into a tree. "Wake up!" a cat meowed. The sound of Cloudheart's voice made her jump. "Sorry I guess I slept for too long." She meowed.
"Well you not an kit anymore. You have to learn that you can't sleep all you want." Cloudheart's voice wasn't so serious. He laughed at the sight of Icepaw's fur all messed up. "Well are you ready to explore outside camp or are we going to stand around all day?" Icepaw followed Cloudheart outside. She was lucky that her own father was her mentor.
"Today I'm going to show you what it's like outside the camp" Icepaw's twitched with excitement. She finally felt like an apprentice!

Um when you said Cloudheart, you spelled Cloudtail. Just pointing that out other than that
I LIKE IT! ^.^

I like it.

Thanks! And I'll fix that right away!

This is great! Write more please!

Thanks Stareye! Rainfeather and I are going to combine our stories but I'm going to have to wait a while because in her story I'm still a kit.

Cool! Can I be in it?? OOHH!!! Can I be the medicine cat apprentice?

I don't know. It would be kinda hard since your not in Skyclan. Also Rainy and I have already picked the the cats in the clan. You can ask Rainfeather about it if your really want to be in it!

Oh, okay! Thanks, but I like Awesomeclan. Thanks anyways!