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About Dewdrop
ABOUT DEWDROP!
Name- Dewdrop
Nicknames- Dewy, Dewp
Gender- Female
Age- 15 moons
Appearance- Dewdrop is a small Dark furred Poked-Doted she-cat with beautiful crystal blue eyes. She is lithe, fluffy and very small because she was a runt. She also has a pink nose, thorn sharp claws and at night her fur glows a milky white.
Personalty- She is sweet, kind, loyal and very wise
Skills- even thou she's small, she has some advantages. She can climb trees faster, fit through small spaces, run a lot quicker than usual, and has a acute sense of smell
Weaknesses- gets lost, and can NEVER reject a cat in need
Favorite Fresh-kill- SUSHI!!COOKIES!! mice, Squirrels, and....... very ......... pretty birds hehehe... nummie in muh tummie
Attack power- 15,000
Mate- Rainfire ( it's a long story )
Kits-
Turtle- Dark brown tom with crystal blue eyes. ( lives in the Med.cat den with Dewdrop )
Adopted Family:
Father- Runningriver- long limbed pale gray tom with ice blue eyes ( loner )
Mother- Bunny- pure white she-cat with amber eyes ( Kittypet )
Sister- Fluffy- pure white she-cat with ice blue eyes ( Kittypet )
Clan- Moonclan
Past Clans- Riverclan
Rank- Medicine Cat
Mentor- Runningriver ( Learned how to be a Warrior )
Med.Cat Apprentice- PM if Interested (Moonclan only)
History- Runningriver paced through twolegplace, skidding through alleys and up fences trying to reach his way back to his mates fence. "I'm never gonna make it in time!" he gasped, trying to catch his breath. He jumped in a nearby Dumpster, hoping that the group of rouges didn't notice him.......... TO BE CONTINUED!
Nicknames- Dewy, Dewp
Gender- Female
Age- 15 moons
Appearance- Dewdrop is a small Dark furred Poked-Doted she-cat with beautiful crystal blue eyes. She is lithe, fluffy and very small because she was a runt. She also has a pink nose, thorn sharp claws and at night her fur glows a milky white.
Personalty- She is sweet, kind, loyal and very wise
Skills- even thou she's small, she has some advantages. She can climb trees faster, fit through small spaces, run a lot quicker than usual, and has a acute sense of smell
Weaknesses- gets lost, and can NEVER reject a cat in need
Favorite Fresh-kill- SUSHI!!COOKIES!! mice, Squirrels, and....... very ......... pretty birds hehehe... nummie in muh tummie
Attack power- 15,000
Mate- Rainfire ( it's a long story )
Kits-
Turtle- Dark brown tom with crystal blue eyes. ( lives in the Med.cat den with Dewdrop )
Adopted Family:
Father- Runningriver- long limbed pale gray tom with ice blue eyes ( loner )
Mother- Bunny- pure white she-cat with amber eyes ( Kittypet )
Sister- Fluffy- pure white she-cat with ice blue eyes ( Kittypet )
Clan- Moonclan
Past Clans- Riverclan
Rank- Medicine Cat
Mentor- Runningriver ( Learned how to be a Warrior )
Med.Cat Apprentice- PM if Interested (Moonclan only)
History- Runningriver paced through twolegplace, skidding through alleys and up fences trying to reach his way back to his mates fence. "I'm never gonna make it in time!" he gasped, trying to catch his breath. He jumped in a nearby Dumpster, hoping that the group of rouges didn't notice him.......... TO BE CONTINUED!
Last edited by Dewdrop on June 6th 2013, 01:05; edited 25 times in total
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Re: About Dewdrop
Very good, for a first timer!
I like how you worded your appearance, and I can even imagine your cat right in front of me! I recommend putting some pics, and maybe 'bold it out' a little, if you know what I mean
Luv it!
I like how you worded your appearance, and I can even imagine your cat right in front of me! I recommend putting some pics, and maybe 'bold it out' a little, if you know what I mean
Luv it!
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Re: About Dewdrop
This kind of sounds like my cat. Small, fluffy, underestimated, but deadly. Skyclan cats have to be small though for the trees. Well, so do Riverclan.
Gosh, I'm ranting/spamming. Overall, I like it. Way better than my first one (All the way back in 2011. ) I anticipate your history!
Gosh, I'm ranting/spamming. Overall, I like it. Way better than my first one (All the way back in 2011. ) I anticipate your history!
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Re: About Dewdrop
Thank you both! I'm doing MAJOR editing thou so, make sure to check by it again if you want !
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Re: About Dewdrop
Very good! :O And I love your name! I use it in roleplays sometimes ^.^
Lemme introduce myself. I'm Rosethorn, Shadowclan's crazy, phyco medicine cat. :3 Enjoy the site!
Lemme introduce myself. I'm Rosethorn, Shadowclan's crazy, phyco medicine cat. :3 Enjoy the site!
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Re: About Dewdrop
Very good, Dewdrop! The history is quite long but very interesting! Also, I like your father's name.
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Re: About Dewdrop
I like what you have so far. The history is a different though in block form like that its a bit hard to read and makes it seem less interesting. I think it would be a good idea to break the history up into paragraphs to make it more appealing to readers. But that's just my suggestion.
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Re: About Dewdrop
Do you know how to add it to a signature?
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Re: About Dewdrop
How you add what? A hyperlink? Obviously, since i have 5 in my own signature.
Just copy and paste whats in the code box into your signature.
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[url=http://www.warriorcatsforum.com/t3009-about-dewdrop#88119]Dewdrop's Character Sheet[/url]
Just copy and paste whats in the code box into your signature.
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Re: About Dewdrop
THANKS SO MUCH!!
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Re: About Dewdrop
No problem. It's what I'm here for. Any other questions while I'm on?
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Re: About Dewdrop
Nice character sheet Dewdrop. You should add me some where. "Riverclan's favorite sushi-eating whale."
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Re: About Dewdrop
Maybe, your first day in the clan you got too close to the water and shamu was threatened and tried to eat you. Then you avoid sushi afterward.
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Re: About Dewdrop
Good idea! ........ but, does that mean no sushi?!
ME LOVE SUSHI!
ME LOVE SUSHI!
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Re: About Dewdrop
You well you could try to eat shamu but stay away from the water. He overpowers you there
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Re: About Dewdrop
I'm going to edit the character sheet...... so come back and look at it later today!
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Re: About Dewdrop
Tsk tsk forum chatting Ah well, the rules aren't exactly forced upon you during this period.
I like your history, it's got character. Yours is more like telling a story rather than recording a documentary. A few random capital letters and wrong punctuation here and there, but I won't point them out. They don't diminish any of the work, anyway.
I'd suggest elaborating your flaws a bit, and explain a little bit about life as a kittypet: is that how you first discovered sushi? Did it take long to eat used to whole, raw fish? How did you learn to swim?
Just some stuff so you can build up a bit
I like your history, it's got character. Yours is more like telling a story rather than recording a documentary. A few random capital letters and wrong punctuation here and there, but I won't point them out. They don't diminish any of the work, anyway.
I'd suggest elaborating your flaws a bit, and explain a little bit about life as a kittypet: is that how you first discovered sushi? Did it take long to eat used to whole, raw fish? How did you learn to swim?
Just some stuff so you can build up a bit
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Your history is, uh, unique. I like it though! I wish I could do my own but it'll have to wait for summer. But if anyone needs help or anything, I'd love to do anything. ^^
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Shamu wrote:Nice character sheet Dewdrop. You should add me some where. "Riverclan's favorite sushi-eating whale."
Wait. Who said you were our favorite?
Anyway, I like your character sheet Dewdrop! I'd add some more detail to your flaws and personality, though
Torrentheart approved
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