Pepperpelt
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Pepperpelt
by BrokenClaw November 29th 2013, 12:12
I am most definitely a male!
I am around 16 moons,but still growing!
Favorite warriors? Bluestar most definite!
Appearance? Can't you see?! I have silver fur with black splotches everywhere! Foreigners mistake me for a snow leopard! ..What's a Snow Leopard?!
My personality? Well.. My mother told me I'm way too energetic! Also that I'm clumsy,and always think I can never do any wrong. Others say I'm quite comical,and yes,I do agree with them! Kekeke!
Traits? Well,I have quite the charisma,pretty fast if I do say so myself. I have quite the claws that allow me to grasp anything! I've been practicing on climbing trees but,I'm not good with heights. I can sort of swim,since my hair is short and I have powerful legs. Though,mostly,I'm a swift and sneaky fox!
Weaknesses? Pfft! I'm immortal! Nah,I'm just foolin' ya! Mother says I stick out like the northstar! I honestly must say I've never been great at hide n seek..
Family huh.. I can't really tell you about my family. I hardly knew my mother! What oh.. She's coming this way!
History? Origins? I can only tell you this. My mother was a prideful warrior of Riverclan,though had been killed by a rogue when I was a mere apprentice. I hope to avenge my fallen mother,and hopefully find out my father. For the rest of my family? I don't remember any litter mates.. Yet again I barely remember what I had to eat! Oh well.. It'll come back soon enough.
Previous memories...
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Re: Pepperpelt
by Thunderclaw November 29th 2013, 20:00
Cool. though you need to organize it and make it clearer, as in color code each topic, like this and this. Hope that helps 
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Re: Pepperpelt
by Guest November 30th 2013, 00:06
*pops out of nowhere after long absence*
Nice start!
Your character sheet has a unique format, although it would be nice if you put some of the pictures in a spoiler~~ ^^
Remember to never make your character a Mary Sue
Nice start!
Your character sheet has a unique format, although it would be nice if you put some of the pictures in a spoiler~~ ^^Remember to never make your character a Mary Sue
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Re: Pepperpelt
by BrokenClaw November 30th 2013, 12:17
xD thanks to all! Though,I'm not much of a format gal >.< I don't know how to do spoilers,and I actually like this format because it adds personality like Pepperpelt himself is in an interview.
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Re: Pepperpelt
by Thunderclaw December 2nd 2013, 21:03
...I never thought of it that way. Guuess it does bring life to the post. And to do a spoiler, click the small note pad Icon above where you post, it has a caution icon on it at the bottom right of that icon like this
Guuess it does bring life to the post. And to do a spoiler, click the small note pad Icon above where you post, it has a caution icon on it at the bottom right of that icon like this - See?:
- See? Easy.
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Re: Pepperpelt
by Frost December 3rd 2013, 04:19
Oh I do like the fact that you're like a snow leopard ;D
Snow leopards are so cool!
Interesting formatting though you ought to put pictures in spoilers! eg.
Snow leopards are so cool!
Interesting formatting though you ought to put pictures in spoilers! eg.
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[spoiler]picture url here[/spoiler]
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Re: Pepperpelt
by Thunderclaw December 3rd 2013, 13:40
It sure organized it better. It looks better and attracts the reader's attention more.
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