*Silvermoon*
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*Silvermoon*
Cat name: Silvermoon
Gender: She-cat
Age: 18 moons
Favorite warrior characters: Tigerstar, Scourge, Bluestar, Graystripe, Ashfur, and Jayfeather
Appearence: Silvermoon is a medium-sized grayish-silver striped tabby cat with a sleek, short, soft, and glossy fur coat that glistens in the sun. She has darker gray jagged stripes, sometimes almost black, all along her body. Her eyes are sea-green with an aqua-bluish tint to them, adding a unique quality to her eyes. Some days her eyes look more of a blue and somedays her eyes look more of a green because her eyes shift depending how she feels. She has a slim and slender body with a long tail and powerful legs, making her an excellent swimmer and a fast runner, but not as fast as a windclan cat. She has a soft white muzzle with a pink nose and a white chest. The insides of her ears are colored white, along with the tips of her paws and the tip of her tail colored a soft white.
personality: silvermoon is a very protective cat that is loyal to her clan and to the ones she cares most about. She is a bit timid around newcomers, but will eventually open up. She is definitely a very deep thinker with complex emotions, and often wonders about things no one else would, making her somewhat curious as well. Silvermoon, though, lacks some confidence in herself, making it difficult to tell how she feels, so she often keeps her thoughts and feelings inside, often wonders if she is good enough, though if a cat were to look deep enough in her eyes, they could tell that she definately has a complex nature. She is very clever and mature, and knows how to catch someone by surprise. Silvermoon has a very pure and kind heart, but it defiantly takes a lot of time and patience for her to open up to a cat and lend them her trust; she chooses her friends wisely, determining her true friends. When others are in need, or In danger, she does whatever it takes to help them, often completely forgetting her own needs, making her vulnerable and at risk for injury. She is very calm and relaxed, even when in the worst of situations.She treats cats with very much respect and does not get angry easily, however when she does, she never shows it
special traits: she has excellent reflexes, and is a fast swimmer. Her strong muscles in her legs make it easy to crawl/stalk in the shadows/tall grasses without making a sound, making her prey an easy target as well as her enemy. She can stay calm and collected in even the worst situations. She has sharp claws and fangs, making a blow to her target a painful one
weaknesses: she has a strong fear of being completely alone and being isolated/separated from the clan and betrayal. Sometimes she will lack enough confidence to be too unsure in herself, making her vulnerable to enemies, although she is working on this.
family: Father: Scarclaw- a large, completely black cat except a white patch of fur over his left eye in a "scar-like" shape. he has bright golden eyes that seem to stare into your soul with a cold gaze-unknown
Mother: Rainflower- a medium, solid dark gray she-cat with one white paw on her left front leg. She has light blue eyes, the color of the sky, that gives you a warm and gentle feeling when she looks at you-was killed
History
Silvermoon as a kit:
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The drawing c:
Gender: She-cat
Age: 18 moons
Favorite warrior characters: Tigerstar, Scourge, Bluestar, Graystripe, Ashfur, and Jayfeather
Appearence: Silvermoon is a medium-sized grayish-silver striped tabby cat with a sleek, short, soft, and glossy fur coat that glistens in the sun. She has darker gray jagged stripes, sometimes almost black, all along her body. Her eyes are sea-green with an aqua-bluish tint to them, adding a unique quality to her eyes. Some days her eyes look more of a blue and somedays her eyes look more of a green because her eyes shift depending how she feels. She has a slim and slender body with a long tail and powerful legs, making her an excellent swimmer and a fast runner, but not as fast as a windclan cat. She has a soft white muzzle with a pink nose and a white chest. The insides of her ears are colored white, along with the tips of her paws and the tip of her tail colored a soft white.
personality: silvermoon is a very protective cat that is loyal to her clan and to the ones she cares most about. She is a bit timid around newcomers, but will eventually open up. She is definitely a very deep thinker with complex emotions, and often wonders about things no one else would, making her somewhat curious as well. Silvermoon, though, lacks some confidence in herself, making it difficult to tell how she feels, so she often keeps her thoughts and feelings inside, often wonders if she is good enough, though if a cat were to look deep enough in her eyes, they could tell that she definately has a complex nature. She is very clever and mature, and knows how to catch someone by surprise. Silvermoon has a very pure and kind heart, but it defiantly takes a lot of time and patience for her to open up to a cat and lend them her trust; she chooses her friends wisely, determining her true friends. When others are in need, or In danger, she does whatever it takes to help them, often completely forgetting her own needs, making her vulnerable and at risk for injury. She is very calm and relaxed, even when in the worst of situations.She treats cats with very much respect and does not get angry easily, however when she does, she never shows it
special traits: she has excellent reflexes, and is a fast swimmer. Her strong muscles in her legs make it easy to crawl/stalk in the shadows/tall grasses without making a sound, making her prey an easy target as well as her enemy. She can stay calm and collected in even the worst situations. She has sharp claws and fangs, making a blow to her target a painful one
weaknesses: she has a strong fear of being completely alone and being isolated/separated from the clan and betrayal. Sometimes she will lack enough confidence to be too unsure in herself, making her vulnerable to enemies, although she is working on this.
family: Father: Scarclaw- a large, completely black cat except a white patch of fur over his left eye in a "scar-like" shape. he has bright golden eyes that seem to stare into your soul with a cold gaze-unknown
Mother: Rainflower- a medium, solid dark gray she-cat with one white paw on her left front leg. She has light blue eyes, the color of the sky, that gives you a warm and gentle feeling when she looks at you-was killed
History
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- History: just a lil background before we start c: - Scarclaw, Silvermoon's father, was always physically and verbally cruel towards Silvermoon. He criticized every little error she made, as if it were a big deal; Sometimes it was for no reason whatsoever. Her "little mistakes" resulted in yowling and hissing, as well as the claws from Scarclaw. His golden-amber eyes would give her a cold hard stare that would send shivers down her spine from head to tail. Most of the time, Scarclaw would sit on the tall ledge, his slender black body glistening In the moonlight, sharpening his claws. However, despite Scarclaw's cruel actions towards Silvermoon, Rainflower, Silvermoon's mother, was very gentle and kind with Silvermoon, giving her plenty of affection and warmth. Although, Rainflower was always too timid and afraid to say anything to Scarclaw when he criticized and harmed Silvermoon in anyway. Silvermoon always looked up to Rainflower, as her sign of courage, hope, and the one she most cared about.
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it was a cold, cloudy night and rain was surely on its way
Silvermoon was prancing around in the grass, chasing a cricket. A gentle breeze was blowing through the tall, thin grass. Silvermoon gave one last hard pounce and caught the now-crushed cricket between her paws. "Look mother! I actually caught the cricket this time!", Silvermoon proudly announced. Rainflower was focused on grooming her pelt when she her the small familiar voice of Silvermoon. She looked up to see that her young kit had caught a cricket for the first time. "That's wonderful Silvermoon! With a little more practice, you'll be an excellent hunter in no time!", Rainflower meowed. Scarclaw, meanwhile was sharpening his claws. He looked down from the ledge at Silvermoon, his cold, golden-amber eyes stared directly into hers. "Catching a small simple cricket is nothing, and is not worth any praise.", he spat out. "In fact, it is not even hunting, only a simple foolish game for a foolish cat like you.", he hissed. "You should be ashamed of yourself, you deserve no praise. If you want to see how a real hunt is done.......", he jumped down from the tall ledge, his long white claws delicately landed on the ground,"then let me show you" Silvermoon noticed a glimpse of what seemed like a smirk across Scarclaw's muzzle, revealing his unusually sharp fangs. Scarclaw sniffed the air for any prey that was in the path of the direction the breeze was blowing, making it an easy catch for him. As soon as he caught a familiar scent, he silently crawled towards the doomed prey. His charcoal-black coat all vanished under the cloudy night sky, all except his cold eyes and the white "scar" on his left eye. Rainflower's relaxed face turned into worry. she's only 4 moons old....., Rainflower silently thought to herself. Silvermoon turned her focuse to the direction Scarclaw was heading in. Directly in front of him was a small brown rabbit silently grazing on the grass, unknowing of the danger lurking nearby. Scarclaw drew out his long white claws, making them double in length. In a quick second, he lunged foward, digging his claws into the side of the rabbit. It squealed for a short second, and then fell silent. Scarclaw loosened his grip on the rabbit, his claws stained red. He picked up the limp rabbit between his jaws and trotted over to Silvermoon. "That", he said, "is how it's done." He then dropped the rabbit on the grass and jumped back onto the ledge. Silvermoon looked down at the innocent rabbit. I'm not good enough! I could never hunt like that!Tears slipped down the sides of Silvermoon's face. Rainflower immediately shifted to her feet and trotted over to Silvermoon, her tongue gently stroked Silvermoon's coat. "If you keep practicing, you can become as good, and even better, than Scarclaw.", Rainflower meowed as she continued grooming Silvermoon. Silvermoon looked up into the gentle sky-blue eyes of Rainflower. "You really think so, Mother?" Silvermoon started to purr. Rainflower nodded, but then noticed a familiar unpleasant scent when the breeze shifted towards the cats. Rainflower's eyes narrowed, and anxiety and uneasiness filled her. "Scarclaw!", She yowled, "the foxes" Silvermoon had no idea what was happening, but she could sense the danger and anxiety that Rainflower felt. "Mother what's happening?!", She cried. "I'm scared!" Scarclaw continued sharpening his claws, as if nothing was happening, ignoring the worried she-cat. Silvermoon could hear snarling and barking coming closer. "Scarclaw!" Rainflower hissed. Just then a large red fox jumped out right in front of Silvermoon, contiuously growling and snarling. Silvermoon yowled and cried; she was more frightened than she had ever been before. Rainflower lunged at the fox, hissing, and attempted to dig her claws into the fox. The fox sidestepped, causing Rainflower to miss her target and stumble across the ground. Her fur coat was matted and tangled. Scarclaw continued to watch, doing no intention of assisting his family. "Silvermoon, you must run! Run and never look back!", Rainflower yowled. The cats could hear more snarls and growls getting closer. "Hurry!", Rainflower cried. "But mother!", Silvermoon helplessly yowled. "No! Run Silvermoon! Forget about me! You being safe is all that matters!" Just then, another fox sprang foward and tightly gripped Rainflower's neck in its jaws. Rainflower yowled and hissed and screamed, trying to claw the fox. Silvermoon lunged out at the fox with all her strength, in attempt to claw the fox and free her mother. The large red fox from before had just then jumped in front of Silvermoon while she was in mid-air. It scraped and dug its sharp claws into her side, leaving a deep wound. Silvermoon yowled in pain as she was sent sprawling across the hard ground, the opposite direction from the foxes, Scarclaw, and Rainflower. Silvermoon weakly looked up as she saw Scarclaw just sitting there, watching the whole time, doing nothing at all. He was looking directly into Silvermoon's eyes, with that familiar cold gaze that sent shivers down her spine from head to tail. He had done no attempt at all to try to save Rainflower or Silvermoon. Silvermoon suddenly flooded with anger and betrayal. Tears slipped down the sides of her face. how could you?! she cried. Silvermoon knew she had no other choice but to run, run for her life. Silvermoon used her last bit of strength and got up and ran. She could hear Rainflower's words echoing in her head. run Silvermoon, run, run run run over and over again. She could hear the screams and howls and the hissing of her mother behind her. Then suddenly, it fell silent. Silvermoon stopped and turned around immediately."Mother? MOTHER!" Silvermoon screamed. She knew she couldn't turn back now. The thought of whether Rainflower was still alive or not stabbed Silvermoon in the back. Red liquid oozed from Silvermoon's side. Heavy rain started to fall. Silvermoon, turned back around and started to run again, seeking for shelter. Silvermoon found a large tree by a river and decided to recover there for the night. After a quick drink, Silvermoon trotted under the lifted roots of the large tree and curled up. She thought about her mother and Scarclaw. She wondered why he just stood there and watched the fox attack them. She wondered why didn't the foxes attack him? The last thing Silvermoon remembers was seeing the fox's jaws clamped around Rainflower's neck, it's teeth stained red. She wondered if her mother was still alive and remembered that one last cold glare Scarclaw gave her. The way he just looked at her.........Silvermoon was having trouble remembering whether she saw a smile spread across his face.......those long white fangs.Then she started to wonder what happened to him or if he was still alive. The thoughts clouded her head, but didn't want to know the answer to any of them. She didn't ever want to see Scarclaw again, or remember the cold glare he gives her. She didn't want to remember the unusually sharp claws. Finally Silvermoon fell asleep. The next morning, a riverclan warrior found Silvermoon under the tree roots and decided to take her in. From there on, Silvermoon has been in Riverclan ever since, and now she is 18 moons c: Though, the memories of Scarclaw still haunt her and she often wonders if her mother is really out there somewhere, but she also wonders if Scarclaw is too, and that is enough to make a shiver go down her spine.
Silvermoon as a kit:
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The drawing c:
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Last edited by Silvermoon on June 27th 2013, 15:32; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Updates)
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Re: *Silvermoon*
Wow, Silver! That's amazing! When I read your history I kinda nearly cried. (Yes, I cry. Murder me.) I really like it and have no suggestions!
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I cried as well for the history.
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Good job mah broski c: It's very well-written. And I like your cat drawing too. Just don't forget to capitalize Jayfeather.
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Thanks guys, and thank you all for reading! Sorry it made you cry though I have now updated it and made the changes, also includes adding the pictures
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I love how you described your character, Silvermoon. I cried at your history, it was so beautiful!
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