Six moons at last!

This is my third time trying to post this story since I keep accidentally deleteing the whole thing. I'm making most of it up as I go and a lot of the names are ones i think of off the top of my head. I'm home sick from school so I decided to pass the time by writing my first fan fiction.

Tigerpaw and his sisters sat proudly after their apprentice ceremony. His sisters were talking excitedly to each other as he thought to himself. He had been given a very good mentor who he knew would teach him a lot. His parents padded up to him. They gazed at each kit proudly, "Congratulations little ones. " Robinwhisker, their mother mewed. His father, Grayclaw nodded his head in agreement. "You'll make fine warriors." he purred. "Come on, Tigerpaw! Let's go pick out our nests in the Apprentice's den!" Mewed his sisters at the same time.
He followed his sisters inside and found a nest that didn't seem to be being used. "Tigerpaw? Are you in here?" He recognized his mentor's voice. "Yes, Applestem, I am." He mewed. "Well time to come out. We have territory to explore!" Applestem replied sticking her head in the den. "You two can come with us if you want to. Just ask your mentors." She added to Rainpaw and Spottedpaw who looked disappointed. Then they looked as if they'd jump in excitement. They ran out of the den and almost ran over Applestem.
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"I didn't know ThunderClan had such big Territory!" Spottedpaw meowed loudly to her mentor, who, had joined Applestem in keeping all three apprentices in line. "Wow! Look how big the lake is!" Tigerpaw ran ahead of his sisters and the two warriors. He sniffed at the lake water then stepped back. "Eww what's that smell?!" He asked trying to ignore the awful smell coming from the constantly lapping lake. "It's fish." Replied Goldenleaf, Spottedpaw's mentor. "This is where our border meets with RiverClan." She added. "That's the last of our territory, let's get back to camp before Fernbreeze starts missing Rainpaw." Applestem mewed.
As they walked back to camp Tigerpaw felt as if his paws would fall off. By the time they reached camp the sun was setting. "Go eat, then, go to your den and sleep. We have battle training tomorrow." Applestem meowed to Tigerpaw. "Yes Applestem." Tigerpaw followed his littermates to the fresh kill pile. He grabbed two mice and a vole for them to share. "That was great!" Rainpaw purred. Tigerpaw took a famished bite of vole, then mewed "I wish we could train together all the time." "Me too, Goldenleaf said I'm patrolling with her at sunhigh." Spottedpaw meowed. They finished eating and headed for the apprentice's den. Tigerpaw closed his eyes and fell asleep.