Desert of Hope~ A Graphic Novel by Sorrelsoul~ Page 14 up!

First topic message reminder :

The GN is below all this jibber jabber


MINOR BLOOD WARNING! READ ON AT YOUR OWN RISK!


The drawing style will change through out the Graphic Novel. I'm still improving so it won't stay the same forever.



So, here's the GN!:


COVER!!


Page 1


Page 2


Page 3


Page 4


Page 5


Page 6


Page 7


Page 8


Page 9


Page 10


Page 11


Page 12

LIGHT VERSION:




Page 13


Page 14


Page 15


Page 1 notes- *facepalm* forgot the brown legs in the last panel!
Page 3 notes- Yeah, new paw style. Hope you like it!
Page 4 notes- Lawl Sun
Page 5 notes- In the third panel, Moon is picking up Fennec
Page 6 notes- It's finally done! Hope you guys like it!
Page 7 notes- If you are confused, Fennec is having a flashback of somesort.
Page 8 notes- After panel two, Fennec faints. I just want to say that so you don't get confused a little on page 10
Page 9 notes- OH, MOON, YOU SILLY KITTY. :3
Page 10 notes- What happened, Fennec? OH NO! Did you get hit in the head?!
Page 11 notes- I'm sorry, Sun, but I agree with Moon O3O
Page 12 notes- ..... I got nothin'


Fans:

Honeystar{WindClan Leader}
DragonMeteor
Blizzard{Global Moderater}
Silver{WindClan}
Rainfeather{SkyClan Deputy}
SkyStar{SkyClan leader}
Streamfur{RiverClan}
Silentwolf{AwesomeClan}

NEW PAGES!

Page 10 is up!!!

Awesome. A little dark on the lighting, but awesome.

Yeah... might have been too much :T Thanks!

Page 11!!!!

NICE WORK!!!!

Thanks! Page 12!

I like the dark lighting!! It was a neat way to show Fennec fainted.

Thanks, Iceshadow!



I'm thinking of posting Chapter 2 on this thread or a different thread. Hmm....

This is awesome! I have wanted to make a comic, but I cant make it like this! Im really impressed. Did you make this on the computer?

Hey Sorrelsoul, be sure to check out my comic that I'm starting. I like the new pages [even if I don't understand some parts- mainly the last part].

I voted to keep all the chapters up front, since they are orginized, but I would say also post them in the comments so fans know more content was added.

I LOVE THEM ALL!

Thanks for voting!

@Honeystar- They are talking in Latin. You can look up what they are saying in Google Translate :3

Its rather dark... Sorrelsoul, could you lighten it a little?

Well it's supposed to be dar in the GN but It will get lighter in the next page. Do you have trouble seeing the cats or the text?

Both.

Oh.. I can see it fine on my computer..... Okay, I post a lighter version soon!

Haha thanks! Its ok when at the lighter coloured parts but those with dark colours are hard to see!

Kay! Glad I could help!

Changed page 11!

new page!

you know, you don't have to double post just to say that there's a new page.. everyone will know when they check the forum. oh and btw, nice story.

Eh. I'm just used to doing that on the official forums XD so many topics you HAVE to do that to get it seen

I like Fennec! Though it`s a bit hard to understand at the moment.