To be Cheesey

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Warrior Name: Cheesefur
Nicknames: Chiz(zy), Chees(e)y, Cheese, Cheeseypelt, Chez, Chezzy, Chess
Clan Affiliation(s): Masqueraders leader, formerly AwesomeClan leader, even more formerly ShadowClan warrior
Age: 26 moons
Mate/Kits: None and not looking
Family: Ginger (Mother), Cheddar (Father), Snowdapple/Snowflake (Sister)
Mentor/Apprentice: Most of her warrior skills were taught by ShadowClan; however, because she was already close to the age of a warrior, it was useless to assign a mentor. Her apprentice was Specklepaw, later Specklefern (during early RPGs).
Guilty Pleasures: Wasting time, ranting for hours, ignorance and generally being a wet blanket.
Personality: Easy-going, laid back and sarcastic. A hesitant and indecisive leader who is also very impulsive and sensitive. Oftentimes, she will make decisions in a snap and regret them immediately after. She finds exuberance in taking risks, though tends to be very cautious along the way. Shares a mildly sadistic sense of humour with her sister, which is what brings them together. As an outsider, she has been exposed to a great deal of different social and physical situations, allowing her cognitive abilities to develop and creating a useful ability of come up with creative solutions during tough times. Although one may argue that she is not as intelligent as other leaders, she appreciates a clever mind and doesn't fancy impostors.
Favourite Main dish: Chicken Pad Thai with fresh chive and bean sprouts and a sliver of lime.
Favourite Side dish: A nice big platter of deep fried calamari with homemade mango-ketchup
Favourite Dessert: Chocolate peanut butter lava cake with spongey outside and delightfully salty filling
Appearance: Cheddar-coloured tabby with a white tipped tail and green eyes the colour of kaffir lime leaves. Has a white underbelly and a fluffy tail that mimics a plume of feathers. Her build is plump but muscular with big bones, which gives her strength but also makes her slower than an average cat. She has long whiskers to compliment her broad size, and big ears that catch sound easily (if she is not ignoring them). Has a triangular nose the colour of faded roses, though it is spotted with slight black dots like a sprinkle of pepper. Does not blend in well in any surroundings.
Pet Peeves: Animal dung, and cats who throw away the first slice of bread because they think no one will eat it (ahem). She basically dislikes nearly everything but never shows a lot of hate for anything.
Enhanced Traits: She has unusually sharp claws which she regularly sharpens herself, since she uses them to slice meats and other tough substances. Her strength/weight is both an advantage and a disadvantage. While her stealth is exceptional, coming from a ShadowClan background, her pelt disables the use of this particular skill, as it cannot blend in with any surroundings no matter how silent her steps. As a former kittypet, she is not as strong as a rogue or Clan-born cat, so her attack power is 22,500 (before it became N/A).
Weaknesses/Fears: In everyday life, her weak spots include running and powerful stenches. Her nose is quite sharp, from her days in the kitchen, and any particularly putrid scent will throw her off. Has a strong distaste towards balsamic vinegar but it is a secret weakness only. Her fears include tight spaces, darkness, and generally being surrounded by the unknown.
Quirks: She has a fetish for really soft things, especially warm moss and/or kit fur. Has a quick tongue for arguments, though she doesn't spark them often. Only close friends will know that she has a taste for offending others. She has a hard time letting go of the past, causing her to feel regret and shame for moons after an incident. For some reason, her memory consists of only fragments of the past and close to nothing from the present. She forgets minor things quickly and used to be scolded for it. Also, a strange skill she acquired was the ability to mimic a dog's bark.
History: She started out as a neighbourhood rogue named Cheesy, wandering the streets, alleys and forests close to Twoleg homes. She made friends with kittypets and their owners gave her food. Her parents were pure-bred kittypets, but they were taken to some cat therapy for obese animals. Her sister, Snowflake, was a kittypet, too, except the owners of their parents gave her away to another family as a kit.
After a while, she found a nice middle-aged lady who always fed her delicious tidbits that were not bits of canned tuna or pellets for once. Apparently, the woman was a chef who quit her career as a restaurant owner and wrote recipes from home. Cheesy became her food critic (and leftover-eater), making sure all the recipes were 5-star. She learned many delicious secrets there. Her sister lived close by so they met with each other on nice afternoons, sharing tongues and bragging about their lives to one another.
A perfect life doesn't last forever, though. Eventually the woman fell down the stairs and received a permanent hip injury. She could not move around the kitchen and cook any more. Since she lived alone, her doctor made her join a care centre for physical therapy, and she never came back. The house was sold and Cheesy disappeared, trying to find the care home before leaving to find her sister.
Snowflake was glad that her sister finally came to join her, as she kept saying her pampered life was amazing. The owner didn't want her, though, because she was some street cat who smelled suspiciously like a restaurant dumpster. Snowflake was offended. When Cheesy left, she did, too. They ventured off into the forest together, though they each took their own paths.
Snowflake wanted to follow the river. She stumbled across the RiverClan border, where she was greeted by Nightfrost, the late deputy. She was accepted and claimed the warrior name Snowdapple. Cheesy followed the Thunderpath and met Hazeldust, a senior warrior of ShadowClan. They became friends. When the two sisters met at a Gathering again, they agreed on the fact that they didn't like living separately. They started a Clan of compromises, inviting their close friends and strangers who fell off nearby cliffs. It was called AwesomeClan, the only word they could think of to describe their amazing life. It wasn't perfect, but at least they knew nothing could tear it down at last.
Oh, but they were wrong. The recent new-leaf brought on pollution from the Twolegs, as their activity began to expand into the Clans' territories. Forced to carry the blame, her Clan migrated closer to the Big City, finding the Tersus Crystal along the way. Some left for other tributaries along the way, some found the river too fond to leave. As they neared the Big City, the refugees saw the pollution had come from a nearby nuclear power plant that had leaked, causing the Twolegs to scatter and no longer interfere with Clan activity. However, the area was immensely contaminated, and could not be inhabited until the Tersus Crystal was set in the plant. Now, CheeseStar gratefully leads the rogues in a safe environment. They call themselves the Masqueraders, fearing judgement from the Clans and therefore hiding their true identities. Her sister is still by her side though they still laugh at really strange things together. Everyone finds it hard not to feel like they're living on a bombshell waiting to detonate, awaiting the next turn of event.
If you'd like to see the old history, look at Snowy's.

Pictures

Cheese(kit):

Cheese(paw):

Cheesefur:

CheeseStar:

Ginger - CheeseStar and Snowdapple's mother. She was born in a litter of four, being the first kit. Her pelt is a soft, dusty white colour much like a down comforter, with faint ginger patches. Her love for her kits was balanced with her love for cat treats and soft beds. CheeseStar inherited her green eyes, but Ginger's take on a more olive shade. Snowdapple got her mother's patches, but because she's boring and dull, her patches are grey instead of ginger, to match her personality

Momma:

Cheddar - The father of the kits. His origins begin as a rogue, where he was found in the alley of a grocery store. He was a muscular cheddar coloured cat with white patches and blue eyes. CheeseStar inherited the dazzling hue of his pelt. A kind father, he was a creative storyteller who taught the kits well in the short time they spent together. His somewhat demoting jokes may or may not be the reason for CheeseStar's like of dark humour.

Poppa:

Snowdapple - CheeseStar's sister; a slender white she-cat with dusty grey patches and bright green eyes. She has a very shy but creepy personality; most of the time she's listening, watching, but not speaking. They share the same humour and love to laugh at people they hate together as a pass time. A softer tone than her sister, she has the ability to fade into the background (both literally and figuratively). A better description of her is here.

Sassy Sissy:

Note: When I created this, I didn't intend to "steal" any ideas; I tried to make it original. If you think you deserve credits, let me know. I took some stuff off the basic layout (like age, mate, etc.) but if you're going to tell me I just copied it from someone else and my efforts were a waste, I think I have some right to curse you; May all your ice cream spoil once it touches your lips!

it's bad quality though. someone scribbled on it too and i can't find one that is not weirded.

Hi cheeseStar! Who wants food? Free food belt. Take and go!

:Pepsi : :

:Pepsi :

sweets belt! brought to you by CheeseStar

Maybe they shouldn't have munching smileyies attachted to the food.

i thought about that, but there aren't any food smileys that don't have eating people on them. even the bouncing sushi has this little pink guy on top.

I think they are cute. I like the little people.

i updated my first post on this topic! it says a lot of stuff... maybe i should cut down on the amount...

Little people? What are people talking about?!

i updated it recently... i added stuff today. ^^ please review and just enjoy the little tweaks i put in it. i put my history in a comic, but it's too small.

I like it! Good job!

oh and from a long time ago... Blossomheart, they meant the little guys on top of the food smileys! when people post things like food belts the people come with the food. o.O it's weird. and thanks, Fang.

updated! and just to spread the word... recently Snowlily told me it's not double posting if you reply after 24 hours.... i'm not sure how that would work, but it will i guess. o.O

i added my family history and yeah.. edited some mistakes and added some more pics. hope you guys like it because i'm not sure how to improve it... any suggestions?

I like the title 'To Be Cheesey'! It made me laugh... XD

Ha ha Cheesestar

Ha ha Cheesestar

Those new pictures are cool c:

"Does not blend in well with any surroundings," lol. I love the pictures!

o.O i thought this topic was dead. but thanks i made this almost a year ago and seriously, when i read through it now, it is really kinda embarrassing. i'm probably going to edit it soon (that's a lie; summer) because Hazeldust doesn't come on anymore and neither does my sister.

Nice CheeseStar! Hahahaha, I laughed at the first part of the history. You're funny. ^-^

i edited it a little, so it seems more mature than whatever i wrote a year ago o.O the yellow is a bit weird, but just highlight it to read it please

the pictures have been changed and some wording is different. ^^ links have been added as references. it hasn't been reviewed before, so the main reason i edited it was for a review.

if you think i'm a hypocrite in any way (i have reviewed a few profiles), please note that everyone is a hypocrite and by denying that fact, you are only making it true. thanks for reading this post and even if you don't read my profile, at least you clicked on the topic thumbs up to you!

Lolol Nice note.

Your Cheesepaw picture doesn't work, and in your "Ginger" description, "Snowdapple got her patches", I think it was cut off? Or you forgot to finish your sentence.

At any rate, very original! ;D

Cheesepaw's picture works fine >_>

Haha I love the history! Humorous.
Thr pictures won't open for me, not sure if it's a bug or just my device O.o

Haha, so colorful xD Good job Cheese!

i have changed the history :O and twisted a few things like my personality. i realized i was describing my character, not me. i gave my character a few traits i would like to have along with some i do have x) i also added Clan Affiliation. i don't think i'll be adding a relationship chart o.O

other than that, i just polished it so it looks prettier i need to fix the font colours between Age and Mates but there aren't enough reds with visible differences. i'll find one soon, i hope. til then, it is simply there.