Dawn

Ivypaw stretched. She flexed her claws, eyes gleaming. Today, she was going to patrol ShadowClan's borders with her Clanmates! ShadowClan had stolen from ThunderClan enough times. Ivypaw slipped out of the apprentice's den, blinking away sleep. "Ivypaw! There you are! Are you ready?" Cinderheart was hurrying toward her, eyes round with worry. "Of cour-" Ivypaw began. Cinderheart interrupted her apprentice. "Did you hear the most recent news from the moonhigh patrol?" the smoky grey she-cat fretted. "WindClan has started to hunt in out territory as well!" Ivypaw bared her teeth, and spat, "WindClan! Those scrawny, rabbit-munchers!" Cinderheart circled Ivypaw, her pelt brushing Ivypaw's silver-and-white one. "Come on," she urged, "Lionblaze, Thornclaw, and Graystripe are waiting." Ivypaw flicked her tail crossly as Cinderheart went on, "Stay beside me if there's a battle."
I'm not a kit! Ivypaw shrugged away her mentor. "I'm not a kit!" she snapped aloud. Cinderheart blinked in surprise. "Hurry up, then," her voice became brisk. Ivypaw shot past Cinderheart to join the leaving border patrol.

"ShadowClan sent!" Thornclaw declared, pelt bristling. Graystripe let out a low hiss. "Incoming patrol!" he warned suddenly. Ivypaw tasted the air. "WindClan?" she asked, frowning. "You can't be serious!" Lionblaze protested as a massive patrol surged toward the ThunderClan cats. "Hello," Rowanclaw's voice was smooth as honey. Ivypaw bristled. ShadowClan was being themselves, annoying as ever. "Mouse-hearts," a voice hissed. Cinderheart let out a shocked growl. "Breezepelt?" She flicked her tail. "Is ShadowClan recruiting WindClan cats now?" Graystripe hissed, arching his back. Rowanclaw spat in malice. "Shut up!" he snarled. "Patrol, attack!" Ivypaw gaped in horror as the huge group rushed on to the ThunderClan group, snarling, claws unsheathed. Redwillow slammed into her, pummeling her belly with his claws. Ivypaw ducked and nipped viciously cat the ShadowClan warrior, but Redwillow wouldn't budge. He bit at her throat, as she wriggled, desperate to free herself. No! Ivypaw let out a inward wail as her vision faded to black.

you're such a good writer! tehe I shall wait for the one

Very nice! It was a very good read. I shall look forward to more installments. And thanks for making Thunderclan look good. To the treetops!

eeeew this was a horrible thing to look at

Your face is a horrible thing to look at.

I think Dragonclaw should change Darkfire's name to Darkface.

Monkeyface wrote:Your face is a horrible thing to look at.

Mr. Pumpkin Face

also known as....

Mr. Pumpkin Breath, Mr. Pumpkin King, Mr. Ugly, Mr. No-brain, Mr. Jack-o-Lantern

But hey, I'm just joking. These words can never accurately describe the peculiar orangy-blackish coloration of your furry feline face.

is this what I get for being mean?

No. For being ugly.

Well, he does have that peculiar orangy-blackish coloration on his furry feline face.

Yes, on his furry feline, er, pigish, face.

conversations through comments always get off topic...

So, when's the next installment of Dawn?

Hahaha. I liked Dawn!! It was awesome!!

the book or the fanwork?

That was really good!! loved it!!

Er, I'll start soon.

Maybe tomorrow, or something, I'll write the next one. When Ivypaw "wakes" up. It'll be fun.

Awesome! Can't wait!

Ooh nice story

Ivypaw lifted her head and groaned. She wasn't dead after all. Ivypaw could hear furious battle yowls and shrieks. "Wake up, Ivypaw, wake up," a soft voice whispered. Ivypaw stiffened in surprise. "Bluestar? A-am I d-dead?" she stammered, eyes wider than the full moon. Bluestar nudged the apprentice half- impatiently. "Not this time. But warn Firestar that darkness is coming." Ivypaw struggled to swallow past the lump in her throat. "Darkness?" she whispered hoarsly. Bluestar nodded. "If the Clans aren't prepared, the darkness will swallow the Clans."

Darkfire wrote:the book or the fanwork?

The FanFic!! Awesome new installment!! Yay!!

Thanks! I like yours too!

Thanks

"Why won't she wake up, Jayfeather?" Dovepaw's trembling voice spoke above Ivypaw. "Darkness," Ivypaw gasped, opening her emerald green eyes. "Darkness?" a voice echoed. It was Dawnstripe. "Ivypaw? Tell us what you mean," Firestar meowed calmly. Ivypaw struggled upright and poured out her dream, quaking miserably everytime she said 'darkness'. "Get Silverpaw," Firestar ordered Dawnstripe. "I'm right here!" A silver tabby head poked into the den before Dawnstripe could reply. Ivypaw knew that Silverpaw was the best intepretor in ThunderClan "Well, I heard everything," Silverpaw mewed. She ignored Jayfeather's irritable snort and continued, looking at Firestar. "Shadow and Wind unite to destroy River," Silverpaw intoned. "The Shadows will turn on Wind and rip it apart, then it will......."